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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    Ok, so this is now my out of story color.

    Problem: I can't think of a name for this mysterious girl... I've tried and tried but I got nothing that I like so far, so I'm going to do what a good author never should do and ask you who are still reading this to help me come up with a name for her.

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    Well this was a good chapter.....but not as good as the others. So keep on writing I want to read more.

    Girls Name: Selen Morrose......idk or Mika Akemi(that means bright beauty the last name)

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    You didn't like it because it wasn't an action chapter. Either that or I'm starting to lose it.

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    There may not have been any action in this chapter, Corvus, but that's not a bad thing. Every good story needs build up and from what I've read so far, this is buildin' up ta b quite a story. U have my props man. As far as a name goes, have u ever looked a historical, legendary, or mythological figures. They often serve as inspiration for me when I'm tryin' ta come up wit a name.

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    joe I am a nerd as far as those names are concerned and I've considered most of them many times but nothing's fitting.

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    Hmm.. Oh I just read your story so far and it's really good, I like it alot.. I'm trying to think of a name you'll like but I'm not sure exactly what type of name your looking for.. common, unique?...

    Well I was thinking Summer Lynia but then again I'm not sure if It's what you are looking for.. Amanda Lynn... Although neither have a last name.. I'm sorry if I'm of no help to you..

    What about Michelle?... Michelle... Michelle Lambyrd?(Lambyrd being the last name)... or something else?
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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    well Im terriable with names but I really liked the way you wrote the last chapter and I agree with Joe that a story needs development as for the name Im not even going to say any thing cause it takes me hours to come up with a decent name

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    Scuicide, I think that was prolly the most confusing thing anyone's ever said because you're a joe too.. :P

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