The Free World

The next morning before the sun came up they set out to save Serina, but along the way Jorgan stopped them, "Hey where you two headed?" "Well we are going to save Serina!" "Let me go i have unfinished business with Serina."

it was only after they arrived did they notice the man following them, with a great leap and a quick slash Damien through him to the ground, "Who are you ?" "I am the greatest assassin i was hired by Hector to make sure you never make it inside." Well i guess you failed now die!" and he lunged his spear straight through his heart and left him for dead.

they finally arrived at the gate to the south of the fortress it was then they overheard the guards talking "Did you hear what the boss did to that girl we captured i heard he beat her til she could barely breath." in that moment Damien threw his daggers and killed both angry with knowing his sister is in pain "DAMN YOU HECTOOOORRRR"

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They snuck through the gate without making a sound it was when they reached the throne that they saw Hector beating Serina with a wooden club, "Stay back Damien i know she is your sister but we have to take out the guards first."

after a few moments they dragged her away thats when Damien dashed in sword ready and came close to finally killing Hector. (the sound of swords clashing can be heard in the hallway) "Hector i will kill you for harming my sister!!!!!" "Well well it looks like big brother is here to save his sister come alone did you?" (all of a sudden Laura came in with Serina) "Lets go Damien leacve him for now!

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what happens next??

When they reached the town of the white light Damien rested and asked his siter if she was ok "Oh Damien i'm fine i am stronger than you think!" "I know it just pissed me off that you let yourself get captured on purpose, i mean what were you thinking!"