Thread: Mercy

Originally Posted by CBtay01

ok so this is probaly be the last post i do in a while but so any way for thoses people that tend to read all the stuff post thank you and if you post back i thank you again..... so any way i have been writing a story and i dont really know how it is goingto end but any way It is called Mercy - A tale of Love .... i think any way so here is the first part ... if people like it i will continue to write up on it




A Human walks in the forest boarder lining the French and Germen sides. they are not alone for in the bushes lay a beast that knows no fear, that has no Mercy.....

Mercy -A Tale of Love

As the vampire stalks her pray, She wonders could she stop? No , it wouldn't matter, she wouldn't be able to ignore the burning, the hunger within her.
She takes in a deep breath , and jumps. She redies her self and bites hard and leathal right on the neck, poor human, Soon She tasts the sweet tast of blood , She finishes and then is on her way . But something is bugging her. Then she realizes She did not look at her prays face as she goes back she looks at her victim, it is none other than her love! Her love whom she had not seen in hell knows when . She takes his watch to look at the date and it is 11/10/1769! She was remembering now. Who she really was. Her name was Faith, Faith De' Cillion'. She was a member of the royal family, the ones that lead the ones that ordered. She stood there in a blood soaked dress, the one that she got transformed in. Her once Beutiful Black waist long hair was now tangled and ridden with leaves from previous hunts. Her lovely face which many people once adored ,wasd smeared with blood . And her love!! Oh how he had changed!! He had gotten taller and his once ear length hair qwas well past his shoulders. She takes out his watch ti look at the date , 11/10/1769!! The last time she had seen the date was three years ago… 4/6/1766, during the spring ball…


That is all I have so far and I am debating wether to finish it or not … please put in a response

I love the story and you

and here

Punish me
Punish me
punish me
straw becomes gold
and gold becomes stone
your height makes me small
you may be my punisher
yeah

The Lord takes
the Lord gives

Punish me
punish me
you mean yes
and I think no
include me in your prayer
before the wind blows even colder

Your height makes me small
you should be my punisher
you should be my punisher

Your height makes me small
you should be my punisher
your height makes him small
you should be my punishment
the Lord takes
the Lord gives
but he gives only to
those he loves
punish me

i like it sounds interesting i need you to go a little further though for it has me wanting more

cool i have anouther chapter but i seem to have left it at home so i am not sure if i can type it up any time soon but i promise i will have much more o fthe story on here sometime soon

Hey i should put my on too thx cbtay now i can post some when i have the time

Originally Posted by CBtay01

ok so this is probaly be the last post i do in a while but so any way for thoses people that tend to read all the stuff post thank you and if you post back i thank you again..... so any way i have been writing a story and i dont really know how it is goingto end but any way It is called Mercy - A tale of Love .... i think any way so here is the first part ... if people like it i will continue to write up on it




A Human walks in the forest boarder lining the French and Germen sides. they are not alone for in the bushes lay a beast that knows no fear, that has no Mercy.....

Mercy -A Tale of Love

As the vampire stalks her pray, She wonders could she stop? No , it wouldn't matter, she wouldn't be able to ignore the burning, the hunger within her.
She takes in a deep breath , and jumps. She redies her self and bites hard and leathal right on the neck, poor human, Soon She tasts the sweet tast of blood , She finishes and then is on her way . But something is bugging her. Then she realizes She did not look at her prays face as she goes back she looks at her victim, it is none other than her love! Her love whom she had not seen in hell knows when . She takes his watch to look at the date and it is 11/10/1769! She was remembering now. Who she really was. Her name was Faith, Faith De' Cillion'. She was a member of the royal family, the ones that lead the ones that ordered. She stood there in a blood soaked dress, the one that she got transformed in. Her once Beutiful Black waist long hair was now tangled and ridden with leaves from previous hunts. Her lovely face which many people once adored ,wasd smeared with blood . And her love!! Oh how he had changed!! He had gotten taller and his once ear length hair qwas well past his shoulders. She takes out his watch ti look at the date , 11/10/1769!! The last time she had seen the date was three years ago… 4/6/1766, during the spring ball…


That is all I have so far and I am debating wether to finish it or not … please put in a response

I loved the story why don't you continue please for me i want to hear what happens to Faith

Agreed n i wil post some of my own............................................... ..

alright look for Mercy 2.............................................