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    Re: I Love You...NOT!!! (I.L.Y.N.)

    Ily and the security guard, both of their mouths wide open in shock, just stood their looking at each other like a hunter and a prey waiting on who is going to make the first move.
    “What’s going on Ily?” asked Ray as she slowly walks toward Ily.
    Ily looks back at Ray and Adel “DON’T come any closer you idiot…!”
    “Huh!? Are you on with that stupid prank of yours again” ignoring Ily’s word, both Ray and Adel walks towards the bathroom door. Ily tries to stop Ray, but to no avail, as both girls sees something that would traumatize them for the rest of their lives.

    The security guard, bear naked with his security cap on his head, holding a “play doll”, watching some kind of porno flick on a portable TV, doing something… perverted.

    Still in the same position, just looks at the girls with mouth and eyes wide open, frozen in embarrassment, while the girls literally fainted to the agonizing scene they just witnessed. Ray slowly regains her composure and held the door knob, bowing apologetically to the security guard, and slowly closes the door. She looks back at Ily with a shocked expression on her face and said “What the hell is wrong with this place…?”

    Suddenly, the bathroom door opens, the security guard, half naked putting his clothes on, “Trespassers, no students are allowed in this place!” said the guard with a furious and embarrassed look on his face, Ily held Adel’s hand and ran out of the room after seeing the guard, leaving Ray behind. Seeing that both of her so-called-comrades left her, Ray tries to run away also, having a hard time keeping up the pace because of her sprained ankle “You IDIOTS, leaving me behind!!!” shouted Ray. “Come back here!!!” shouted the guard right on Ray’s tail as the guard is still trying to put his clothes on.

    Ily and Adel stopped by into a small library, both trying to catch their breath, as Ily looks through the hallways securing their safety.
    “*pant*pant* Ray… we shouldn’t have left her…” said Adel holding her chest.
    “I’m sure she’ll be fine” said Ily looking back at Adel. Suddenly, Ily notices that some books are about the fall over on top of Adel, Ily runs toward Adel as he tries to move Adel away from the falling books, but he suddenly tripped and accidentally pressed some sort of switch by the bookcase, making them go through the other side of the wall, a secret passage.
    “Ow ow… that hurts” said Ily holding the back of his head, “Adel-chan, are you ok?” as he looks at Adel.
    “I’m ok…” said Adel as she picked up her glasses and puts it back on. “What is this place?” said Adel as she stood up looking around through the lightly lit room. Ily stood up and slowly walks towards Adel, but suddenly the floor that they were standing on opens up, causing both of them to fall through a series of slides, bringing them to an unknown underground base.

    Back with Ray, the security guard finally caught Ray holding her arm escorting her towards the exit. “Eh… this place is off-limits, you shouldn’t be here” said the security guard at Ray, who is still embarrassed on what happened, “I-If you don’t tell anyone about what you just ‘saw’, I won’t report you to the office” said the guard looking straight, avoiding eye contact with Ray, while Ray slowly walking with her cane seems to have aggravated her sprained foot a little, stayed quiet the whole time. As both of them stayed quiet, someone suddenly started whistling a popular song that is heard throughout the hallways of the dormitory. The guard and Ray stopped in the middle of the hallway, as they looked around, while the whistling seems to start echoing throughout the place.
    “…” the guard tries to talk, but no sound came out of his mouth, he held his throat as he kept trying to bring out words from his mouth, but to no avail. Ray looks at the guard, as she tried to talk “…” but no words came out. Both of them looked at each other, as the whistle of the person gets louder and louder, and slowly became violent.
    “(What the hell is going on? Why can’t I produce words or make any sound?)” Said Ray on her mind, as she looks around the place. Suddenly, the liquid that came out of the walls of the dormitory slowly formed a large person behind the security guard. Ray looks back seeing the liquid, somewhat shock, tries to warn the guard, as if trying to say ‘Behind You’, but the words just won’t come out, Ray then pointed behind the guard, the guard slowly looks back, but… it was too late, the large person, holding a huge butcher knife, cleaves the guard in half. As blood oozes throughout the guard’s body splattering some on Ray’s face and on her uniform. Ray, shocked on what she saw just looks at the huge person with a big grin on his face. She screamed. Again and again she screamed, but no sound was coming out from her mouth, the only sound you can hear is the whistle that seems to have become violent, the cleaving sound of the huge man, and the splattering blood through the guard’s corpse. After cleaving the guard’s body in pieces, the huge man turns his eyes towards Ray. Ray, slowly steps back, as the huge man slowly walks toward him, Ray then smashed the cane on the huge man’s face, breaking the cane in the process, causing the man to flinch a little, giving Ray the opportunity to run. The huge man looks at Ray running throughout the corridor as he wipes the blood on his face that was caused by Ray, the huge man trembled and gave out an eerie smile, as his whole body, turns to a liquid substance once again.

    Ray continued on trying to run throughout the corridors trying to find the exit, as she kept on crying, and agonizing in pain, still in shock over the murder that had happened right in front of her. She reaches her limit and trips causing her to fall down on her heels.
    “(I’m going to die, I’m going to die! I don’t want to die, I don’t want to die)” Ray cowers in fear while thinking to herself “(please anyone, anyone, please…)” she covered her face and she tried to shout with all her might “Save me!!!!!!” Ray notices that she can produce words again, as she sat up holding her throat with tears falling down her cheeks, “I can talk again”. Suddenly a loud noise is heard in front of Ray. Ray in fear slowly crawls back away from the noise, and then the person came barging through the corridors of the dormitory, Daniel, as he sees Ray covered with blood. “Ray… wh-what happened?” asked Dan as he slowly walks towards Ray. Ray with a scared look, snapped out of her expression and began crying wildly, as she tries to walk over to Dan, crying on his shoulders.
    “Calm down… what’s going on, why are you covered with blood? Where’s Ily and that other girl?” asked Dan. Before Ray could even speak, a whistle begins to envelop the hallways once again. Ray in shock looks at Dan, and tries to say something.
    “(What are you saying?)” Dan said but without a sound, as Dan notices this, he held his throat trying to make a sound, Ray hits Dan’s chest, as Ray starts crying and kept saying something, Dan finally figured out what Ray was saying.

    Run.

    Dan carried Ray on his back and started running towards the exit, but suddenly, the huge man appeared in front of where Dan and Ray is heading towards to, stopping them on their tracks, Dan shocked at what’s in front of him, stopped on his heels, Ray begins hitting Dan on the back telling him ‘Run, Run, Run!’, the huge man raised his butcher knife and slashed down towards the students, but Dan evaded it by a hair, and ran away from the huge man.


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    Re: I Love You...NOT!!! (I.L.Y.N.)

    ehem ehem (3/4) getting the hang out of it, but my writing's getting alot crappier than before... ugh... i need to knock my head on the wall and wake up...

    Chapter 4(continuation)


    Dan continued running, and when he was about to turn to a corner, suddenly slipped on a puddle of water, causing him to drop Reina. Dan regained his composure and stood up but suddenly notices someone in front of him. It’s the huge man with his butcher knife raised, about to cleave Dan in half. Reina on the side jumped towards the huge man’s leg and used the knife she picked up earlier and stabbed the huge man’s feet, causing the huge man to flinch and fall backwards. Dan hurriedly picks up Reina to his shoulders and started running once again. The huge man got up and takes out the knife that is stuck on his feet, with a furious look, roared like an angry lion through the hallways of the dormitory.

    “I……………….Gonna…………………K ill………….That……Girl……..” said the huge man, as he slowly walks toward where the students ran off.

    After a few minutes, Dan and Reina are by the second floor, inside one of the dormitory rooms hiding catching their breath.

    “Wh-What was that about…? What is going on…? I-I-I don’t understand it at all…” said Reina, still shocked on everything that has happened.
    “Calm down… we’ll get through this… I’m sure of it…” replied Dan, as he watches through a small hole through the door, looking by the hallways.
    “Daniel, I’m scared… I don’t want to be here, I don’t want to be here… please… I want to go home…” said Reina as she suddenly grabbed Dan’s shirt. Dan hugged the trembling Reina trying to calm her down, but suddenly.

    Whistle.

    Reina hugged Dan tighter as the whistle gets louder and louder, while Dan looks on the small hole. Dan then notices the huge man by the stairs, walking, looking for both of them, as both students, try to hold their fear intact, and seeing the man slowly, walking, looking, walking. The huge man passed by the room they were hiding on, while the whistle kept going. Daniel, seeing that the huge man didn’t notice them gave out a huge sigh, securing their safety.

    Dripping water is heard through the room.

    Reina looks over where the dripping water was coming from, and then suddenly a shocking figure appears, the huge man is behind both of them. Dan, who’s still looking through the hole, hasn’t noticed the huge man. The huge man raises his butcher knife in the air. Reina shocked on the person in front of her kept saying to herself ‘Move Move’, and then with all her might, she pushed her body towards Dan, evading the upcoming knife that slashed down on them. Dan notices the huge man behind them while getting pushed by Reina, Dan then notices that they’re heading straight to a window, he was about to stop Reina from running towards the window, but it was too late, they crashed through the window, and fell out of the second floor, falling towards the middle courtyard of the dormitory.

    “(We’re finally outside, we’re finally going to escape this nightmare)” Reina said on her mind while she looks back at huge man just standing by the broken window they crashed through. Reina then looks over to the ground they’re about to fall off too, and then was shocked at what she just saw.

    ‘H-How?!’

    The huge man is waiting for them on the courtyard grounds with a huge grin on his face. He raised his left arm up, catching Dan by the neck, which causes Reina to fall over and roll by hitting the nearby wall. The huge man begins to strangle Dan, while Dan gasping for air tries to fight the huge man back, punching and kicking his huge arm, but to no avail. Reina gets up and starts to hit the huge man, but the huge man flung his arm and threw Reina off. Reina tries to get up, but then heard a sound that made her stop on her heels.

    Splat.

    Blood, splattering through the ground, as Reina, witnessed another murder, seeing Dan getting stab by the huge man through the stomach, again Reina shouts with all her might, but to no avail, no sound comes out, as she falls down on her knees, shocked, tears falling down her cheeks. The huge man threw Dan’s lifeless body away, as he slowly heads towards Reina, raising his butcher knife through the air.

    Meanwhile.

    Back at the faculty office, CK gets up after hearing his cell phone ringing, and Miss Yuri Venus, lying by the floor, covered with the curtains, a little tearful. CK picks up his cell phone. It’s Davis.
    “Update?” said CK.
    “There seems to be two students inside the facility, and we haven’t heard any report from the guard we posted at the dormitory”
    “Two students?”
    “Yes. I believe, he’s one of your acquaintance, Ily”
    CK shocked at what he just heard, snapped and started shouting “What?! This isn’t happening… send all the guards you have stationed nearby, protect that ‘GUY’ at all cost…”
    “But sir, you clearly ordered us before not to station anyone by the tablet, since you ‘knew’ that person will be coming”
    “That boy takes priority to everything and to everyone, I don’t care if ‘that’ tablet is taken, I don’t care how many people die, just bring as much guards as you can, protect the boy with your lives!”
    “I understand sir… I will get right to it.”

    CK hangs up.

    “Yuri, we have trouble” Miss Venus sat up and looks at CK “Ily is inside the tomb, with another student” after hearing what CK said, Yuri gave out a shocked look. Miss Venus gets up quickly and starts dressing up, CK, also dresses up quickly as both rushes towards the abandon dormitory.

    Back at the abandoned dormitory, Ily and Adel finally woke up after falling down through those series of slides.

    “Adel-chan, are you ok?” asked Ily as he stood up while looking around. Ily extends his hand over to Adel. Adel reaches for Ily’s hand and looks around with a frightened look on her face. “T-The air feels weird in here” said Adel with a trembling voice. “Is this that tomb that people are talking about?” asked Ily, Adel nods while holding to Ily’s shirt.


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    Re: I Love You...NOT!!! (I.L.Y.N.)

    Both students walked around, seeing ancient sculptures and writings along the way and then finally arrived at an isolated room with a small tablet in the middle.
    “Eh… seems like a dead end, I can’t believe this tomb is these huge, does this cover the entire school or something?” said Ily scratching his head, Adel just held Ily’s shirt without responding as she looks around the room with worried look, “lets head back, there seems to be nothing here, just a piece of stupid tablet…” said Ily turning back over to where they came from “…besides I have this mild feeling that something’s wrong with that Reina girl… I guess I’m a little worried.” Before Ily could even walk out of the room, he suddenly felt a weird sensation stopping him on his tracks.
    “Wh-What is this f-feeling? I can’t seem to move…” said Ily.
    “I-Ily, what’s wrong? Is your stomach acting up again…?” asked Adel worriedly, Ily ignored Adel’s words and looked back at the tablet in the middle of the room. “Is this feeling coming from that tablet?” said Ily as he slowly approaches the tablet, while Adel just behind him, looks around. As Ily is about to touch the tablet a woman’s voice is suddenly heard from behind.
    “Sorry kid, but that’s as far as you see that tablet” Ily and Adel looked back at where the voice came from, but no one was there. As soon as Ily looked in front again, he sees a hand in front of him and silent words are heard from the woman.

    “Air Wave… Strike…!”

    Ily suddenly burst out flying, as a huge invisible air just blew by him and threw him through some series of walls. Adel, shocked on what she just saw looks in front of her and sees that two mysterious figure. Hora and SouCo has arrived.


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    Re: I Love You...NOT!!! (I.L.Y.N.)

    i seriously wish i could draw this as a manga, coz the battles in my head just seem more of an anime/manga type than novel type... ayayay... but anywayz, im putting this up now... missing two to three more pages for chapter 4, but ill work on it


    Chapter 4 continuation (3 1/2 of 4)


    Back at the courtyard

    The huge man starts struggling, as Kiki, to the rescue, jumped and bit the huge man’s arm before he could hurt Reina. Atop the dormitory, a small kitten-like-animal comes running through the roofs as she jumps down heading towards the huge man, LeLaiyhn comes rolling through the air as she transformed back to her human form, delivering a huge heel kick to the huge man’s head, causing the huge man to fall down head first to the hard ground. Kiki and LeLaiyhn then tend to Reina, who is still shocked from the events that she witnessed. LeLaiyhn tries to talk and notices that the sounds of her voice won’t come out, she looks at the barking Kiki, but not a sound of the dog’s bark can be heard, she then took notice at whistling sound that has envelop through the air and said to herself. ‘A magician?’ she thought as she gave a puzzling look at the fallen huge man, slowly getting up from the ground. LeLaiyhn held Reina’s shoulder as she tries to bring her back from reality. Reina slowly realizes the situation and notices that LeLaiyhn is in front of her and started crying, hugging LeLaiyhn in the process. Kiki barks at the huge man, as he is once again back on his feet, gripping on the butcher knife; he raised it up once again and smashed it down towards LeLaiyhn. LeLaiyhn with her quick reflexes pushed Reina away and evaded the upcoming knife and clasped her hands together forming a baseball bat on her hands, hitting the huge man in the face causing the huge man to fall down the ground. LeLaiyhn then used the huge man’s body as a stepping stool and jumped up high in the air, as she forms a huge ball on her clasped hands. The ball was almost twice as big as the huge man. LeLaiyhn dove towards the huge man with the huge ball in front, hitting the huge man hard, causing a huge impact throughout the courtyard. Dust and debris fill the air as LeLaiyhn jumps out of the scene and tends back to Reina as she carries her to a nearby wall, laying her down. Exhausted through the nightmare she has gone through, Reina had finally gave in and fainted.
    ‘You’re a very strong girl’ said LeLaiyhn on her mind as she brushes Reina’s hair, ‘I’m sorry that I was little late coming for your aid’ LeLaiyhn looks over at the fallen body of Daniel, ‘I promise I’ll make it up to you’ LeLaiyhn gets up and gave out an intimidating look where the huge man is positioned, ‘I’ll destroy every bone and fat this man has!’
    The huge man once again roared getting up from the small crater that was made by the diving LeLaiyhn a couple of minutes ago, as he grips the butcher knife tighter and begins to run towards where LeLaiyhn and Reina are positioned, but once again Kiki jumps in and bit the huge man by his feet, causing him to stop on his tracks, LeLaiyhn begins to run towards the huge man, and transforms both of her hands with a huge hammer. The huge man ignored Kiki and slices through at the coming LeLaiyhn, only to be evaded swiftly as she jumps up in the air, and gave another huge heel kick at the huge man’s skull, causing him to flinch once again. Before the huge man can fall face first, LeLaiyhn on the ground gave a double uppercut at the huge man with the hammer on hand, and gave out a series of kicks and body blows at the huge man, before tumbling her way back out to regroup.
    ‘He’s pretty tough’ said LeLaiyhn on her mind ‘If only I can chant the words for the spirit ball… but with this ‘whistling’ field I’m in, it’s impossible to call out the spirits.’ The huge man once again slowly gets up, wiping the blood off his lips, and showing a somewhat blank expression on his face. LeLaiyhn readies herself for any upcoming trick the huge man has, but the huge man sheathed his butcher knife on his back and grinned at LeLaiyhn.
    “Let…………………..Us……………….Begin……..” said the huge man. The whistles have once again become violent, as LeLaiyhn, not wasting anymore time charges at the huge man. The huge man tried punching at LeLaiyhn with his huge fist, almost as huge as LeLaiyhn’s upper body, but once again LeLaiyhn evades the upcoming attack, and counter with huge body blows and summersaults on the face of the huge man. LeLaiyhn noticed something different while she was attacking. Small glands of liquid flew threw the air every time she connected a hit at the huge man, she thought at first it was just sweat, but she felt something dread from those liquids. She gave out another huge uppercut at the huge man, before tumbling her way back to regroup. LeLaiyhn sees Kiki on the distance barking, as if she is being warned, but it seems the warning was too late. The huge man is standing behind LeLaiyhn. Without looking back, the huge man hits LeLaiyhn by the ribs with his clasped hands, hearing a sudden crack throughout her body. LeLaiyhn flew threw the air after being hit, ‘What’s going on? He was just in front of me, how can he move so fast…’ LeLaiyhn tumbles down the ground and tried to quickly get up as she holds the side of her body; she sees something that surprised her as she put her sights up front at the huge man.
    ‘Th-There’s two of them?’ the fallen huge man who seems to slowly get up and the huge man who hits her on her side. Suddenly, LeLaiyhn felt a presence behind her. It was an upcoming punch that LeLaiyhn could easily dodge, but with her cracked ribs, she was somewhat immobile. She once again flew through the air after being hit, as multiple types of huge man came out of the ground and began beating on LeLaiyhn. Beaten and down on the ground, LeLaiyhn tries to get up but to no avail, as the huge man in front of her with a grin on his face shows its form. The liquid that splattered throughout the huge man’s body was some of his copies, the more water copies he drops from his body, the smaller he gets. The copies of the huge man gets back to its original owner and became its original form once again. He sheathed his butcher knife, looking at the fallen LeLaiyhn, while LeLaiyhn looks at the huge man with anger on her face. The huge man gave out a nasty grin, as he turns his back on LeLaiyhn and slowly heads towards where Reina is resting. LeLaiyhn, once again tries to get up, and slowly tries to crawl her way towards Reina, but the huge man’s pace was faster, and would reach Reina sooner than her.


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    Re: I Love You...NOT!!! (I.L.Y.N.)

    Finally... chapter 4 is done... wow... that was one long chapter... ugh, i hope i finish this whole scenarios soon... coz i cant wait for the upcoming chapters... hehehe that'd be surely fun to write about... feedback would be much appreciated who ever reads my stuffs!


    Chapter 4 continuation (4/4)


    Back at the underground tomb

    “My, my, my… I should have held back a little, now it seems we’re down to one person” said Hora looking over at Adel, “Do you know of the child prophecy young lady?” Adel, on her knees, was surprised on what she just witnessed couldn’t bring up words to the person in front of her. “You don’t happen to be THAT child now… hmm, young lady?” said Hora with a grin on her face.

    Footsteps are then heard through the entrance

    “Lady Hora, it seems the guards have arrived…” said SouCo. A number of guards with a somewhat futuristic weapon arrives at the scene and covered Adel somewhat protecting her. Some were holding melee weapons and some have high-tech guns. “Hehe… it seems you guys are faster than what I had anticipated… this child… this child of prophecy is really that important to Him” said Hora with a grin on her face. One of the soldiers, who seem to be in charge of the group ordered his men to protect Adel at all cost. “The report said there were two students here… where is the other student? You conniving witch” said the soldier demandingly at Hora. Hora smiled and pointed at where Ily flew off, as the leader of the soldiers pointed out orders to retrieve Ily. Four soldiers went over to where Ily flew off.
    “So… which one is which? That girl?” said Hora pointing at Adel “Or that boy over there…?” pointing at Ily’s direction. Suddenly, an explosion is heard over where Ily is lying, bringing down the four guards that went to retrieve Ily. “Hehe… like I said… one down…” said Hora with a fierce look, as a ball of fire engulfs her hand and spread it around her, making it to some sort of firewall. “SouCo, finish the guards… and the girl if you may.” SouCo nods on Hora’s request and moved swiftly as he starts taking down the guards one by one, killing them with his ninja style techniques. While Hora watches on, the guards on a constant panic fend for their lives, trying to shoot at the speedy ninja, and the barrier wall of Hora. More guards comes in, but SouCo, unfazed with the numbers just kept killing and killing as blood everywhere splatters, while Adel watches in horror. “Take the girl outside… we’ll deal with this two!” said one of the guards.
    “I don’t think it’s going to be that easy…” said Hora chanting a spell. Hora placed her hand down the ground and muttered “Gravity… Come forth and seal my Enemies” The guards and Adel shrieked, as their bodies are pulled down to the ground as if they’re carrying hundreds of pounds of heavy metal on their entire body. While SouCo, unaffected, just calmly walks around and starts to kill the guards lying around, slowly heading towards where Adel is positioned. Adel struggles to get up as she sees SouCo ready to throw a modified type of knives at her.

    “I’m sorry miss, it’s nothing personal… but please die” said SouCo with a blank expression as he throws the knives at Adel.

    Back at the Courtyard

    The huge man arrives in front of Reina, and picks her up by her collar, Kiki jumps in to try and bite the huge man once again, but the huge man anticipated it and hits Kiki with the hilt of the butcher knife causing the dog to hit the ground hard and faint. LeLaiyhn witnessing what occurred clenched her fist. ‘There’s no other choice…’ said LeLaiyhn on her mind still struggling to move. LeLaiyhn bits her arm, as the black symbiote that engulfs her whole body seems to suddenly become violent. The symbiote escapes from LeLaiyhn’s body and moves quickly at the huge man, stopping him in the process. The huge man drops Reina as he struggles to get out of the symbiote that’s stopping him from his movements.
    ‘That symbiote won’t last long… I’m slowly losing my strength… this man… is too powerful’ said LeLaiyhn on her mind as she struggles to stay conscious ‘…Will there be a miracle.’ The huge man noticing the strength of the symbiote is fading away stopped resisting as he looked back at LeLaiyhn and gave out an eerie grin. After a few seconds, the symbiote died down and went back to LeLaiyhn’s body, as LeLaiyhn watches on.

    “I… Will… Kill… This… Girl… And… No… One… Can… Stop… Me…”

    ‘Stop!’ shouted LeLaiyhn on her mind. ‘Somebody, stop that man… d-don’t hurt her… d-don’t hurt, my very first… friend’

    Suddenly, the huge man stopped moving, he noticed something different, and he felt someone dangerous is coming. The whistling around the air had stopped, the midnight air had become stagnant, and fear is shown in the huge man’s face.

    “This feeling…” said LeLaiyhn with a terror on her face as she slowly sat up and looks around the courtyard, “It can’t be…”

    With in an instant, a man wearing a white long sleeve shirt and a necktie comes running through the courtyard, jumping through the air and giving a huge kick on the huge man’s face, causing the huge man to fly through the air and hit the walls of the abandoned dormitory.

    “It can’t be…” said LeLaiyhn as she sees the person that came to rescue them “It’s not possible… of all people… why does it have to be you?” she said as terror in her face is shown.

    Under the moonlit sky stands tall, CK comes to the rescue.

    Back at the underground tomb

    Adel is shocked at the person in front of her, rescuing her from the upcoming knives that would have killed her. That person took the blow instead, getting pierced by the knives on his back.

    “Ily…!” said Adel with a concerned voice.
    “Heh… sorry, those people were in my way so I was a little late coming here…” said Ily with blood all over his face, and bleeding badly on his back. “Don’t worry… I’m the main character of this story…” said Ily winking at Adel.
    Suddenly, SouCo comes from behind Ily and slashed Ily from behind, as blood gushes throughout Ily’s back. Ily falls down on his knees and said “Hehe… I…I-I’m the main ch-character… o-of… th-this… story… main characters like me… don’t die… that easily…” Ily falls down on Adel’s shoulder, as Adel supporting Ily’s weight shakes Ily’s body trying to wake him up. “Ily… Ily… no… Ily… wake up… Ily!!!”


    End of Chapter 4
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    Re: I Love You...NOT!!! (I.L.Y.N.)

    Chapter 5:The Secret of the Tablets(1/4)


    CK slowly walks towards LeLaiyhn, as LeLaiyhn, frozen in terror, started crawling backwards.
    ‘What do I do? What do I do? I don’t have the strength left to even defend myself… especially against him…’ said LeLaiyhn on her mind. LeLaiyhn looks over at Reina, as she sees Miss Venus and some guards tending to her, and then she looks over towards where Daniel’s lifeless body is laid down, as guards moved in quickly to tend to his wounds.
    ‘Move LeLaiyhn, Move!’ she said on her mind as she closes her eyes ‘that’s right… I shouldn’t get myself involve with other people’s affair… I ran away because of Him, I’m like this because of Him… I never trusted anyone because of Him… this is no time for me thinking about other people’s well being…’ she thought about her past life, her suffering and her own kind ‘I need to get away… I need to get away from my past… look ahead on MY OWN future… so MOVE LeLaiyhn MOVE!’ CK extends his hand and said to her with a faint innocent smile on his face “Are you ok? Can you stand up…?” CK then suddenly notices something different about the LeLaiyhn. “You… you’re…” Suddenly, the huge man emerges from the rubbles of the broken wall. His face all bloody, his clothes all torn up and his patience has finally ran out. The huge man, out of rage ran straight towards Reina’s direction, as the guards from all around the place began shooting at the huge man with their high-tech weapons trying to stop him at all cost, but the huge man’s build and power overwhelms all the guards the surround him. CK looks back at Miss Venus and Reina, “Tsk… looks like ‘he’ really was made to be this tough… hey, can you stand up?” asked CK to LeLaiyhn, but when CK looks back at LeLaiyhn, she already began running away from CK, and at a brief moment, CK sees the mark on LeLaiyhn’s back “One of the cursed ones…” Out of the confusion that happened, LeLaiyhn mustered all her strength to run away from CK, leaving Reina behind.
    “Davis…! After that red haired girl…! Don’t let her escape…!” said CK demandingly at Davis who’s standing by the entrance of the dormitory. Davis nods, and took out his phone to call some more guards.
    LeLaiyhn on the other hand, came inside the dormitory, since her strength is slowly fading away, her mind is the only thing that’s giving her the ability to move forward and get away from the person she seem to fear the most. She sat down on the floor in the nearest room, seemingly hiding from her pursuers. She held her ribs and tears started coming out of her eyes.
    “No…No… I don’t want to go back… no… after all this time… no…” said LeLaiyhn crying. She slowly gets up and exits the room, walking slowly by the hallways, while holding her side.

    Suddenly

    “Teleportation…?” said LeLaiyhn as she sees a number of round like plasma comes out of the walls of the dormitory, as a number of guards comes out of the teleportation field. The guards began to surround her, outnumber her, and aim at her, ready to kill in an instant.
    “I have no choice…” said LeLaiyhn. Once again LeLaiyhn bit her arm, but this time a lot harder than before, as blood oozes out from her arm, the symbiote that engulfs her body became violent, as the symbiote slowly and effectively took out the guards one by one, while LeLaiyhn, with a little bit more of her strength, kicked and punched her way through the surrounding guards. The guards didn’t stand a chance on the weakened LeLaiyhn and the violent symbiote, as LeLaiyhn slowly heads towards the exit of the dormitory, sighting for freedom, but as soon as she got out, a lot more guards seems to have appeared in front of her, once again defending for her life.

    Back at the courtyard, CK stands in front of Reina and Miss Venus, as he watches the guards fend of the huge man.
    “Hmm… this is quite troublesome…” said CK, giving out a huge sigh with his innocent face.
    “Calvin, he seems to be dangerous… he’s overwhelming the guards, you have to do something” said Miss Venus worriedly.
    “Don’t worry, I’ll handle that guy in a little bit… I’m just observing for now… the person that I created with my own two hands” said CK with a little grin on his face.
    “Master, we have trouble…” said Davis as he ran over to where CK is standing.
    “What’s wrong…?”
    Davis reported on what happened underground and to Ily, as a surprised is shown on CK’s face.

    Back at the underground tomb

    Hora and SouCo just seem to have stayed on stand by after killing Ily, while Adel hugging Ily cries over Ily’s lifeless body. More guards seem to have appeared at the underground tomb, firing their weapons at the two villains and some of them heading over to Ily to tend to his wounds, but before they could even touch Ily or Adel, the guards that tend to them suddenly explode, as if a land mine is surrounding Ily and Adel. Hora and SouCo didn’t even flinch as they stood at the surrounding barrier that’s protecting them, with a serious look on their faces, seemingly waiting for something, or someone.

    Back at the courtyard

    “This is troublesome… I need to get down there fast” said CK, “but first…” he looks over at the huge man and disappeared in an instant, appearing right in front of the huge man. The huge man surprised seeing CK stopped his rampage, as CK gave the huge man two heavy kicks in the face, causing him to fly by and hitting a tree.
    The huge man finally knocked out on the ground, slowly melts into a liquid substance, seemingly escaping the oncoming guards, while CK run heading towards the underground tomb, “Yuri, take care of those two…! I’m going to save Ily…!” CK shouted as he looks back at Miss Venus holding Reina by her arms. Miss Yuri just nods with a worried expression on her face.

    Back at the underground tomb

    SouCo began his killing rampage once again, dealing with the oncoming guards, while Hora, still with the serious look on her face, just stands in wait. SouCo slashes anyone coming close to Ily and Adel.
    “I’m so lazy… can’t you guys handle this two on your own…” said a guy wearing some office clothes who walks out of one of the teleportation field. SouCo stops attacking and looks at the person intensely. “Ahhh… what a bother… where’s that boss of mine when you need him…” the guy looks around, noticing a lot of guards bloodied and battered, lying on the ground, he looks over to Ily and Adel’s direction as he slowly walks towards them. Suddenly, SouCo appears in front of the guy ready to slash at him, but the guy disappears in front of SouCo and arrives in front of Adel and Ily.
    “Huhhhh…? This is trouble, seems one of them is injured…” said the guy as he crouches in front of the two people. He scratches his head and said “Ugh… I’m going to be in trouble again for being late am I, hey little girl are you ok?” he asked Adel, but Adel still crying and holding Ily tightly, as if lost on her own world. “Ayayay… this is really troublesome…” said the guy as he scratches his head even more.

    Suddenly

    “Don’t interrupt…” said Hora, as small fireball heads towards the guy’s direction. The guy gets hit with the fireball, as his whole body is engulf with flame, seemingly turned to ashes in a split second.
    “Get up… you probably know from your boss about me… that I cannot kill. So stop with your fake act, as it makes me want to puke” said Hora with an annoyed look.
    One of the bloodied guards gets up slowly and takes his helmet off. “Can you have at least pretended I died, this whole thing seems to be bothersome, and I’m too lazy to deal with that guy…” the guy said as he points back at SouCo, “sigh… I have no choice huh?” said the guy as he scratches his head, “Oh well…” the guy suddenly vanishes and appears in front of SouCo, “Sorry, but you have to die…!” The guy attacks, but SouCo parries it easily, “Ohhh… I guess this is going to be tough,”
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    seriously tell me how you find or think of the events ??? XD i love it very much ... and “Sorry, but you have to die…!” that is so~ cool !.... =^_^=
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    While the fight between SouCo and the mysterious guy rages on, Adel looks back at the first time she met Ily.
    ‘Why…? Why does my heart hurt this badly…’ said Adel on her mind as she sees flashbacks from the first time they met.

    Two weeks ago

    The courtyard was empty as usual, Adel just transferred from the city of Metollia, and it was her first day at her new school. She started a week early to get a head start on classes, since she’s about two years advance, being a junior at the age of 15. She’s the shy type, but has had no problems interacting with the people around her. She’s semi-popular with her classmates. She has a nice personality, smart, and her classmates even consider her as incredibly cute, even though she wears her hair in ponytails or twin tails and wears those thick glasses. She’s the type of person who doesn’t do anything but be at the library. Lunch or after school, she’s at the library, studying or reading novels. Her world is considered of different genres of books and notes from classes, but after meeting him, her world seems to have change to a different direction.
    The first time she met Ily was by the library, three days after she started school. She saw Ily sleeping with a pile of books on the table about witchcraft, curses, magic and anything considered phenomenon.

    ‘It was odd… seeing his sleeping face… it made me feel warm inside… it felt different than anything I’ve ever felt before’ Adel hugs Ily tightly ‘and yet… and yet…’ Adel remembers the warnings of her grandmother and her friend about Ily. ‘They told me to stay away from him… they knew him? It kept popping in my head but never bothered to ask… it broke my heart just avoiding him… it hurts… it hurts… grandma… help me… I don’t want this feeling.’ Adel faints as she collapses on the ground with Ily still in her arms.

    “Ahh… the princess has finally lost her consciousness after crying all this time… poor girl” said the guy while easily parrying all SouCo’s attacks. “Can we please stop this already, I’m getting bored… I want to go sleep…” he said to SouCo with a lazy voice.

    Suddenly, another fireball flew threw the air, hitting the guy in the process, impaling him to the walls.

    “I see… so that’s your powers, but with my magic, I doubt you’ll be able to get away this time” said Hora with a grin on her face. She signals SouCo to finish the guy off. SouCo slowly walks over at the guy, while the guy struggles to get away from the fire that’s enveloping his body.

    Suddenly, in a blink of an eye CK is right behind SouCo, ready to strike, SouCo notices CK’s presence, as he looks back at the oncoming fist of CK. “Sorry, but there’s no way you’ll dodge this” said CK with a confident voice. But once again another fireball flew threw the air, this time hitting CK from behind, causing CK to hit the wall on where the guy is pinned at.


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