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    Arrow [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    Based on The Manga i Created [ I'll Post My Manga Scans As soon as i can]
    Sorry for the Grammar ( " im not that good in English Thou " )

    Title: [Memory no Tenshi Tenshi / Angel! Angel Memory]
    Genre: [Comedy , Romance]
    Status:[Completed]

    Summary:

    Vol.1 - Something i've forget in the past about You

    Chapter .1 | Turbulence |

    As Sora [ The Male Angel ] Returns Back to Heaven Coming From a Mission " As he Flies Through The Skies " Suddenly A Thunder Hit Him! And He Fell Down on A House Pond of A Girl Named "Orihasa Mika". Mika Found Him Wounded And Unconcious, She Treated him, a Day After That Incident Sora Wake's up Wondering Where he is And The worst part is He Couldnt Remember Anything But only the Visions Of His Feathers and His name
    , As He Walks Through The Corridor of Mikas House , He Enters A Door , A Bathroom Door , Where Mika Is Taking a Bath , They Catch up on Each Other And Stared Like That on Minutes and "Mika Screams and Fainted " And.....

    Chapter.2 | An Angels Aura |
    As Sora Carries Mika on A Bedroom and Lays her on Bed, A Minute After Mika Gained Conciusness , As She Rub her eyes She See Sora Sitting Right Next to Her , She Felt So Calm aFter Seeing Sora , As she stares on Sora, She Felt Warmer inside of Her body, The Sora Looked on him with a Charming eyes and...

    Sora: Oh Your Awake..
    Mika: (Pretending she's Angry ) Y..Y..You are the man i saw last night So you gained Conciousness!!! After All that ive done!!! I Let you Stay in my house and This is what Ive Got!!!! You Perv---
    Sora: ( Kneeling Down ) Im So sorry..i Didnt mean to do that.

    After hearing those words Mika felt that The Guy is Telling the Truth so...

    Mika: ( *Blushing* )I Forgive you!!! But pls dont do it again
    Sora: O.K I Promise

    Mika: By the way Who are you and Where did you come from, how come you are at my pond last night?
    Sora:Sorry i cant answer your questions but my name is Sora

    Mika:How come you cant remember?
    Sora:i dont know...

    Mika:Your Wounded and Uncouncius last night you know!
    Sora:....

    Sora:Im So sorry for bothering you like that...
    Mika: D-D-Dont tell me!!!

    Mika: You Have an Amnesia!!!
    Sora: Amnesia?

    Mika: Its an I'llness!!!when you got an amnesia you forgot some of your memories! or all of your Memories!!
    Sora: Then I'm afraid i Got an amnesia....

    Mika: What are your plans now?
    Sora: i..i dont know...

    Mika: Do you have anywhere to go?
    Sora: I'm Sorry...(*Heads Down*)

    Mika: Ok Then! You can stay here if you wanted to!!!
    Sora: Really?

    Mika: Yeah...but i have Conditions on this house you hear me?!
    Sora: Ye-ah

    Mika: Then its decided then Your going to stay at my house!
    Sora: Ohh...Thank you very much (*Sweet Smile*)

    Mika: (*Blushing*/*Hearts Pounding fast) .....

    -To be continued


    Just Reply on this thread if you want me to Post the Next Vol. of the story thank you

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    OK so I can see that you are new to AO,
    so welcome and enjoy your stay.

    About this manga that you have written I have read the chapter and can honestly say that you are on the right path here.
    btw did you get the name sora from Kingdom hearts?

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    uh..honestly i Just came up with the name while Reading Japanese Dictionary Sora - Sky

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    The Japanese is a bit wonky...

    Memory no Tenshi = Angel of (belonging to) Memory

    "Angel Memory" or "Angel's Memory" would be the opposite "Tenshi no Memory" (Kioku)

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    thank you for correcting me...but i'll just stick with the name...thank you for reading

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    'okay ^^;

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    Vol.2 - Hearthrobbing Meeting

    -Continuation

    Chapter.1 | Feathers , Feathers & Feathers |

    | Clock Rings!!!! (ringggggggg!!!!!) |


    Mika: Oh Im LAte!!!!
    Sora: LAte?


    Mika: (*Rushing*)I'm so sorry can we just continue this discussion later bye!!! Just stay here at the house dont let anyone Go inside!! ok!
    Sora: uhm...O...O.k


    Mika: (*Taking off her clothes*) Get Out you Jerk!!!!!
    Sora: uh...im...so..s..s...sorry


    |At Mika's School|


    ("Mika's Best friend") Oda Tsukasa: Good morning Mika!!!
    Mika: Good morning


    Tsukasa: Its odd , I've known you for years, but this is the first time i saw you come on school a bit late
    Mika: (*Running out of breath*)hah..hah...you have no idea on what i came through...

    Tsukasa: Hmmmm.......


    |at Mika's House|


    Sora: hmm...whats this box? Maybe its mika's maybe i should get it on to her


    As Sora Walks He Saw a large School building he have no idea that its Mika's School
    " Fukoma High " Out of curiosity Sora jumps through the gate with an Incredible high jump....Sora Enters the inside of the School and...


    Sora: Wow this place is big...
    Principal: Hey you!!!


    Sora: oh..!
    Principal: Its the first time i saw you here!!


    Sora: uhmm...i came here to-
    Principal: Offcourse You came here because you are the New School janitor!! Now put on this uniform and go to work....


    | Mean while at Mika's School |


    Mika: (*Stomach Growling*)I Forgot my lunch box....


    | Back on the Hall where Sora is Cleaning |


    ("Most famous girl in Fukoma High")Amamiya Ruete: (*Stalked by many fan of hers*)...
    as Ruete Walks on the floor...


    Sora: uhm.. miss dont step on that you'll Slip!!!
    Ruete: (*Slip on the floor*)oh...


    as Ruete Slips Sora Cathes her with his arms and...


    Sora: (*Sweet Shining Smile*)Miss are you alright..i told you its wet but then you Step on it ..Pls be careful next time ok...
    Ruete: (*Blushing*/*Heart Pounding fast*) i...i..m ok...


    Ruete: (*Thoughts*) Who is this guy? Its the first time i've seen him...he's so Gorgeus..i feel im safe on his arms i feel like i...i..


    Then Ruete Fainted....

    -To be continued
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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    Not bad at all pls continue story,
    I am looking forward to the next chapter.

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