i walked to the empty school and looked for her. i finally saw her walk up. she had her hair shiny, with black and with striped tights, a mini skirt, a leather band jacket, a lacy corset top with the necklace, and silver earrings. she walked up smiling, and she handed me a black rose at the same time i pulled out her red one. we paused for an odd silence without emotion, and then burst out in laughter. she bit her lip, and grinned," where do you want to go?"
"how about mcdonalds and then we go see prince caspian?" i was obviously joking, but i saw the color fade and her grin disapeared.
"i was joking!"
"oh!, im sorry!" she was nervous again. i was amused. i halfway planned this date. i brought gummi worms, and i stopped by a soda fountain buying her any thing she wanted. i had told her to wait to eat it though, then i led her a nearby cemetery and laid down a black blanket, setting everything up. there we ate and talked happily. then when the food was gone,it was totally dark outside. we both laid down, and she pulled out her ipod, and we listened to all of the music in the dark. i didnt care that i would be late home, or that we would kiss at the end or not, or anything dumb like that. it was one of the first times i could clear my head with some else with me. we just laid there listening to the lulllaby from Pan's Labyrinth..
Cool, I just finished reading all five lol. Fast huh? So good so far, there's no twists and turns and for some reason that's good once in a while. I have to admit that I am ignorant when it comes to people with goth and emo lifestyles, so hopefully this story is a good example to provide me with some insight.
lol I was expecting the dude to be turned to a frog by now. xD
'Cause you give me something / That makes me scared, alright / This could be nothing / But I'm willing to give it a try / Please give me something
'Cause someday I might call you from my heart
Ahh I know what you mean Legend. I was goth for some time and I've had too much bad experience with fake emos in Latvia, so I'm kinda a bit annoyed that EmoNightmareRose classifies these people like that ^^ If not the mentioning of that, i'd think they're just different and I like different, or I would have actually thought that the girl might have some wichery with herPlus I was totaly "O.o", when EmoNightmareRose said that a goth and an emo together would be a bad thing O.O Really duntget that... I'm too far from all that to connect
And there are two more parts now Legend!!!
Oh and now I see that the red rose had a very cool effect in the story ^^ Nice work with the roses EmoNightmareRose!!! It was very amusing ^^ I would have never thought of that.
And the date was kinda nice but ummm... well there is too strong of a connection between the two for the first date? But it's just unromantic me againYou must be very romantic in contrast with me
Originally Posted by Lasura
Ahh I know what you mean Legend. I was goth for some time and I've had too much bad experience with fake emos in Latvia, so I'm kinda a bit annoyed that EmoNightmareRose classifies these people like that ^^ If not the mentioning of that, i'd think they're just different and I like different, or I would have actually thought that the girl might have some wichery with her
And there are two more parts now Legend!!!
Oh and now I see that the red rose had a very cool effect in the story ^^ Nice work with the roses EmoNightmareRose!!! It was very amusing ^^ I would have never thought of that.
And the date was kinda nice but ummm... well there is too strong of a connection between the two for the first date? But it's just unromantic me again
sorry, i didnt mean to lable anyone. and i dont think there's anything wrong with being emo, im emo. i didnt mean a goth and a emo as a bad thing, just that the other peers at school's reaction. the first date, their immediate romanticism and closeness, is to automatically show their connection together. sorry if it's really complicated, im a bit vague about writing about feeling of other people. lol. and yeah i am a pretty romantic, im just like that automatically. dunno why.
*cries* i wish i could write like you!!!! im not just saying that! my fanfics are crap!!!waahh!!!
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