Thread: The return of a old friend

This is the first part to a Ouran High School Host Club story I'm working on tell me if it's any good

A a pale 15 year old girl was walking quietly through Ouran High School trying not to draw too much attention to herself. Her name was Eve Reilly. She was looking for an old friend of hers who she had been trying to get in contact with for many years.

A young looking blond boy walked passed her followed by a much taller and more intimating dark haired boy. “Um excuse me could aether of you tell me where I could find Haruhi Fujioka? I was told she came to school here” Eve asked and they turned to her. They looked at her a little oddly as she wasn't in uniform but the little blond boy smiled up at her.

“Sure we can take you to Haruhi we were just going to meet up with her and our other friends.” He said happily and she couldn't help but smile back at him.

“Thank you” She said.

“No problem. I'm Honey and this is Mori.” He said smiling and tock her hand and skipped off dragging her along.

“Nice to meet you both.” She said smiling at them as she tried to keep up with Honey and his skipping.

“How do you know Haruhi?” Mori asked in his deep voice.

“I'm a old friend of hers I have been living in the UK for the last few years and just got back and wanted to see how she was.” She said a hint of sadness in her voice. She was sad because she had no idea how she was doing as Haruhi hadn't replied to any of her letters. When she first left she sent one every week but then it went down to one every month but she didn't get a reply to any of them.

“What's your name I don't think Haruhi has mentioned any other friends before?” Honey asked and Eve frowned.

“Eve Reilly.” She said as she followed them trying not to trip over the bottom of her jeans that were a tad long for her. She was wearing black jeans, a black tee shirt and a red hoodie and some black all star converse. Her long brown hair was straitened but still slightly messy and she had a fringe that all most covered her amazing blue eyes.

They led her to an old music room. “Haruhi someone's here to see you!”Honey called and Haruhi looked up. She had been tidying up as all the girls had just left for the day. When Haruhi saw Eve she dropped everything she was holding (thankfully there was nothing valuable) and looked at her in shock.

“E....Eve?” Haruhi said in shock .

“Hay.” Eve said smiling happily not even thinking about asking why she wad dressed in a guys uniform. She just ran up to her and hugged her tightly.

“How....how are you here?” She asked in shock and Eve stepped back and looked at her a little confused.

“Oh um my dad passed away I am living with my grandparents. What are you wearing?” She giggled. “I didn't think it was possible for someone to look cute and handsome.” She said playfully and to the Host Club's surprise Haruhi blushed and smiled shyly at her. The club had made her blush many times but not like that, that was different.

“It's um complicated. “She said and smiled at her sadly. “I have missed you.” She whispered.

“I missed you to hun. So why didn't you write back to me?” She asked.

“I didn't get any letters.” She lied and Eve knew it but just nodded and chose to believe that she missed her and just hadn't gotten her letters and not that she didn't write back to her just because she didn't want to.

“Um Haruhi who's your friend?” Tamaki asked.

“Eve Reilly nice to meet you.” Eve said smiling at him and looked all the boys up and down and smiled. “Haruhi what did I tell you. You should always tie up hot guys once you catch them. “ She said and Haruhi giggled, which was a shock to the club. They had never seen her giggle before, it was way to cute and girly for her.

“Well nice to meet you I am Tamaki and this is the Host club.” He said and kissed her hand.