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    Re: The cherry blossom kunoichi.

    This is a very decent peice, it takes me time to get used to reading stories like this. But you need more proofreading and better editing. A few punctuation mistakes make this a very difficult read for that reason. They are numerous and to tell all would take awhile but I am sure if you read it again you would spot them.

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    yes i still to work on some thing like editing and other stuff and with a little more work i can make this into a book one day,Thanks for all the help
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