Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored

Analee31 · Feb 05, 2009, 09:25 AM

this is just a short drabble i came up with when i was studying for my final and i was bored as hell so here we go.....

"You're beautiful."
"Thank you."
"You are offended by my presence?"
"......"
"You should not be afraid. You're my wife now, my property."
"......."
"You are beautiful."
"Thank you."
"I love you."
"Thank you."
"I love your hair. It's the color of the sky."
"Thank you."
"I love your boy. Muscular but so slender."
"Thank you."
"I love your skin. So tender and soft, like rose petals."
"Thank you."
"I love your lips. So red and attractive."
"Thank you."
"I love your eyes. Gray and sparkling, like crystals in a cave."
"I love you."
"Thank-"
"But do you love me?"
"......."
Years Later
"You are beautiful."
"I know. But you don't have to remind me every time we have dinner."
"You are offended by my presence?"
"No."
"You are not afraid anymore?"
"Obviously not."
"You are beautiful."
"I figured after the first time."
"I love you."
"Right."
"I love your hair. It's the color of the sky."
"I'm thinking of changing it's color."
"I love your body. Muscular but so slender."
"I'm anorexic, you idiot."
"I love your skin. So tender and soft, like rose petals."
"Like I can actually believe you lay around feeling up flowers."
"I love your lips. So red and attractive."
"Like rose petals?"
"I love your eyes. Gray and sparkling, like crystals in a cave."
"I know. I look in the mirror when I wake up every morning."
"I love you."
"Me too! Which is why I've been with you for the past ten years. Now will you stop saying all this crap and actually show me you love me!"
"Feisty and saucy, just how I love you."
"Quiet and gets me annoyed, just how I love you."
"Electra Snow Uchiha."
"Itachi Uchiha."
"I love you."
"And I might as wel say it, seeing how you won't stop. I love you."
"Good."
"Dumbass."

blackrose92 · Feb 06, 2009, 07:43 AM

wow....XD this is really amusing lol

i liked reading it alot lol^^

Blue Wolf · Feb 06, 2009, 10:44 AM

XD! Thought it'd just get repetitive, but by the time I read through all of it, there was several funny sentences in it, I thought it was funny.

Lol

hanyougirl2010 · Feb 06, 2009, 02:46 PM

it's pretty good. i liked it*smiles*

huh?*reads signature* hey that's a song from camila!

Analee31 · Feb 08, 2009, 11:06 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by hanyougirl2010

it's pretty good. i liked it*smiles*

huh?*reads signature* hey that's a song from camila!

haha yea it's from the song "solo para ti" i love camila!!

Kiani Haki22 · Feb 08, 2009, 05:15 PM

that is funny like really, at first I was confused but at the end I got it lol. Good work there.

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Analee31 Newbie Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: most boring place ever Posts: 40 Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored this is just a short drabble i came up with when i was studying for my final and i was bored as hell so here we go..... "You're beautiful." "Thank you." "You are offended by my presence?" "......" "You should not be afraid. You're my wife now, my property." "......." "You are beautiful." "Thank you." "I love you." "Thank you." "I love your hair. It's the color of the sky." "Thank you." "I love your boy. Muscular but so slender." "Thank you." "I love your skin. So tender and soft, like rose petals." "Thank you." "I love your lips. So red and attractive." "Thank you." "I love your eyes. Gray and sparkling, like crystals in a cave." "I love you." "Thank-" "But do you love me?" "......." Years Later "You are beautiful." "I know. But you don't have to remind me every time we have dinner." "You are offended by my presence?" "No." "You are not afraid anymore?" "Obviously not." "You are beautiful." "I figured after the first time." "I love you." "Right." "I love your hair. It's the color of the sky." "I'm thinking of changing it's color." "I love your body. Muscular but so slender." "I'm anorexic, you idiot." "I love your skin. So tender and soft, like rose petals." "Like I can actually believe you lay around feeling up flowers." "I love your lips. So red and attractive." "Like rose petals?" "I love your eyes. Gray and sparkling, like crystals in a cave." "I know. I look in the mirror when I wake up every morning." "I love you." "Me too! Which is why I've been with you for the past ten years. Now will you stop saying all this crap and actually show me you love me!" "Feisty and saucy, just how I love you." "Quiet and gets me annoyed, just how I love you." "Electra Snow Uchiha." "Itachi Uchiha." "I love you." "And I might as wel say it, seeing how you won't stop. I love you." "Good." "Dumbass." __________________ ~Ya no tengo corazon Ni ojos para nadie Solo para ti~
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blackrose92 Otaku Join Date: Jul 2007 Location: SENIOR!!!! TEXAS USA =] Posts: 471 Thanks: 61 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts	Re: Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored wow....XD this is really amusing lol i liked reading it alot lol^^ __________________ i am who i am because im just that great you are because of who you are because you are a loser Thank you so much SasuraiHell and Gwen
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Blue Wolf Otaku Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Nova Scotia Posts: 233 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored XD! Thought it'd just get repetitive, but by the time I read through all of it, there was several funny sentences in it, I thought it was funny. Lol __________________ RPG Character: MetalGarurumon. Level: 86.
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hanyougirl2010 Otaku Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: in the forest with my koi Posts: 394 Thanks: 4 Thanked 6 Times in 6 Posts	Re: Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored it's pretty good. i liked itsmiles huh?reads signature hey that's a song from camila! __________________
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