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    Re: Horror Story, "Don't laugh at me"

    wow that was short but never the less, it was good, kinda sad and what not but good job!! is this your first story????

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    Re: Horror Story, "Don't laugh at me"

    wow that other chapter of the story was awesome scary but very good i think u should become a poet

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    Whoa!! I really love the story.... Your a really cool one Short but meaningful! Hope you could make more! I'm very excited to see your other stories... But what happen when Christina was about to stab the knife in Lily's throat? Thats the only part im being confused... Well just thanks for your the short story and i'll hope you'll make more
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    hey nice story!altough the second chapter was a bit confusing!soo the first part of the second chapter was not real but a dream lilly had?so in a way its cristina's fault that lilly died?don't know!i didn't understand that part sry.
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    Re: Horror Story, "Don't laugh at me"

    Yes in fact christina being mad at her made here die. Sry if it was confusing you see lily died of fright.ok?^^

    thank you all for the comments^^
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    yes yes now i understand!!good story though!!keep it up!
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    Re: Horror Story, "Don't laugh at me"

    Ummm... well the idea is just great!!!!!!!!!! Wonderful work... Though I think you should make the reason why Christin should be mad a bit... bigger, if you really kill Lily ^^

    Actually I couldn't even understand what happenned in that audidtion... and that really, really spoiled the whole story. I think you should make that part longer. And you should make Christin actually say that she is going to have her revenge on Lilly and make it so that there would be a reason for Christin to totally freak out.

    Oh, and the part when you stopped the dream was a bit odd, I don't know how to fix it though... and it was ok when I read the last lines- all became clear ^^

    Otherways... I really like this, thank you for posting this, loved reading it and I hope to see more from you ^^ cheers!!!!!!!!!!

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