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Thread: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

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    Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

    Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3 WARNING: I die in this chapter so try not to be TOO sad!

    She couldn't. Akura couldn't die without seeing Kakashi one last time. So she gathered up all of the streangth she had left and used her good arm to slowly lift her to her feet. She was so weak that her legs were shaking when she finally stood. Then she took a painful step forward, and so with the rest. She was walking slowly and painfuly back towards the village. Then after an agonizeing 15 minuts she finally came into the clearing. Just then she saw Kakashi come out of the gate and she thought 'finally' and had a wave of pain and weakness come over her and she started to fall to the ground. By now Kakashi had seen her and ran as fast as he could and caught her before she hit the ground. And with a look of horror and sadness in his eyes he asked "What happened to you?" just then it started raining and all the blood washed from Akura's body and she raised her hand to Kakashi's face. "Now that I've seen you" she said, "I can go in peace." then at that moment she closed her eyes and her hand fell. "No, you can't die!" Kakashi said. Then he fell to his knees and started to cry like he had never done before......
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    Okay peoples! One more chapter to go before this all ends!!!♥
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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

    NO!!!!!!! Go go!!!! I want to see the other one so GO GO GO! Hurry I'm getting to interested to this so easily so it was amazing reading so go go GO!!!! I just love it!!!!
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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

    its so good i want to see the next one so hurry up make it

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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

    Okay, who voted for the "Eh, still needs work....." ???????



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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

    wow awesome. very well tell. Can't wait to read more!!

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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

    is this cool or what!?!!!!! awesome job! i really loved it! too bad is kinda sad but lovely hehehe

    PS: sorry you had to die

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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

    Hmm, the story is interesting. Keep up the good work and make sure to make the last one have a good closure. And possibly, a little bit longer.

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    Re: Kakashi's Love-Chapter #3

    Oh, trust me deo, the last one will definatly be long! And thank you everyone!



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