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    Kakashi's Love-Chapter #1

    Kakashi's Love-Chapter #1

    It was a regular day at Konohagakure Village. Kakashi and his team were going on a D level mission, as usual. Akura and her two friends, Hiro and Kesei, were going on a mission to retreive a lost scroll lost in the jungle. So Kakashi, Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura, Akura, Hiro, and Kesei went outside the gate and said their goodbyes and they were off. Akura and her group were running at top speed toward where they thought the scroll might be. Then Akura sees something ahead and motions for Hiro and Kesei to get down. All three of them hid in the bushes and peaked out to see what was happening. What they saw was Orochimaru standing with his back turned to them. 'What's going on?' Hiro said to Akura with his thoughts. 'I don't know.' she responded. All of a sudden she felt herself being slammed against a tree and being lifted up by her shirt. When she opened her eyes, she saw Orochimaru glaring up at her. "Well look who it is!"he said. "It's Akura. The girl who holds the dragon demon within her!" with that said, he threw her to the ground forcefuly. Then out of nowhere, Hiro and Kesei tackled Orochimaru to the ground. "You leave Akura alone!!" Kesei yelled. "You both will pay for that...."Orochimaru said. 'Oh no' Akura thought. "Kesei!! Hiro!! Get away from there!!" she yelled. But before they could react, Orochimaru quickly stabbed them in the heart. Then he pushed there dead bodys away. Akura couldn't believe it. Her friends were dead. Then she felt her temper riseing, and she stood up. "You....will....die...."She said with slow rage. Then she attacked Orochimaru with all her might......
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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #1

    yay*screames in excitment*i love this story it has a lot of energy and i cant wait for the second chap.!!!go akurap.s.i voted for awesome
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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #1

    AMAZING!!!!!!!!! I just loved it!!!!! There was so much excitement there!!!!! It made me go WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it so I just loved to see more!!!!!
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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #1

    "Kakashi's Love"

    .....I can guess where this will lead, lol. Anyways, keep up the good work and make sure to keep it exciting.
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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #1

    Hehehe, yeah, I'm sure all you know what happens! lol thanks deo! And Kiwi! And theprincess!



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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #1

    nicley done well done!!keep it up it's a fantastix story till now!!

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