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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    Sorry to get to this so late. I have been off site for awhile, and I'm just getting back into the swing.

    This is incredible. It held me rapt. Imagine my disappointment when it ended. You get better and better. I love the way you write. I love descriptive writters... I love it when I can actually see it all in my head.

    As Oliver said "Please sir, I want some more".

    ******

    How about something like Orchidea for the last name (Italian for Orchid), since her eyes are a purple shade.

    How about Destiny for the first. Sounds kinda neat, he's Fate, she'd be Destiny. Since they say Fate and Destiny go hand in hand... well it kinda works.
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    Ahaha I like it!!!! YAY!!!! Umbriel!

    As glad as I am to finally have a name the only thing that is crossing my mind is, why didn't I see that when it obviously fits so well? However, I'm not going to take it as it's evolved into something much more complex then being so simple. (no offense)

    -goes away to some dark room lit only by the shallow light of a timid lamp in a corner where he sits and begins to scribble. Furious pen scratches create new life in a world not yet abandoned but almost forgotten.-
    Aka I'm writing again!!!
    YAYA!!!
    post will come soon.
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    ... and join my rebellion against time.

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    Quote Originally Posted by Corvus View Post
    Ahaha I like it!!!! YAY!!!! Umbriel!

    As glad as I am to finally have a name the only thing that is crossing my mind is, why didn't I see that when it obviously fits so well? However, I'm not going to take it as it's evolved into something much more complex then being so simple. (no offense).

    No offense taken.

    Seems a shame to waste a perfectly well thought out character name... Since you will no longer be having need of it, I think I will keep it in mind for a character in one of my stories.

    Keep writing buddy.

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    More of the story will be comming today hopefully.

    ... and join my rebellion against time.

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    Have you finished anymore of the story? I'm sorry I've not been around as much, but I had hoped to be able to enjoy more of it.... *sighs* Oh well, I'll check back when I can. See you around my friend.

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    Re: Hearts and an Emptied Revolver. (HER)

    I don't even know if you get on anymore but if you do and you still have more of your story feel free to post it :]

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