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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    Quote Originally Posted by overload View Post
    Now I am going to rant and rave like a two year old child, so please forgive me.
    I want the next chapter, I want, I want.
    ok got that out of my system.
    good job btw and please carry on.
    Thanks, Maybe im going to post the next chapter tommorow, i'm gonna work out to the next chapter of Please kiss me!

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]


    Vol.3 - A Total Stranger


    Chapter.2 | We're Tied Together |

    -Continuation

    Ruete: (*Blushing*/*Thoughts in her mind*) So its Sora...Well then!
    Sora: (* Cute Stare on Ruete *) ...

    Ruete: (*Blushing*) Uhm...
    Sora: Well?

    Ruete: (* Blushing *) I was Wondering if you could....
    Sora: (* Cute Stare on Ruete *)....

    Ruete: (* Blushing *) Come in to my house Tonight For Dinner...
    Sora: (* Cheery Sweet Smile *) hmm...I'll Try

    Ruete: (* Smiling *) O.k i'll wait for you in the Station, 7:30pm ,Heres the Adress w/ Map
    Sora: (* Smiled back *) O.K ...

    BodyGuards: Miss Ruete!!!
    Ruete: Oh Well Sora, LAter Then

    Sora: Ok Bye Takecare
    BodyGuards: Miss Ruete Pls wait for us...

    As Ruete Waves Goodbye on Sora While Running Her Personal Bodyguard Continues to Follow her...with all the ingridients
    Sora Went Back home in a Good Condition.

    | LAter That night |

    Mika went Back home around 6:30 Sora Speaked with her and....

    Mika: I'm Home!
    Sora: (* Sweet Cheery Smile *)Welcome Home Mika!!!

    Mika: Why are you here at The Front of the Door? are you waiting for me?
    Sora: Well yes, You see i prepared your dinner and...

    Mika: Your Going out?
    Sora: (* Smiling *) Yup!

    Mika: With who?
    Sora: (* Smiling *) uhm...as i remember her name is R-R-Ru...Ruete!

    Mika: (* Wondering */* Thoughts in her mind*) Hmm... That name sounds Familiar i think i've heard of that name before
    Sora: Maybe i'll come back around 11:00

    Mika: O.K

    After That Sora Taked Off and is on the way to the Station,

    | at the Station |

    Sora: (* Wondering *) hmm.. i wonder where Ruete is...
    Ruete: (* Covering Sora's Eyes *) Whos this?

    Sora: (* Wondering *) uhm....
    Ruete: (* Giggles *) if you dont guess me correct i'll give you a Kiss...

    Sora: Miss Ruete?
    Ruete: (* Smiling *) aww... you guessed me right...maybe you dont want a kiss....

    Sora: (* Sweeet Smile *) ....
    BodyGuards: (* Finding Ruete *)Miss Ruete Where are you?

    Ruete: (* Holding Soras Hand *)Oh no They're Here! Come Quick where Going on to my House! where taking the Train
    Sora: (* Hands Held by Ruete *) ....

    BodyGuards: (* The've Saw Ruete */* Running towards Ruete*) Miss Ruete Wait for Us...Your Father will be Angry if you will not come home Again Tonight!!!
    Ruete: (* Running While holding Sora's Hands *) Tell Father maybe i'll not come home Tonight! Tell him Dont worry About me!

    Ruete: (* Still running Trying to catch up on the Train *) Oh no its Closing
    Sora: (* Holds Ruetes Hand Tight but Gentle *) Dont worry

    Ruete: (* Blushes *) ow!...

    Then Sora Help up Ruete on His arms and Ran over an Incredible speed...and they've Make it!!!

    (* TRAINS DOOR CLOSED *)

    Bodyguards: (* Crumbling Outside *) Miss Ruete!!!
    Sora: (* Sweet Smile *) Like i've said to you we'll made it in time...

    Ruete: (* Blushes *) Wow your Awesome!
    Sora: (* Sweet Smile *) Lets take on a Seat Shall we?

    Ruete: (* Blushing *) Ok....

    Ruete: (* Blushing *) .....

    The Two take a seat together...as Sora watched the Scenery outside , Ruete Watches Sora Closely and....

    -to be continued


    pls reply at this Thread if You want me to Post the next chapter, thank you for reading

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    good and good again.
    I really like this story W1nd1n6s,
    I think that you should end me the complete story, that way I don't have to wait to read the next chapter. ok

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    I think i could lend you the First 10 pages of This manga if you like...just pm me...it'll be a Hard time if i chat it all down on the manga plus i'm also working on some of my works...
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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]


    Vol.3 - A Total Stranger


    Chapter.3 | Just you and I |

    -Continuation

    As both of them sits...

    Sora: wow what a beautiful Scenery!!!
    Ruete: (* Thoughts in her mind *) He's So cute...

    Their Conversation seems like it not going to end...and then they've reach their destination...

    Ruete: We're Here.
    Sora: Wow you've got a very big house!

    Ruete: (* Smiling *) ....
    Ruete: (* Smiling *) Lets go inside!

    Sora: uhm....O.K!

    As they entered the gate and the Large door...

    Keiko (* The Maid *): (* Hugs Ruete *)Oh.. Its you miss Ruete!!!
    Keiko: and...whos this guy?

    Sora: Good evening Miss...
    Keiko: (* Giggles *) are you miss Ruete's Fianc-

    Ruete: we're Friends!
    Keiko: (* Whispers to Ruete's Ears */* Giggles) Denying it miss Ruete...Your totally grown up mistress, dont worry i wont interfere with you two...I wish you have a Good time..hihihi

    Ruete: (* Blushing *) Keiko! Stop it!
    Ruete: (* Blushing *) Its not what you think we're just friends

    Keiko: (* Giggles *) hmmm...ok so you two are friends...ok
    Keiko: Whos the guy?

    Ruete: (* Blushing *) He's Sora...
    Keiko: (* Giggles *)...

    Keiko: (* Going out of the house */* Waving Hands*) Bye miss keiko hope you two have a great time!!! Sora Take care of our mistress!!!
    Ruete: (* Blushing *)Keiko!!!

    Sora: O.k i will
    Ruete: (* Blushing *) S-s-s-So-ra....

    Ruete: Just wait here i'll Prepare our dinner...

    | Several minutes Later |

    Ruete: (* Smiling *)Dinner is Ready!
    Sora: (* Smiling *) ahh...Coming

    Sora: Wow!
    Ruete: Here try this...

    Sora: This is great ! whats this?
    Ruete: Its a Curry...

    Sora: So this is Curry
    Ruete: Say ahh...

    Sora: a-a-ahh....
    Ruete: (* giggles *)

    | After their Dinner |

    Sora: (* Bowing down *)Thank you for the Dinner...
    Ruete: No its nothing...i awe you a lot

    Droplets of rain pour down and...

    Sora: Its raining
    Ruete: You can stay here by night if you want to...

    Sora: b-b-b-but...
    Ruete: Dont be shy its ok...

    Sora: o-o-ok!
    Ruete: O.k I'll Show you your room...Follow me

    as they both walk at the Corridor of the house...Ruete Walk on to a Wet floor and Slip...as Ruete Falls down Sora Saved her by making he's self a Cusion but then...

    Sora: uhmp...
    Ruete: (* Shocked * / * Blushing *) Uhmp...

    They're Lips Catched up on Each other and they've...

    -to be continued


    Pls reply on the thread if you want me to post the next Vol. and Chapter of the Story thank you for reading

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    reply on the thread if you want me to post the next Vol. and Chapter of the Story thank you for reading
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    continue it pleasePls

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]


    Vol.4 - My Memory

    Chapter.1 | Angelic Presence |


    as they're lips catched up on each Other and Suddenly they've Kissed!

    A Moment of Silence Breaks through the House and...

    Ruete: (* Shocked * / * Staring at Sora * ).....
    Sora: (* Shocked * / * Staring at Ruete * ).....

    but then A Blinding Light Appeared on the back of Sora, Feathers Begins to Fall on to the sky...and

    Ruete: (* Shocked *) What the!!! w-w-w-hats going on....
    Sora: (* Stands * / * Eyes closed *) The Light behind my back its warm...

    Ruete: Sora!!!! Whats Happening to you!!!!
    Sora: (* Smiling Gently on Ruete *) Dont worry... i think i'm going to be all fine...

    Suddenly when the final Piece of Feather was Returned in Sora...A Flash of a Much more Blinding Light filled the house and....


    Ruete wakes up on Her Bed...

    Ruete: (* Yawns * / * Opens her eyes up *) What happened?
    Ruete: (* Wondering *)The blinding light... Where is Sora???

    Sora knocks on the door of Ruete's Room and...

    Sora: (* Sweet Cheery smile *) Good morning!
    Ruete: (* Wondering *) S-s-s-sora! ... A-a-are you ok? ... Last night!!! The Blinding light....and the Ki--

    Sora: (* Smiling *) hhmmm..?... What are you talking about, Just relax...i know you're Stressed, last night you fainted, thats why i'm here to check out if your fine...but it looks like your alright, i shall be going then...bye
    Sora: (* Closes the Door *)

    Ruete Felt a little Strange inside her self then wondering if the things that was on her mind is just an imagination

    Ruete: (* Touches her lips * / * Blushes *) Is it all true?...the blinding light and the Feathers...and He's ...Kiss
    Sora: (* Behind the door *) I Used my Magic on to her...Is she gonna be alright? Who really am I

    -To be continued


    Note: As the Feathers touched Sora's Body, Some Pieces of he's Memory Comes Back, Including Some of He's Arts/Magic but he Still dont know that he's an Angel and He Still dont know what he's doing on Earth...Well thats all for now...

    | pls reply at this Thread if You want me to Post the next chapter, thank you for reading :Hattip:|

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    Re: [Memory no Tenshi! Tenshi!]

    Quote Originally Posted by w1nd1n6s View Post
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    | pls reply at this Thread if You want me to Post the next chapter, thank you for reading :Hattip:|
    man this is awsome my manga's arnt like this (im not good @ romance just like if it was obvious that the people fall in love.

    write more it keeps me w8ting for another awsome chapter

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