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    Red Rain

    It was a sorrowful night in Seattle, Washington for the Flinder Sisters. Their father William, was marring off Elaine and Jain, the youngest of the four sisters, as mistress' to one of his friends for some land and money.
    The Flinder sisters were supposed to be packing Elaine and Jain's stuff, but in stead they were making plans to run away and packing a few of their own things. They decided they would go there separate ways, so if one of them got caught the other three would have a chance at a new start. They made plans to meet up in Inola, a small town in Oklahoma that they came across while moving. Their father was always dragging them around to big towns all over the U.S. to get more money and land, so he would never think to look for them in Inola. After they helped each other slip out the kitchen widow, they said there good byes, went different directions, and started there own personal journeys.


    ((Tell me what you think. If it's good I will start the first chapter of Elaine's story.))
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    Re: Red Rain

    First of all can you please make the sizes of the your thread samll b\c it's hard to read ....
    And then yahh you can start the first chept. it's nice and I like soo complete what did you start...

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    Elaine was glad she thought to get some money before starting her expedition. She didn't have much stuff with her but she had enough to get her to friends house. Her friend, Erin, was one of the few friends she kept up with and talked to almost everyday, but she hadn't talked to her in a while. Elaine's sisters had told her while they were getting ready to run away, to dress grungy and to leave all her electronics behind. So she was wearing an old t-shirt and her favorite worn out pair of jeans. She had been travailing for two days now and was half way to Erin's house.

    'Man Erin better have working water at her place or I am going to die.' Elaine thought to herself as she walked down an unknown street. There were a couple of streetlights and several vacant houses. As she walked past a few more houses she decided to stop and rest in one of the vacant houses. She had been out of water for half a day now and only had two hours of sleep. As she slipped though one of the broken windows her wrist caught on a piece of glass.

    "Ow, shoot! Why do things like this always happen to me?” Elaine exclaimed as her feet touched the floor. After setting her bag down she tore the seam off the bottom of her shirt, rapped it around her wrist and tied it off. Then she laid down using her bag as a pillow. Just as she was about to go to sleep she heard something that sounded really close, but she was to dehydrate and tried to stay awake. The last thing she heard was someone pulling a gun and cursing in the distance.

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