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    Re: [Please Kiss me!]

    Ok W1nd1n6s, how long are you going to keep me in suspense?
    I mean you know how I like to read your stuff, so hurry with the next chapter already.

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    Re: [Please Kiss me!]

    I fell the same way!!! His writing style is amazing!!!

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    Re: [Please Kiss me!]

    hehehe....just w8 guys... after all i have some works to do you know...i'm finishing my new work, "Memory no Ningen Ningen" Just relax guys... after i finished 5 pages of the manga i'll write The next chapter alright...Peace

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    Re: [Please Kiss me!]

    a Chapter.4 - | Oh no Its Trouble! |

    -continuation

    Suddenly a strange feeling inside Amaki shizune, Struck her, Her Heart beats faster and her Face Blushes and...

    Inukai: Listen,
    Amaki: (* Stares at Inukai with crumbling eyes *)...

    Inukai: (* Smiles *) not all Guys are Jerks, Infact there are some nice guys to.
    Amaki: (* Blushes *) Is t-t-t-that True....

    Inukai: (* Smile *) Yes, Infact you can come to me if you have some problems, I can Help you Overcome it....
    Amaki: (* Blushes */* Stares at Inukai *) Then Can you help me now?

    Inukai: (* Smile *) Offcourse!
    Amaki: (* Blushing */* Holds Inukai's Right hand puts on her chest*) Can you Feel it?

    Inukai: (* Thoughts */* Shocked *) Whats with this Girl!?,
    Amaki: (* Blushes */*Closes her eyes *) Can you feel my Heart Beating???

    Inukai: (* State of Confusion */* Shocked */* Sweating *) y-y-y-y-yes!
    Amaki: (* Blushes */*Stares at Inukai */* Closes her eyes *) Then I need you to kiss me....

    Inukai: (* Shocked *) w-w-w-w-what!!!!
    Amaki: (* Kissing gesture *) ....

    Inukai: (* Pale */* Sweating *) T-t-t-t-the thing you ask is impossible
    Amaki: (* Teary eyes */* Blushing*) But why?, You said you will help me....

    Inukai: (* Pale */*Sweating *) T-t-t-the thing is im a Teacher...and your a...
    Amaki: (* Teary eyes */* Blushing *) I dont! CAre...

    Amaki: (* Hugs Inukai */* Teary eyes *) Teacher! I Love you! , At the first time i saw you i think i..i...
    Amaki: (* Touches Inukai's Face */ * lips geting closer and closer *)

    Inukai: (* Thoughts */* Sweaty */* Pale *) This is so Unnatural ,i'm done if someone see us,

    But then when inukai Looks at the doorway, He saw a girl, and then

    Inukai: (* Pushes Amaki *) Hey Wait This isnt what you think!

    Then the mystery person Ran away and.....

    -to be continued


    if you want me to continue the next chapter of the story just reply to this thread
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    Re: [Please Kiss me!]

    WRite more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!its AWsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    Re: [Please Kiss me!]

    Lol ^^ This reminded me of xxxHolic and I love xxxHolic, so you MUST continue this, please? It's very cool ^^ I just LOVE it... Enjoyed reading it so much. Though at first I had to get used to your style of writing... but that comes with time ^^

    Very nice work!!!!! I'm glad I read this ^^ And I really want more, this will be much better as watching xxxHolic again :P

    EDIT: Just read the last two chapters- very cool ^^ very interesting- a great work, you've put somwthing that I never am able to put in my storys good but that is important in a good comedy kind of romantic story- misunderstandings ^^ It's very cool. Please ontinue ^^

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: [Please Kiss me!]

    im blushing......hihihih...thank you for reading

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    Re: [Please Kiss me!]

    ok so now I get the feeling that you must write more and more...
    oh and can you send me the scans for this one some time?

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