Sounds good I'd read it depending if they have funny moments... Hint: Chibi momentsOkay, well I'm 15 and have LOVED manga & anime for the last 8 years. I have drawn it for about 7 now. And here is the summary story I'm working on now. ~10 years ago, Clay Gardell's father was killed by none other then Death( the Grim Reaper) himself. Clay charged toward Death demanding his father to be left alone, in return, Death cut Clay with his scythe. "Let this be a lesson boy... those who mess with death... will soon meet their fate." Death breathes heavily " Never forget that..." and with that final sentence he vanished, taking Clay's father's body, and leaving Clay (more dead then alive) lying on the floor. 10 years later, (Clay is now 15) Clay is a lonely orphan and has been feeling... strange lately. He has loved no one since his father's death except for the very sickley, 6 year old orphan named Elizabeth. "Hey kiddo feeling better?" says Clay, already knowing the answer. Then a low wind flows through the orphanage. "What is this sensation?" Clay mutters under his breath. His hair then grows and eye begins to throb with pain. Lucifer (the devil) explodes into the orphanage, not for Clay, but for Elizabeth. "Stay behind me!" yells Clay. Lucifer easily throws Clay from where he stood, and grabs Elizabeth. Screaming and crying, Elizabeth says, "God please save me!!!" Lucifer stared at her coldly and says "Foolish mortal.. can't you see?! I am your God!"~ That's all I've got so far. I have already illustrated 8pages. My drawing style is a sort of mixture between Shoujo and Occult. So... what do you think? Please reply your opinions. Also, the main charecter's name is Clay Gardell, which means "Human Defender" in the Teutonic language.