waaaaaa*cries*I WANT THE THIRD CHAPTER NOW just kidding cant wait u have alot of powerful energy into the words.hope to see more!♥♥♥
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Kakashi's Love-Chapter #2
Then Akura attacked Orochimaru with all her force, but he just evaded it. "Oh, please. You think a puny girl like you can defeat me?" Orochimaru laughed. Then he charged at her, but Akura avoided it. "I WILL kill you!!" she yelled. But before she could react, he slammed her into a tree so hard that her left arm instantly broke. Akura let out a scream of pain and fell to the ground. She glanced at her left arm and it had a huge cut on it and was bleeding. But Orochimaru had no pity for her. He picked her up and threw her across the ground. By now she was covered in blood from all the cuts she had, and her right eye was damaged and she was really weak. Now she could see, with her one good eye, that Orochimaru was coming to take away her last breath. In a last effort, Akura used up the last of her Chakra to bring forth a huge firewall between them. Now her Chakra was gone and she could barely move. "Even if I don't kill you"Orochimaru yelled over the flames."You will die now. Laying there with no power!" and then he dissapeared in a cloud of smoke. Akura relized he was right. Her Chakra was gone, her left arm was broken, she was blind in one eye, and she was covered with cuts that were bleeding. But when she was about to give up, a picture of Kakashi flashed in her mind, and she relized she couldn't die without seeing Kakashi one last time.....
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So that was the second chapter! I think there are only two more chapters after this! Anyways, hope you enjoyed it!!!♥
Here are the characters:
Akura=duh, me!
Kakashi=stays sweet Kakashi
Sakura=theprincess(iluvmyloser)
Sasuke=Sasuke
Naruto=Naruto
Hiro=deodaclan18
Orochimaru=Orochimaru
Kesei=KuwiRules145
Iruka=Iruka
waaaaaa*cries*I WANT THE THIRD CHAPTER NOW just kidding cant wait u have alot of powerful energy into the words.hope to see more!♥♥♥
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Awesome!!!!!! Keep on going keep on going!!!!! It's just so cool!!!! I loved how it's going right now!!! I just love it!!!! I WANT THE THIRD CHAPTER ALREADY!!!!!!!!It's getting so interesting!!!!!!
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I need to read more!!when is number 3 coming??? u have made this too axciting for me!!! :P
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that was so good!!!!!!!! i want to read the thrd one so bad.
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