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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    hey guys sry for keeping you waiting!but we will post chapter 3 soon!!sorry again but we were busy with school!!
    Visit my and jessie's story on this link!!hope you like it all

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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    Great stories and looking forward to next chapters

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    thanks for your commet!we promise not to let you wait!but we are very very very very busy!!hehe
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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    thats alright we did wait for the last one pretty long didn't we.....^.^

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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    Well, take your time and think about your story then you can wrote it all here.

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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    good news!!finally i'm going to post chapter 3!i know that it's very late but we were very busy with school.soo here it is.hope you all like it.

    Chapter 3

    She was lying in the bed covered in a thick blanket. She woke up at the roaring of the wind.She got up from the bed and looked out of the window.
    *Where am I?*
    She only saw huge buildings. The sky was dark, all covered in grey clouds. Lightning bolted from the sky and Hailey shrieked at the sound of it. The old woman entered startled from Hailey's shrieks.
    "Who are you? Where am I?" demanded Hailey.
    "My name is Elisa Higurashi. My husband and I found you lying in the park, thought you were hurt and we brought you home so you could rest. We didn't find and ID on you so we couldn't call anyone to come and get you."
    Dazed by the news, Hailey kept staring at her.
    "What's wrong, darling? Are you hungry?" asked Elisa
    "No, no I'm fine," answered Hailey. After a moment Hailey's tummy made a grumbling noise.
    "Oh yes. I can truely see that you're not hungry." said Elisa in irony, she turned around to go get Hailey something to eat.

    The old woman entered the room with a batch of homemade cookies and a glass of fresh milk. She put them on a small table beside the bed, then sat down on a rocking chair. As Elisa came in, Hailey blushed at the sight of the food and then sat on the bed. She thanked the old lady as she grabbed a cookie.
    "Do you mind if I ask you a question?" asked Elisa
    "Sure, go ahead." answerd Hailey as she took a sip from the milk.
    "What's you name, dear?"
    "My name? Oh my. I....I don't know!"
    "What? You can't remember it? Do you know at least where you live?"

    "The soldiers have invaded every house in the kingdom. All men were taken as soldiers. The others; well....women and children taken as servants and slaves." said Aikka to Kairin as he entered in the chamber.
    "That means that every thing is going as planned." answered Kairin as she hastily closed her mother's locket.
    "Anything wrong?"
    "No, no everything's fine."
    "Oh ok, but you know if you need anything at all, you know I'm here for you" he said whilst he walked towards Kairin and sat down beside her.
    Kairin lifted her head up to him and gave him a heart warming smile as a thank you. She rested her head on his shoulder, then he took her into his arms.Aikka slightly brushed his lips onto hers and as he pulled his face away from hers, she took it into her hands and kissed him back tightly.

    So that's chapter 3!hope you all enjoy it!and don't forget to comment pls cause we really appreciate it.
    Last edited by Adriana; Jun 27, 2008 at 06:08 AM.
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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    wow it did take a long time!!and it was really short!!! i want more!! i love this story!!

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    Re: A gateway to a better life

    i'm really glad you love it,XD and you're right renn we really did take a long time!! sorry, but i hope that in the next few weeks we do write more since there are the christmas hols, so don't lose hope

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