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    I have been working on this idea since I was 6. It's mostly action, but there are small bits of drama.

    Genre:Action/Drama

    Intro: in 2018, a group of terrorists attacked the Pentagon. These terrorists didn't carry weapons, but were able to control the elements. As they killed everyone inside the Pentagon, a group of five more elementalist's appeared in their path. Each one controlled a different element: Wind, Earth, Water,and Fire. The fifth however, controlled the most powerful element: Lightning. These five elementalist's easily overpowered the 30 terrorists. Now known to the world, the elemetalist's began to teach their skills to the public. The only element that could not be taught, was the lightning element. This element appeared in random person's. As the years passed, elementalist's became as normal as the public.

    Season 1 Plot: After escaping a lab in the middle of the desert, Kotaro, a young man with no memory of his past who can control lightning, travels around the globe, searching for who he is. fighting his way through the terrorist organization Kuro oni, (The Black Demon) Kotaro makes new friends: Brock, the leader of an earth element gang, Kira, a water elementalist bent on revenge, and Yasei no kaze,(also known as Wild wind) a wind elementalist .who wishes to see peace. He also meets new enemies: Motaro, A man identical to Kotaro who wishes him dead, Kairo, a fire elementalist super soldier who works foe Kuro oni, and Ma-fū, Wild winds brother and Kuro oni assassin. In his travels, Kotaro will face danger, decisions which may lead to life or death, and his own blood in a race to find out who he is.

    The episodes will be posted in this thread. their will be at least two a month.

    Thank you for reading.

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    Re: The Godai's Call

    Quote Originally Posted by Kotaro7914 View Post
    I have been working on this idea since I was 6. It's mostly action, but there are small bits of drama.

    Genre:Action/Drama

    Intro: in 2018, a group of terrorists attacked the Pentagon. These terrorists didn't carry weapons, but were able to control the elements. As they killed everyone inside the Pentagon, a group of five more elementalist's appeared in their path. Each one controlled a different element: Wind, Earth, Water,and Fire. The fifth however, controlled the most powerful element: Lightning. These five elementalist's easily overpowered the 30 terrorists. Now known to the world, the elemetalist's began to teach their skills to the public. The only element that could not be taught, was the lightning element. This element appeared in random person's. As the years passed, elementalist's became as normal as the public.

    Season 1 Plot: After escaping a lab in the middle of the desert, Kotaro, a young man with no memory of his past who can control lightning, travels around the globe, searching for who he is. fighting his way through the terrorist organization Kuro oni, (The Black Demon) Kotaro makes new friends: Brock, the leader of an earth element gang, Kira, a water elementalist bent on revenge, and Yasei no kaze,(also known as Wild wind) a wind elementalist .who wishes to see peace. He also meets new enemies: Motaro, A man identical to Kotaro who wishes him dead, Kairo, a fire elementalist super soldier who works foe Kuro oni, and Ma-fū, Wild winds brother and Kuro oni assassin. In his travels, Kotaro will face danger, decisions which may lead to life or death, and his own blood in a race to find out who he is.

    The episodes will be posted in this thread. their will be at least two a month.

    Thank you for reading.
    intresting reading

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    Re: The Godai's Call

    Episode 1: The worlds shadow



    The great plains were eerie that night, as if a dark force had engulfed the land. The only sound to be heard was the wind rushing through the grass. The insects had begun to slow their scavenging speed for food and were retiring to their dens. The plains were living things themselves, slowing down to rest their weary souls. Then they were tore from their slumber before it even begun.

    The sound of dogs and humans running, no, chasing something approaching the tree in the middle of the plains. The Runner was sprinting through the plain, breathing heavily and trying desperately to increase his already quick pace. His pursuers were closing in on him and the lone runner knew it. He quickly turned around without slowing down and extended his arm. An intense beautiful beam of blue erupted from his fingertips.
    Although beautiful, as the beam hit one of the runner’s pursuers, he was blasted back onto his chest. One of his allies, a man dressed entirely in white stopped next to him and pulled out a small mobile computer . The man in white connected a small cord to the computer and the man’s neck. A second later, the man in white took the computer and left the dead man where he was.

    As the man in white was doing this, the others had caught up to the runner. He had been hit with a blunt bat made of rubber, causing him to sink to his knees. The runner had failed his mission, and was now captured. As he thought of what he had failed, he was hit again with the hard rubber bat and fell to the ground.

    The man in white caught up with his allies and whistled a high note as he saw the runner on the ground. His forehead had a large cut the size of a miniature ruler. He quickly plugged the computer into the runner’s neck. The wound started healing almost instantly, although it only stopped the bleeding. One of his allies turned to his side and let out a low moan. The man in white looked in his ally’s direction and let out a similar moan.

    A tall man was approaching them. He had long silver hair that shined in the moonlight. He wore long black jeans but no shirt; however there was a long black trench coat in his hand. As he approached 2 of the 3 men stood still and saluted him. The 3rd however stayed on the ground. The man in black approached him now. He stopped in front of the man in white and took out a small metal orb from underneath the trench coat.
    The white man then stood up and saluted, “Private Ross reporting for duty officer Kairo sir!” Kairo now took notice of the runner on the ground. He quickly knelt down and took the runners right arm. The orb he carried was placed on the floor as he flipped the runner over so his head was even with his. Kairo then picked up the orb and placed it on the runner’s right shoulder. The orb then expanded and covered the runner’s right arm, forming a red and black gauntlet.

    Kairo stepped up and turned to the Private. “He’s pretty ripe close to death don’t you think Ross.” Kairos voice held no humor, he was dead serious. Ross glared at Kairo; he thought he did a good job healing the runner to his current state. “He’s going to live, don’t go up in flames Kairo.” Kairo shot a warning glance to Ross. “Pull off another remark and I will turn you to barbeque Ross, you’re already on thin ice and that won’t help you against a fire elementist!”

    Ross stepped up and waved his hand in a dismissive gesture. As he stood up, Kairo started walking toward an approaching vehicle. Ross began to move toward the vehicle too but a small spark appeared and the grass around him and erupted in a ring of fire. Ross made the grave mistake of jumping backwards into the fire behind him. The tongues of flame caught his clothes and spread through his entire body. One of the soldiers went to try and douse the flame, but Kairo stopped him and gestured him to the vehicle. As the soldiers left with the captured runner, Ross’ screams carried on through the plains.

    Part 2

    Kairo stepped into the tablet chamber with an even sourer mood then when he was sent on his last mission. He had no idea who or what he captured; only that it was an elementalist. “Why do they always call me to go after their experiments, I’m an assassin, not a baby sitter.” Kairo grabbed the nearest packet of SS tablets and popped off the rubber stopper. In five seconds he had swallowed the whole packet and was walking out of the chamber. As a Super soldier, he needed he needed to consume one packet of SS tablets a day or risk his body consuming itself.

    As he was leaving he spotted something out of the corner of his eye. He turned to see the runner he had just captured on a wheeled cart. He hadn’t noticed it before, but the runner had silver hair that glistened with the light in the room just like his. The runner showed signs of build in his muscles, but nothing surprised Kairo more than the cut on the runners head. When he last saw the runner, the cut had been large even though it had been stanched. Now, not an hour later, it was just a scar. The wound had healed at a miraculous rate. “Who is this kid they sent me after, is he an escaped experiment?”
    Kairo spied on the cart the runner was on till it was out of sight.

    He waited for a while, and then ran toward the direction of the cart. The walls were gray with the only direction being an occasional sign. This made it harder for Kairo to remain inconspicuous while following the cart. At the last turn the cart entered the eastern laboratory, causing Kairo to stop in his tracks. The eastern lab was off limits to all but the scientists and officers. Although he was an officer, Kairo had specific instructions to never enter the eastern lab. Kairo Grunted “This kid must be more important then I thought”.

    Kairo turned to leave when he heard someone call his name on his communication badge. He stuck his hand into his left pocket and pulled out a small device replicating the insignia of inter-com, a circle with 3 indentions toward the middle. “This better be good, you’re interrupting my work.” A small static ridden voice emerged from the insignia. “Slaven wants to see you in the eastern lab immediately.” Kairo began to reply but instead hung up.

    “Why me” he thought as he turned down the hall. “Why does he want me in the lab?” he made 2 left turns then a right and came upon a large door. The door opened as he stepped toward it. What was inside the lab surprised him. He expected test tubes, small machines and scientists in lab coats. What he saw here was entirely different.

    The lab contained one large machine that looked like a needle with a plunger. The walls were windows that must have been transparent on one end. Only people on the inside could see out of it. The runner was strapped to a small table where the machine was aimed at. In a box made of a super protective glass Slaven gestured him over. Unknown what else to do, Kairo stepped in the box.

    2 scientists in padded lab coats were busy working on the controls in the box. Slaven turned toward Kairo and showed him a sly grin. Kairo’s face remained blank as he watched the machine begin to power up.

    Part 3

    The large machine gave a large groaning sound as the lights on the back of the canister lit up. Soon the tip of the plunger glowed red, and a beam of light shot out, striking the runner strapped on the table. Kairo looked at Slaven and was about to ask a question when the plunger began to shake.

    The Scientists were struggling to control the machine, pressing buttons and pulling levers on the console. The red beam changed to a greyish hue. Kairo saw what was coming and pulled Slaven into the hall. The scientists were locked in. the machine exploded and the scientists were turned to ash.

    Kairo and Slaven walked back into the room. Slaven was restless. "If he's dead, then we have no hope of completing our objective." he kept saying. As the smoke cleared Kairo made out two figures on the floor. Kairo moved closer to the figures as Slaven continued to check if the machine was all right. As Kairo reached the two figures he noticed something peculiar about each of them. One was the runner that had been on the table, he didnt have a scratch on him. The other one on the floor was..... Also the runner! Kairo took a pace back. "What the hell!?" he said.

    Episode end

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    Re: The Godai's Call

    Episode 2: The Shadows Awakening



    Kairo Stepped inside cell block C. After the event in the eastern lab, Slaven had gone ballistic. He had ordered the two bodies on the floor to be moved to the cell block, and restrained on the wall. Scientists were working around the clock trying to figure out how this could of happened.

    Kairo stopped in front of the cell being occupied by one of the runners. He was more worried about the results of the scanning. It had showed that the two runners had the same weight, were the same height, had the same color hair and eyes, and this was accurate by every decimal point that was generated.

    There were slight differences however. One of the runners had long silver hair that reached the back of his neck, while the other runner had short spikey hair. Another surprising feature was that each had the metal gauntlet of Lendal* Kairo had put on the original. The only different feature was there was a small crack in the gauntlets.

    Kairo stared at the runner in the nearest cell. It was the one with the short spikey hair. The scientists working on him were extracting another blood sample. They had sent blood samples from the other runner, now they just needed this ones blood. "This one puzzles me." This was Slaven, who had just approached Kairo.

    Kairo turned to Slaven. "What so strange about this one? I dont see anything different." Slaven turned to the runners cell. "Unlike the other one who's wounds heal at a normal pace, this ones wounds are healing at three times the pace of a normal human being. We have given them names as well. this one is called Kotaro, do you wish to know the others Kairo?" Kairo shrugged and turned back to the cell.

    Kairo was about to leave when he caught sight of a movement. It was only a slight movement, one from the runners arm, but it was a movement no less. "Slaven, this one..um....Kotaro, he just...." He trailed off as the runner suddenly awoke and broke the steel bars restricting him. The scientists inside the cell ran toward the door.

    Slaven took out his com-badge. "Security! Report to cell block C NOW! Come armed, but no lethal weapons!" As Slaven was calling security, Kairo was running into the cell. The runner saw him coming and began to run toward the wall. Kairo brought up his hand and a ball of fire erupted from his palm. The runner known as Kotaro had reached the wall and was trying to punch his way through it. "What an idiot." said Kairo as he threw the fire ball.

    But the fire never touched Kotaro. At the last moment, Kotaro had dodged the ball, and jumped through the hole it had made in the wall. "What the.. That IDIOT! He is on the 20th floor!" Kairo ran to the hole in the wall and looked down. He expected to see Kotaro flat on the floor, dead, but what he saw was completly different.

    Down on the ground was a large crater. In the center of it was Kotaro, crouched on the ground from the landing. Kairo couldnt hold his shock. "What the hell!" He screamed. Unknown to Kairo, Kotaro was just as surprised as him. He was also expecting to be dead.

    Kotaro didnt move till he heard the sound of an approaching mob. Quickly, he ran toward the gate. It was guarded by three soldiers. As Kotaro approached them, they prepared to capture him. Kotaro saw this and decided to gamble. As he reached the gate, he stiffened up and jumped. The soldiers guarding the gate tried to jump up and catch him, but he had jumped higher than the gate.


    Kotaro landed lightly on his feet, completly baffled. once again before he could piece together what just happened, he heard the sound of a mob running toward him. Without any choice, Kotaro ran out into the open world.

    Episode End

    *Lendal Is an Organic Metal that grafts to the skin of the wearer. It is used as armor, and is weightless, although it still applies a great amount of force when used to hit someone. It also has The ability to Suppress lightning.
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    Re: The Godai's Call

    Episode 3: The Shadow's Skill


    Kotaro walked for two days in a desert without food or water. His body was dry and he was weak. Kotaro for the tenth time that day cursed his luck. Although tired, he continued to trudge through the sand, hoping to find shelter, food, and water.

    Kotaro had time to think the past few days. The first thing that puzzled him was why he was in a lab in the middle of the desert? Unable to find an answer for this, he put it to the side. The second was how did he survive the fall from the building, and the last was how did he jump the eight foot tall gate? He decided to test himself, and jumped up into the air. He went about twelve feet into the air before coming down. He deduced that the people in the lab must have done something to him.

    Kotaro also learned that he didnt remember anything about himself besides what he was wearing, and his name. Also when he came upon a tree in the desert, he punched it, propelling his whole hand through the tree. This was also deduced as a lab experiment in his mind.

    "Where can civilization be? how far in the desert was I? And where in the world am I?" Kotaro said to himself as he came over a small hill. Kotaro then stopped in his tracks. A small humming noise was coming from behind him, and getting louder every second. Kotaro turned to see four dark figures approaching the hill. The humming noise now turned into a mechanical growl. As the dark figures got closer, Kotaro saw what the were. Four men on dark grey dirtbikes were closing in on him. Kotaro turned and began to run. The cycles were closing in. Kotaro turned and stopped. There was no way he was going to be able to out run four dirtbikes.

    As the bikes got to five feet, they began to circle Kotaro. Kotaro noticed that these men werent in the same garb as the soldiers at the lab. One cycle suddenly turned toward Kotaro and streaked toward him. The man on the bike extended his arm and hit Kotaro with his arm. Kotaro fell to the floor as the bikes stopped circling and stopped, still in a circle. The riders got off their bikes and took off their helmets.

    As they approached Kotaro, one of the riders lifted his hand. The sand under Kotaro burst in a stream and sent Kotaro into the air. Before he fell back to the ground, the sand covered him from head to toe, leaving just his head un-covered. The one controlling the sand now approached Kotaro. He was Caucasian with short brown hair and what looked like a broken nose. One of the riders now turned to the Caucasian. "Hey Sandman, This guy looks pretty young." The one called Sandman smirked. "Kuro oni must be sending in kids as spies now." he said. Sandman now began to walk away. After three steps, he quickly pivited on his heel and threw a punch at Kotaro's face.

    The punch was perfect, hitting Kotaro on his left temple. Sand man now began to remove the sand from Kotaro. Kotaro felt himself hit the ground. He also felt something else. something Boiling inside of him. Kotaro began to stand up. Sandman saw this and began to laugh. "This kid has some fight in him." Sandman began to walk back to his bike. "Kill him." He said

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    Re: The Godai's Call

    Hello,

    Just so you dont waste your time wating, I wont be writing anymore until I find out what people think of this. I mean no offence, but unless some people like it, I wont bother posting it online.

    Any questions or comments, just post them on this thread.

    Thank you.

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