Okay.. i get that this is only a preview of a story your thinking about writing but you have to give up details.. Right now it looks like a movie i just watched the other night and it's a very common story line. I think it might be a really good idea if you give us a little more details... Like why she's at a new school, the name of her friends, who the K!-team's boss is.. things like that.. maybe she falls in love or something... I dunno but you have to be more specific... details are the key to a wonderful story.


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