yay*screames in excitment*i love this story it has a lot of energy and i cant wait for the second chap.!!!go akurap.s.i voted for awesome
Awsome!
Cool but needs improvement
Eh, yeah.....
Stupid
Kakashi's Love-Chapter #1
It was a regular day at Konohagakure Village. Kakashi and his team were going on a D level mission, as usual. Akura and her two friends, Hiro and Kesei, were going on a mission to retreive a lost scroll lost in the jungle. So Kakashi, Naruto, Sasuke, and Sakura, Akura, Hiro, and Kesei went outside the gate and said their goodbyes and they were off. Akura and her group were running at top speed toward where they thought the scroll might be. Then Akura sees something ahead and motions for Hiro and Kesei to get down. All three of them hid in the bushes and peaked out to see what was happening. What they saw was Orochimaru standing with his back turned to them. 'What's going on?' Hiro said to Akura with his thoughts. 'I don't know.' she responded. All of a sudden she felt herself being slammed against a tree and being lifted up by her shirt. When she opened her eyes, she saw Orochimaru glaring up at her. "Well look who it is!"he said. "It's Akura. The girl who holds the dragon demon within her!" with that said, he threw her to the ground forcefuly. Then out of nowhere, Hiro and Kesei tackled Orochimaru to the ground. "You leave Akura alone!!" Kesei yelled. "You both will pay for that...."Orochimaru said. 'Oh no' Akura thought. "Kesei!! Hiro!! Get away from there!!" she yelled. But before they could react, Orochimaru quickly stabbed them in the heart. Then he pushed there dead bodys away. Akura couldn't believe it. Her friends were dead. Then she felt her temper riseing, and she stood up. "You....will....die...."She said with slow rage. Then she attacked Orochimaru with all her might......
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So that was the first chapter! Don't worry, the second one is coming soon!(If people liked this one). Sooo, how did ya like it? ♥
yay*screames in excitment*i love this story it has a lot of energy and i cant wait for the second chap.!!!go akurap.s.i voted for awesome
Yeah, Bye.
AMAZING!!!!!!!!! I just loved it!!!!! There was so much excitement there!!!!! It made me go WOW!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it so I just loved to see more!!!!!![]()
「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」
"Kakashi's Love"
.....I can guess where this will lead, lol. Anyways, keep up the good work and make sure to keep it exciting.
Attitude of AO MODS, according to beast
Because they have obtained that level they are arrogant. You have to kep in mind when you talk about these guys they are kind of dorks who probably didn't excel at much and this is their only outlet to flex their muscles. Their egos would suffer no less so the the forum suffers some more. Watch one way or another they will probably repond to this post with a threat. But there are better forums out there. Private messege Zev.
nicley done well done!!keep it up it's a fantastix story till now!!
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