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    Part one

    (part one takes place before itachi kills everyone) once there was a young girl whom couldn't go to the ninja academy, however, she was more skilled than itachi himself. she was age thirteen and only had one friend. she was of the , uchiha clan and her name was izanami uchiha. itachi uchiha was her one and only friend. lately he had been acting strange. then that horrible night he came to her house and killed her parents. she was frightened and was about to fight him. he then dropped his sword and used the mangenko sharingan on her. he didn't use it to torture her though. he showed her why he REALLY killed everyone.......(continued in part two)

    (everything in this pretty much is nothing like the story if anyone asks any questions or if something doesnt make sense please ignore it)


    Part Two
    izanami saw a little younger itachi and it showed him and his teacher. his teacher had short blond hair and wore his headband around his neck. he was uchiha too. all of a sudden izanami saw his teacher(name unknown) drown shisui. and then she saw him use the mangenko on itachi. over and over again. then itachi told her that the true secret to discovering the mangenko is having pure hatred against another of the uchiha race. itachi told her that he had the mangenko and tsukoyumi used on him everyday for two yrs straight and that's how he got those wrinkles. he said he felt mentally unstable and thought he was dreaming when he killed everyone. and izanami had waken him up. "i have to go away now. i cant ever show my face in this village."
    "ill go w/ you!"
    "no!"
    "i have to!"
    "fine! but i didn't kill sasuke, and he still isnt home yet"
    "you dont have to kill him"
    "youre right, we'll leave tonight and get him tomorrow! then ill explain to him. i know he'll hate me, but after i explain maybe he could forgive me someday"
    all of a sudden the both turned because they heard a door open. izanami hid as sasuke came into the room...(continued in part3)

    Part Three
    as sasuke walked into the room itachi could have made it out in time, but at the last moment his eyes glazed over and he totally changed. then the entire thing happened, along with his monolog.
    as sasuke ran in fear away itachi suddenly woke up as izanami called him. she was crying, and then he said," where's sasuke..? where's sasuke..?"
    he then realized what he had done and his eyes went back to normal. he didn't make noise when he cried but steady tears came down. he hugged izanami tightly, and they just stood there.
    "it's okay. let's leave. let's run away and some day when youre healed we can tell sasuke. someday.."izanami said between tears. then walked off slowly arm in arm, crying at both their horrible sick losses...(dont worry there are only 2 more parts)


    Part Four
    they were together for a while. they lived as rogue ninja being hired by various people and traveled to almost every nation. then one day as izanami was coming back from a mission she was caught off guard by little girl. "can i try on youre head band? please, ive always wanted to be ninja."
    the kind hearted izanami complied. all of a sudden ninja surrounded her. the little girl fled horrified. izanami fought off the shinobi killing them all. then she found the little girl and asked her where her parents were. she escorted her home. when she went back to the inn room where her and itachi stayed, she found it dark. it was un natural. itachi was under the odd insanity again. he popped up behind her and slit the throat of unknowing izanami...(final part coming soon)

    (final part)
    as izanami started dying, itachiwoke up again and realized what he had done. he cried and she understood that he didn't mean to do it. then she told him that if all of the demons were put together in one place, those whom had put them togther would all have the gift of resurrection. and so itachi turned to the organization that did just that w/ the goal of someday having izanami back w/ him again.. the end.
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    Re: My itachi fantasy

    very nice story!!!! i like it...but i don't know about people that don't "like" itachi..
    but if theres more i would love to hear it

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    Re: My itachi fantasy

    Why hello, Mary Sue

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    Re: My itachi fantasy

    Quote Originally Posted by tsurara View Post
    Why hello, Mary Sue
    That's kind of obvious isn't it?

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    Re: My itachi fantasy

    O.o oh boy...hmmm...I will actually offer you some help...here is a link to a topic on how to write a fanfic...(a naruto based fanfic at that) without falling into Mary-Sue syndrome.

    How To Write Naruto Fanfiction And Avoid Mary-Sues


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    Quote Originally Posted by chiefblackhammer View Post
    O.o oh boy...hmmm...I will actually offer you some help...here is a link to a topic on how to write a fanfic...(a naruto based fanfic at that) without falling into Mary-Sue syndrome.

    How To Write Naruto Fanfiction And Avoid Mary-Sues
    Oh man that's the funniest (and saddest) stuff I've read all week!
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    Re: My itachi fantasy

    Damn it, you three made me think that was something interesting to read. Ended up reading both the fanfic and that weird article.

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    Re: My itachi fantasy

    Quote Originally Posted by Legend View Post
    Damn it, you three made me think that was something interesting to read. Ended up reading both the fanfic and that weird article.
    Then my job here is done!

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