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    Kid

    We all stood there. Watching. Waiting, for the king-Raminas- to choose the three captains of the Dalmascan army. Two were already chosen, a Captain Azelas of Dalmasca-otherwise known as Vossler-and a Basch von Rosenburg of Landis. We all held our breath as he chose the last.
    Raminas-you.
    He was pointing at…
    Me-me?
    Raminas-yes, come up here child.
    I shrugged my shoulders and walked up the steps to the front of the palace.
    Vossler-a child!?
    Basch- how old are you?
    Me- I am not yet three, Sir.
    Vossler laughed.
    Basch-your name?
    Me-name? *Puts hands behind head* don’t have one.
    Raminas-then what shall we call you child?
    Me- Kid, you may call me Kid. None of this child lark though your majesty, its Kid or nothing.
    Raminas- very well.
    Vossler-your majesty, I mean not to disrespect your choice but this is a child, she cannot wield a sword
    Me-actually Sir, yes, yes I can. *Pulls out a sword* I even have a sword. And I can fight, and if I must I shall prove it. I changelle, you Vossler to a duel.
    Vossler- I shall not fight a child.
    Me-* tilt of the head* chocobo
    Vossler- why I outta
    He pulled out his sword and raised it above me as he was about to attack Basch intercepted him, raising a hand.
    Basch- I shall fight you, if his majesty will allow it.
    Raminas-* nods* it would be my pleasure.
    Basch rose his sword and walks into the crowd as he does so the crowd disperses forming a ring. I follow him into that ring.
    Me- good sir dare not go easy on me.
    Basch- you may be a child, a young one at that, but I still have my pride to uphold.
    Me – indeed
    I rush up at slashing my sword. He parried. Our swords then bash together. Once, twice, three times. I then relise that he held his sword loose.
    Me- sir you hold your sword loose, you must hold a sword as you would shake a hand, sir, firm sir. For if held loose I can do this.
    I attack him again and again, getting basch into a right chocobo. Then I swung his sword into the air. I smile then jump catching basch’s sword in the process. I then land
    Me- down to the ground. *Kicks at basch’s ankle*.
    Basch fell to the floor.
    Me-* looking down on him *do I pass?* I then offer him my hand*
    Basch- indeed.
    Hey, i do knight rituals now, just ask me and you can be a knight of Dalmasca

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    Re: Kid

    wat do you think? it took me some time to think of a final fantasy storyline but here it is. more soon.
    Hey, i do knight rituals now, just ask me and you can be a knight of Dalmasca

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    I am not yet three, Sir. 《does a kid that young have the stamina to fight an adult?
    I wonder that,hmmm...

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    Quote Originally Posted by SilverMoon View Post
    I am not yet three, Sir. 《does a kid that young have the stamina to fight an adult?
    I wonder that,hmmm...
    yes, yes she does. you see she has a history, i will not tell you now for it will ruin a story, but i will tell you that she has a deep dark sercret
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    Oh, I see...I'll be waiting for the rest of the story, it sounds quite interesting!

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    Quote Originally Posted by SilverMoon View Post
    Oh, I see...I'll be waiting for the rest of the story, it sounds quite interesting!
    thanks. next part will be soon i promise. i just have to wait till ict cuz, i have to type it up on word fisrt.
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    Basch stood up. And turned to the king.
    Basch- I believe she will make a good captain your majesty. And it will be a pleasure to work with her.
    Raminas nodded.
    Vossler gives me a cold stare
    Raminas-*turns to his people* thank you for coming to this spectacular event. We must leave you now so I bid you adieu.
    With that the king, and Vossler went into the palace with basch behind. I however stay there. Looking into the streets of Rabanastre.
    Me- what am I doing here?
    Basch- I ask myself that many times.
    Me- *turns to face basch* really?
    Basch- yes, I don’t come from Dalmasca. I should not be here. My homeland though was destroyed. Landis. And you know I don’t know why I am telling you this.
    Me- *laughs* ah I’m just the sorta person you would tell, basch. I have no family so I will tell no one.
    Basch- you have no family?
    Me- * shakes my head* no, I do not even know who I am. This is all I have left of both my family and my identy.
    I show him my necklace, the blue dragooned necklace.
    Basch- that’s-
    Me- what?
    Basch- *sighs* nothing I am mistaken
    Me- on, and there I was thinking there was some hope that I had family.
    Basch sighed.
    Me- do you have family?
    Basch- a brother. My twin.
    Me- he not here
    Basch- no he turned to the empire.
    Me- oh.
    Basch- together we are the same
    Me- huh?
    Basch- we are here. Both not knowing why, yet here we are
    Me- yes, I suppose.
    Basch- *looks into the distance* I will start anew. Won’t you join me, Kid?
    Me- It shall be my pleasure Sir Basch.
    Basch- please forget the Sir. It is just basch.
    Me-mmm… ok
    Basch- let us go inside.
    Me- and start our new life.
    We walk into the palace. My sword stung upon my back, lest I knew not how much I would need it in the future life. But I tell you now the story has only just begun.
    Hey, i do knight rituals now, just ask me and you can be a knight of Dalmasca

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    Re: Kid

    yay!!! theres part two for ya. wat do you think. no fighting in this one but oh well. next time...
    kid goes to archadia, the root of the empire. tune in for more
    Hey, i do knight rituals now, just ask me and you can be a knight of Dalmasca

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