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Sep 03, 2007, 01:11 AM
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Sep 03, 2007, 07:20 AM
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Credits: 13,044 | Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!] nooooooooooo, please dont do that, I could not live with myself if you did that  nah it ok take a break you deserve it. |
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Sep 04, 2007, 04:21 AM
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Credits: 640 | Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!] Vol.3 - A Total Stranger Chapter.1 | Pls Help me! | As Their Lips Slowly began Getting Closer on Each other... Sora: .... Tsukasa: .... The Soras Lips Reached its Destination Point Sora: * Smooch * Tsukasa: *Blushing* Oh...my!!! Sora Kissed Tsukasa's Forehead and.... Tsukasa: k-k-iss.... Then Tsukasa Fainted with a Smile on her Face.... | The Next day | Sora wakes up on he's bed with a Note on He's Side Note: Sora Pls Stay in the House, and... Sora: One, Feed the Fish... Sora: Second, Clean the House.... Sora: Third, Buy The Ingredients... After Sora Finished The Two Chores Mika left for him, He Bought all the ingridients For Their dinner... While Walking on the way Home He found A Girl Being Bullied by Gangsters... Ruete: Hey Let Me Go!!! Gangster1: (* Holding the Girls Hand*)Come on Miss... Come with us Gangster2: Dont be so Cruel Miss, Hang out with us Sora: Hey LEt Go of her! Gangster1: Huh? Gangster1: Do you have any idea who you talking to? Sora: No... Gangster2: Then Who are you to interfere with us! Ruete: (*Shocked*) I've Seen This man Before... Sora: I have no intentions of hurting both of you so please let the girl g- Suddenly Both of the gangsters Strike Sora Out of Nowhere but then Sora Vanished like a Bubble Sora: Hmm... Surprise attacks? Pathetic... Sora: I dont want to Harm both of you... so pls let her go... Gangster1: What The hell are you talking About Darn...You!!!! Gangster1: Hey You what ever happens dont let the Girl G- Gangster2: (* Ouch */ * on the ground *) He Got The Girl Boss... Gangster 1 & 2: Damn you.... Sora: (* Sweet Cheery smile*) Miss Just Stay right here i'll fix this right away Ruete: oh thank you, but...i think i've seen you before...Ah! i remember now! You're The School Janitor!!! Gangster2: Stop Ignoring us Fool! Gangster1: Lets get rid of him! Then both of the gangsters Strike towards sora but... Sora: Both of you are Pathetic! With just a Blow Sora knocked down one of the gangster and Sora: Dont you think you Should run now Gangster2: (* Shivering *) i-i-i- i wont forget this! Then the gangster Ran away with an incredible Speed... Sora: Miss Did they hurt you? Ruete: No I'm Fine, Ruete: By the way I'm Ruete Sora: (* Sweet cheery smile *)Oh i see, The Girl that Fainted after Sliping on the floor! By the way im sora -to be continued
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Sep 04, 2007, 04:30 AM
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Credits: 13,044 | Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!] Now I am going to rant and rave like a two year old child, so please forgive me. I want the next chapter, I want, I want. ok got that out of my system. good job btw and please carry on. |
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Sep 04, 2007, 04:47 AM
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Sep 05, 2007, 09:25 AM
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Credits: 640 | Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!] Vol.3 - A Total Stranger Chapter.2 | We're Tied Together | -Continuation Ruete: (*Blushing*/*Thoughts in her mind*) So its Sora...Well then! Sora: (* Cute Stare on Ruete *) ... Ruete: (*Blushing*) Uhm... Sora: Well? Ruete: (* Blushing *) I was Wondering if you could.... Sora: (* Cute Stare on Ruete *).... Ruete: (* Blushing *) Come in to my house Tonight For Dinner... Sora: (* Cheery Sweet Smile *) hmm...I'll Try Ruete: (* Smiling *) O.k i'll wait for you in the Station, 7:30pm ,Heres the Adress w/ Map Sora: (* Smiled back *) O.K ... BodyGuards: Miss Ruete!!! Ruete: Oh Well Sora, LAter Then Sora: Ok Bye Takecare BodyGuards: Miss Ruete Pls wait for us... As Ruete Waves Goodbye on Sora While Running Her Personal Bodyguard Continues to Follow her...with all the ingridients Sora Went Back home in a Good Condition. | LAter That night | Mika went Back home around 6:30 Sora Speaked with her and.... Mika: I'm Home! Sora: (* Sweet Cheery Smile *)Welcome Home Mika!!! Mika: Why are you here at The Front of the Door? are you waiting for me? Sora: Well yes, You see i prepared your dinner and... Mika: Your Going out? Sora: (* Smiling *) Yup! Mika: With who? Sora: (* Smiling *) uhm...as i remember her name is R-R-Ru...Ruete! Mika: (* Wondering */* Thoughts in her mind*) Hmm... That name sounds Familiar i think i've heard of that name before Sora: Maybe i'll come back around 11:00 Mika: O.K After That Sora Taked Off and is on the way to the Station, | at the Station | Sora: (* Wondering *) hmm.. i wonder where Ruete is... Ruete: (* Covering Sora's Eyes *) Whos this? Sora: (* Wondering *) uhm.... Ruete: (* Giggles *) if you dont guess me correct i'll give you a Kiss... Sora: Miss Ruete? Ruete: (* Smiling *) aww... you guessed me right...maybe you dont want a kiss.... Sora: (* Sweeet Smile *) .... BodyGuards: (* Finding Ruete *)Miss Ruete Where are you? Ruete: (* Holding Soras Hand *)Oh no They're Here! Come Quick where Going on to my House! where taking the Train Sora: (* Hands Held by Ruete *) .... BodyGuards: (* The've Saw Ruete */* Running towards Ruete*) Miss Ruete Wait for Us...Your Father will be Angry if you will not come home Again Tonight!!! Ruete: (* Running While holding Sora's Hands *) Tell Father maybe i'll not come home Tonight! Tell him Dont worry About me! Ruete: (* Still running Trying to catch up on the Train *) Oh no its Closing Sora: (* Holds Ruetes Hand Tight but Gentle *) Dont worry Ruete: (* Blushes *) ow!... Then Sora Help up Ruete on His arms and Ran over an Incredible speed...and they've Make it!!! (* TRAINS DOOR CLOSED *) Bodyguards: (* Crumbling Outside *) Miss Ruete!!! Sora: (* Sweet Smile *) Like i've said to you we'll made it in time... Ruete: (* Blushes *) Wow your Awesome! Sora: (* Sweet Smile *) Lets take on a Seat Shall we? Ruete: (* Blushing *) Ok.... Ruete: (* Blushing *) ..... The Two take a seat together...as Sora watched the Scenery outside , Ruete Watches Sora Closely and.... -to be continued pls reply at this Thread if You want me to Post the next chapter, thank you for reading
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Sep 06, 2007, 12:49 AM
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Credits: 13,044 | Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!] good and good again. I really like this story W1nd1n6s, I think that you should end me the complete story, that way I don't have to wait to read the next chapter. ok |
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Sep 06, 2007, 01:54 AM
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Credits: 640 | Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!] I think i could lend you the First 10 pages of This manga if you like...just pm me...it'll be a Hard time if i chat it all down on the manga plus i'm also working on some of my works...
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Sep 06, 2007, 05:01 AM
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Credits: 640 | Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!] Vol.3 - A Total Stranger Chapter.3 | Just you and I | -Continuation As both of them sits... Sora: wow what a beautiful Scenery!!! Ruete: (* Thoughts in her mind *) He's So cute... Their Conversation seems like it not going to end...and then they've reach their destination... Ruete: We're Here. Sora: Wow you've got a very big house! Ruete: (* Smiling *) .... Ruete: (* Smiling *) Lets go inside! Sora: uhm....O.K! As they entered the gate and the Large door... Keiko (* The Maid *): (* Hugs Ruete *)Oh.. Its you miss Ruete!!! Keiko: and...whos this guy? Sora: Good evening Miss... Keiko: (* Giggles *) are you miss Ruete's Fianc- Ruete: we're Friends! Keiko: (* Whispers to Ruete's Ears */* Giggles) Denying it miss Ruete...Your totally grown up mistress, dont worry i wont interfere with you two...I wish you have a Good time..hihihi Ruete: (* Blushing *) Keiko! Stop it! Ruete: (* Blushing *) Its not what you think we're just friends Keiko: (* Giggles *) hmmm...ok so you two are friends...ok Keiko: Whos the guy? Ruete: (* Blushing *) He's Sora... Keiko: (* Giggles *)... Keiko: (* Going out of the house */* Waving Hands*) Bye miss keiko hope you two have a great time!!! Sora Take care of our mistress!!! Ruete: (* Blushing *)Keiko!!! Sora: O.k i will Ruete: (* Blushing *) S-s-s-So-ra.... Ruete: Just wait here i'll Prepare our dinner... | Several minutes Later | Ruete: (* Smiling *)Dinner is Ready! Sora: (* Smiling *) ahh...Coming Sora: Wow! Ruete: Here try this... Sora: This is great ! whats this? Ruete: Its a Curry... Sora: So this is Curry Ruete: Say ahh... Sora: a-a-ahh.... Ruete: (* giggles *) | After their Dinner | Sora: (* Bowing down *)Thank you for the Dinner... Ruete: No its nothing...i awe you a lot Droplets of rain pour down and... Sora: Its raining Ruete: You can stay here by night if you want to... Sora: b-b-b-but... Ruete: Dont be shy its ok... Sora: o-o-ok! Ruete: O.k I'll Show you your room...Follow me as they both walk at the Corridor of the house...Ruete Walk on to a Wet floor and Slip...as Ruete Falls down Sora Saved her by making he's self a Cusion but then... Sora: uhmp... Ruete: (* Shocked * / * Blushing *) Uhmp... They're Lips Catched up on Each other and they've... -to be continued Pls reply on the thread if you want me to post the next Vol. and Chapter of the Story thank you for reading 
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