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    A gateway to a better life

    Hey!! Adriana and me came up with a story and decided to write it down!!! We hope you like it! Don't forget to comment. pls. We decided to post each character's pic so you can get more involved in the story!

    Kairin (17)-http://img201.imageshack.us/img201/667/charuwr6.jpg

    Hailey(16)-http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/7537/2006090531614hs1.jpg

    Alexis(16)-http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/9281/normalanimegirlda3.jpg

    Amber(16)-http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/742/1185757890589pt7.jpg

    Lauren(112)-http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/4631/elves32fb2.jpg

    Meredith(16)-http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/797/normalnormal1132495243bxz4.jpg

    King Jacob(38)-http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/5593/codegeass015ug9.jpg

    Prince Aikka(20)-http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1034/ragnaboybythimbleee3.jpg

    Tyler(16)-http://img165.imageshack.us/img165/4743/guys211wb7.jpg

    Dylan(18)-http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/1296/normalnormal0607di8.jpg

    Nathan(17)-http://img252.imageshack.us/img252/6937/guys68xu7.jpg

    Zachary(16)[right]/Eric(16)[left/glasses]-http://img401.imageshack.us/img401/2962/normalht329kc9.jpg

    one of the mermaids-http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1517/mermius8.jpg

    Adriana will post the first chapter.
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    Chapter 1:

    *If he wasn't so damn loyal to my stupid dad, he might actually be hot* thought Kairin as her eyes met those of Aikka's.

    He kept staring at her for a while as though he knew Kairin was thinking about him. King Jacob was considering Prince Aikka's agreement. If he accepted the agreement, becoming allies with the Fire Kingdom would have its advantages. Evaluating the facts, the Fire Kingdom has a powerful army with the strongest weapons. They would really come in hand in a battle. Without any persuasion he agreed to Prince Aikka's deal.

    King Jacob's parents were killed by a lethal disease, so he had to take all the responsabilities of the Water Kingdom when he was fifteen. The Kingdom is surrounded by clear blue water and crystal-like waterfalls. The island is surrounded by some houses built on elavated rocks. In the middle of the island lies the majestic castle where King Jacob lives, with his two daughters, 17-year old Kairin and 16-year old Hailey. In the depths of the water live hundreds of mesmerizing mermaids. They can hypnotize you with their beauty and make you face your greatest fears. In the deep forest next to the King's castle live wizards and witches with the ability to perform powerful spells.

    Back at the castle Hailey was always prefered to her sister Kairin. Their father wanted Hailey to be his heiress even though she was the youngest. Kairin had always been jealous of her younger sister since their mother died, thirteen years ago

    Aikka was the prince of the Fire Kingdom. He thrusted his most hidden secrets to King Jacob and thus King Jacob revealed his secrets as well.

    Two months passed by, King Jacob discovered Prince Aikka's horrible plan, when he accedently heard Prince Aikka revealing his plan to one of his men. King Jacob was angry with rage and went to confront Prince Aikka.

    Kairin was just walking down the corridor when she heard some voices arguing at each other. She was dying with curiosity and went to overhear.

    "How dare you betray me like this?!" King Jacob exclaimed.
    "If you weren't so preoccupied with your precious daughter Hailey you would have noticed what was happening right under your nose." answered Prince Aikka with a calm evil voice.
    "So all those secrets you told me about your Kingdom were lies?" asked King Jacob with astonishment.
    "Do you actually think I'd be so dumb to tell you my Kingdom's real secrets!" said Prince Aikka, "Now that I know the Kingdom's weaknesses, I now can take over easily."
    "I won't let you." said King Jacob
    "All I have to do os overthrow you and your youngest daughter. Infact I've already gathered my army to attack your Kingdom which will soon be mine." said Prince Aikka with a smirk.

    King Jacob hastily performed one of his incantations and ran to save his daughters. Luckily he found Hailey within a few seconds. He quickly tried to explain what ha happened. Inspite of Hailey not understanding anything he continued talking about his plan of escaping the Kingdom. He asked her about the whereabouts of Kairin. Unfortnatly Hailey didn't know where her sister was, so he decided that they should meet in the enchanted room in tem minutes so that he can go look for Kairin, and if he doesn't come in time she should leave without him. Altough she didn't understand how they would escape she agreed and went their own ways.

    When he found Kairin he told her to come with him.

    "I don't want to. I heard what happened and I plan to join Aikka." exclaimed Kairin.
    "What are you talking about? How can you do this to your own father?" questioned King Jacob.

    He felt a tight grip around his wrist. He turned around to see who it was.

    That's chapter 1!Now jessie will post chapter 2 someday!!

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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    * Nice Story * * Cheers * * Horray * * Cheers * Keep up the good work

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    Thanks for the comment w1nd1n6s!! I'm glad you like it.

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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    i'll add to jessie!!thanks a lot for your comment!!
    Visit my and jessie's story on this link!!hope you like it all

    http://www.animeonline.net/f101/gate...er-life-31158/

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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    by the way you Have Pretty Sets of Characters there * cheers *

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    thanks a lot!!glad you like them!!it took us a lot of time to decide!!
    Visit my and jessie's story on this link!!hope you like it all

    http://www.animeonline.net/f101/gate...er-life-31158/

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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    WOW!!!!i love this story already!!write more please!!!!!i want to know wat happens next!!!please hurry!!!

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