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    Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored

    this is just a short drabble i came up with when i was studying for my final and i was bored as hell so here we go.....

    "You're beautiful."
    "Thank you."
    "You are offended by my presence?"
    "......"
    "You should not be afraid. You're my wife now, my property."
    "......."
    "You are beautiful."
    "Thank you."
    "I love you."
    "Thank you."
    "I love your hair. It's the color of the sky."
    "Thank you."
    "I love your boy. Muscular but so slender."
    "Thank you."
    "I love your skin. So tender and soft, like rose petals."
    "Thank you."
    "I love your lips. So red and attractive."
    "Thank you."
    "I love your eyes. Gray and sparkling, like crystals in a cave."
    "I love you."
    "Thank-"
    "But do you love me?"
    "......."
    Years Later
    "You are beautiful."
    "I know. But you don't have to remind me every time we have dinner."
    "You are offended by my presence?"
    "No."
    "You are not afraid anymore?"
    "Obviously not."
    "You are beautiful."
    "I figured after the first time."
    "I love you."
    "Right."
    "I love your hair. It's the color of the sky."
    "I'm thinking of changing it's color."
    "I love your body. Muscular but so slender."
    "I'm anorexic, you idiot."
    "I love your skin. So tender and soft, like rose petals."
    "Like I can actually believe you lay around feeling up flowers."
    "I love your lips. So red and attractive."
    "Like rose petals?"
    "I love your eyes. Gray and sparkling, like crystals in a cave."
    "I know. I look in the mirror when I wake up every morning."
    "I love you."
    "Me too! Which is why I've been with you for the past ten years. Now will you stop saying all this crap and actually show me you love me!"
    "Feisty and saucy, just how I love you."
    "Quiet and gets me annoyed, just how I love you."
    "Electra Snow Uchiha."
    "Itachi Uchiha."
    "I love you."
    "And I might as wel say it, seeing how you won't stop. I love you."
    "Good."
    "Dumbass."
    ~Ya no tengo corazon
    Ni ojos para nadie
    Solo para ti~

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    Re: Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored

    wow....XD this is really amusing lol i liked reading it alot lol^^
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    Re: Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored

    XD! Thought it'd just get repetitive, but by the time I read through all of it, there was several funny sentences in it, I thought it was funny. Lol

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    Re: Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored

    it's pretty good. i liked it*smiles*

    huh?*reads signature* hey that's a song from camila!

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    Re: Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored

    Quote Originally Posted by hanyougirl2010 View Post
    it's pretty good. i liked it*smiles*

    huh?*reads signature* hey that's a song from camila!
    haha yea it's from the song "solo para ti" i love camila!!
    ~Ya no tengo corazon
    Ni ojos para nadie
    Solo para ti~

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    Re: Dinner Conversation: short story written when i was bored

    that is funny like really, at first I was confused but at the end I got it lol. Good work there.

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