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Old Sep 03, 2007, 01:11 AM   #12 (permalink)
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Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

ok going from dating a playboy to trying to kiss Sora.
what is up with this chick?
getting there.
keep up the good work
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Old Sep 03, 2007, 07:07 AM   #13 (permalink)
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Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

I Guess i'll take a break for One day...be back tommorrow with new chapter...
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Old Sep 03, 2007, 07:20 AM   #14 (permalink)
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Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

nooooooooooo,
please dont do that, I could not live with myself if you did that
nah it ok take a break you deserve it.
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Old Sep 04, 2007, 04:21 AM   #15 (permalink)
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Vol.3 - A Total Stranger


Chapter.1 | Pls Help me! |


As Their Lips Slowly began Getting Closer on Each other...

Sora: ....
Tsukasa: ....

The Soras Lips Reached its Destination Point

Sora: * Smooch *
Tsukasa: *Blushing* Oh...my!!!

Sora Kissed Tsukasa's Forehead and....

Tsukasa: k-k-iss....

Then Tsukasa Fainted with a Smile on her Face....

| The Next day |

Sora wakes up on he's bed with a Note on He's Side

Note: Sora Pls Stay in the House, and...

Sora: One, Feed the Fish...

Sora: Second, Clean the House....

Sora: Third, Buy The Ingredients...

After Sora Finished The Two Chores Mika left for him, He Bought all the ingridients For Their dinner...
While Walking on the way Home He found A Girl Being Bullied by Gangsters...

Ruete: Hey Let Me Go!!!
Gangster1: (* Holding the Girls Hand*)Come on Miss... Come with us

Gangster2: Dont be so Cruel Miss, Hang out with us
Sora: Hey LEt Go of her!

Gangster1: Huh?
Gangster1: Do you have any idea who you talking to?

Sora: No...
Gangster2: Then Who are you to interfere with us!

Ruete: (*Shocked*) I've Seen This man Before...
Sora: I have no intentions of hurting both of you so please let the girl g-

Suddenly Both of the gangsters Strike Sora Out of Nowhere but then Sora Vanished like a Bubble

Sora: Hmm... Surprise attacks? Pathetic...
Sora: I dont want to Harm both of you... so pls let her go...

Gangster1: What The hell are you talking About Darn...You!!!!
Gangster1: Hey You what ever happens dont let the Girl G-

Gangster2: (* Ouch */ * on the ground *) He Got The Girl Boss...
Gangster 1 & 2: Damn you....

Sora: (* Sweet Cheery smile*) Miss Just Stay right here i'll fix this right away
Ruete: oh thank you, but...i think i've seen you before...Ah! i remember now! You're The School Janitor!!!

Gangster2: Stop Ignoring us Fool!
Gangster1: Lets get rid of him!

Then both of the gangsters Strike towards sora but...
Sora: Both of you are Pathetic!

With just a Blow Sora knocked down one of the gangster and

Sora: Dont you think you Should run now
Gangster2: (* Shivering *) i-i-i- i wont forget this!

Then the gangster Ran away with an incredible Speed...

Sora: Miss Did they hurt you?
Ruete: No I'm Fine,

Ruete: By the way I'm Ruete
Sora: (* Sweet cheery smile *)Oh i see, The Girl that Fainted after Sliping on the floor! By the way im sora

-to be continued
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Old Sep 04, 2007, 04:30 AM   #16 (permalink)
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Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

Now I am going to rant and rave like a two year old child, so please forgive me.
I want the next chapter, I want, I want.
ok got that out of my system.
good job btw and please carry on.
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Old Sep 04, 2007, 04:47 AM   #17 (permalink)
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Now I am going to rant and rave like a two year old child, so please forgive me.
I want the next chapter, I want, I want.
ok got that out of my system.
good job btw and please carry on.
Thanks, Maybe im going to post the next chapter tommorow, i'm gonna work out to the next chapter of Please kiss me!
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Old Sep 05, 2007, 09:25 AM   #18 (permalink)
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Vol.3 - A Total Stranger


Chapter.2 | We're Tied Together |

-Continuation

Ruete: (*Blushing*/*Thoughts in her mind*) So its Sora...Well then!
Sora: (* Cute Stare on Ruete *) ...

Ruete: (*Blushing*) Uhm...
Sora: Well?

Ruete: (* Blushing *) I was Wondering if you could....
Sora: (* Cute Stare on Ruete *)....

Ruete: (* Blushing *) Come in to my house Tonight For Dinner...
Sora: (* Cheery Sweet Smile *) hmm...I'll Try

Ruete: (* Smiling *) O.k i'll wait for you in the Station, 7:30pm ,Heres the Adress w/ Map
Sora: (* Smiled back *) O.K ...

BodyGuards: Miss Ruete!!!
Ruete: Oh Well Sora, LAter Then

Sora: Ok Bye Takecare
BodyGuards: Miss Ruete Pls wait for us...

As Ruete Waves Goodbye on Sora While Running Her Personal Bodyguard Continues to Follow her...with all the ingridients
Sora Went Back home in a Good Condition.

| LAter That night |

Mika went Back home around 6:30 Sora Speaked with her and....

Mika: I'm Home!
Sora: (* Sweet Cheery Smile *)Welcome Home Mika!!!

Mika: Why are you here at The Front of the Door? are you waiting for me?
Sora: Well yes, You see i prepared your dinner and...

Mika: Your Going out?
Sora: (* Smiling *) Yup!

Mika: With who?
Sora: (* Smiling *) uhm...as i remember her name is R-R-Ru...Ruete!

Mika: (* Wondering */* Thoughts in her mind*) Hmm... That name sounds Familiar i think i've heard of that name before
Sora: Maybe i'll come back around 11:00

Mika: O.K

After That Sora Taked Off and is on the way to the Station,

| at the Station |

Sora: (* Wondering *) hmm.. i wonder where Ruete is...
Ruete: (* Covering Sora's Eyes *) Whos this?

Sora: (* Wondering *) uhm....
Ruete: (* Giggles *) if you dont guess me correct i'll give you a Kiss...

Sora: Miss Ruete?
Ruete: (* Smiling *) aww... you guessed me right...maybe you dont want a kiss....

Sora: (* Sweeet Smile *) ....
BodyGuards: (* Finding Ruete *)Miss Ruete Where are you?

Ruete: (* Holding Soras Hand *)Oh no They're Here! Come Quick where Going on to my House! where taking the Train
Sora: (* Hands Held by Ruete *) ....

BodyGuards: (* The've Saw Ruete */* Running towards Ruete*) Miss Ruete Wait for Us...Your Father will be Angry if you will not come home Again Tonight!!!
Ruete: (* Running While holding Sora's Hands *) Tell Father maybe i'll not come home Tonight! Tell him Dont worry About me!

Ruete: (* Still running Trying to catch up on the Train *) Oh no its Closing
Sora: (* Holds Ruetes Hand Tight but Gentle *) Dont worry

Ruete: (* Blushes *) ow!...

Then Sora Help up Ruete on His arms and Ran over an Incredible speed...and they've Make it!!!

(* TRAINS DOOR CLOSED *)

Bodyguards: (* Crumbling Outside *) Miss Ruete!!!
Sora: (* Sweet Smile *) Like i've said to you we'll made it in time...

Ruete: (* Blushes *) Wow your Awesome!
Sora: (* Sweet Smile *) Lets take on a Seat Shall we?

Ruete: (* Blushing *) Ok....

Ruete: (* Blushing *) .....

The Two take a seat together...as Sora watched the Scenery outside , Ruete Watches Sora Closely and....

-to be continued


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Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

good and good again.
I really like this story W1nd1n6s,
I think that you should end me the complete story, that way I don't have to wait to read the next chapter. ok
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I think i could lend you the First 10 pages of This manga if you like...just pm me...it'll be a Hard time if i chat it all down on the manga plus i'm also working on some of my works...
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Vol.3 - A Total Stranger


Chapter.3 | Just you and I |

-Continuation

As both of them sits...

Sora: wow what a beautiful Scenery!!!
Ruete: (* Thoughts in her mind *) He's So cute...

Their Conversation seems like it not going to end...and then they've reach their destination...

Ruete: We're Here.
Sora: Wow you've got a very big house!

Ruete: (* Smiling *) ....
Ruete: (* Smiling *) Lets go inside!

Sora: uhm....O.K!

As they entered the gate and the Large door...

Keiko (* The Maid *): (* Hugs Ruete *)Oh.. Its you miss Ruete!!!
Keiko: and...whos this guy?

Sora: Good evening Miss...
Keiko: (* Giggles *) are you miss Ruete's Fianc-

Ruete: we're Friends!
Keiko: (* Whispers to Ruete's Ears */* Giggles) Denying it miss Ruete...Your totally grown up mistress, dont worry i wont interfere with you two...I wish you have a Good time..hihihi

Ruete: (* Blushing *) Keiko! Stop it!
Ruete: (* Blushing *) Its not what you think we're just friends

Keiko: (* Giggles *) hmmm...ok so you two are friends...ok
Keiko: Whos the guy?

Ruete: (* Blushing *) He's Sora...
Keiko: (* Giggles *)...

Keiko: (* Going out of the house */* Waving Hands*) Bye miss keiko hope you two have a great time!!! Sora Take care of our mistress!!!
Ruete: (* Blushing *)Keiko!!!

Sora: O.k i will
Ruete: (* Blushing *) S-s-s-So-ra....

Ruete: Just wait here i'll Prepare our dinner...

| Several minutes Later |

Ruete: (* Smiling *)Dinner is Ready!
Sora: (* Smiling *) ahh...Coming

Sora: Wow!
Ruete: Here try this...

Sora: This is great ! whats this?
Ruete: Its a Curry...

Sora: So this is Curry
Ruete: Say ahh...

Sora: a-a-ahh....
Ruete: (* giggles *)

| After their Dinner |

Sora: (* Bowing down *)Thank you for the Dinner...
Ruete: No its nothing...i awe you a lot

Droplets of rain pour down and...

Sora: Its raining
Ruete: You can stay here by night if you want to...

Sora: b-b-b-but...
Ruete: Dont be shy its ok...

Sora: o-o-ok!
Ruete: O.k I'll Show you your room...Follow me

as they both walk at the Corridor of the house...Ruete Walk on to a Wet floor and Slip...as Ruete Falls down Sora Saved her by making he's self a Cusion but then...

Sora: uhmp...
Ruete: (* Shocked * / * Blushing *) Uhmp...

They're Lips Catched up on Each other and they've...

-to be continued


Pls reply on the thread if you want me to post the next Vol. and Chapter of the Story thank you for reading
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reply on the thread if you want me to post the next Vol. and Chapter of the Story thank you for reading
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