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    Re: The song...

    hey the story is getting more intresting by time! a very good work and keep it up!
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    okay.1 post is all i need to write and i won't get in trouble

    "Well, if you don't have a place to live,"said Hailey "Why don'y you stay at
    our village?"
    "Yeah."said Aura"No one would mind. Everyone is nice."

    Jerry was silent for a moment. Then he said."Where would I live?"
    "Hmmm.Yeah where would he live?"said Hailey half to herself.

    "Well,he could live in that house. You know,the one no one lives in? said Aura
    " You mean the abandoned one?"ask Hailey.
    "Yep!" replied Aura

    "Yeah!!"said Hailey.She turn and looked at Jerry."You could live there. No one lives ther anymore cause some of the things are broken."

    "I don't know..."said Jerry


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    Re: The song...

    No you don't Renn ^^ :P You can post as soon as you get one response, the main thing is not to double post. So you can't justify yourself with that :P ^^ lol jk!

    It's quite interesting, continue please ^^ I enjoy reading this...

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    Re: The song...

    Heres more
    "well if you don't have a place to live"said Hailey"why don't you stay at our village."

    "Yeah."said Aura "No one would mind. Everyone is very nice."

    Jerry is silent for a moment.Then he says"Where would I live?"

    "Hmmm Yeah where would he live?" Hailey said half to herself.

    "Well, he could live in that house. You know, the one no one lives in?"said Aura

    "You mean that abondoned one?"ask Hailey

    "yep!"replied Aura

    "yeah!"said Hailey. She turns and looks ar=t Jerry."You could live there.
    No one live there anymore cause a lot of stuff there is broken."


    "I don't know...."

    "Come on!!!"begged Hailey "We can fix it up. Winter has come early!!!"

    "Are you sure?"ask Jerry

    Aura nodded " Yes. Look you're even shivering."

    Jerry hadn't notice he was cold. He indeed was shivering. Here he was
    in a t-shirt and pants, while they had coats, earmuffs, mittens,everything
    to keep them warm.

    Hailey takes off her coat and hand it to Jerry.

    "No, its okay.You should have it"

    Hailey shakes her head."Its okay. The village is a few miles away.
    Aura grab the basket and lets go."
    Last edited by Renn; Oct 09, 2007 at 07:19 PM. Reason: spelling erros

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    Re: The song...

    rele interesting, can you PLZ continue, ive got this on my Ipod
    you should rele think of making this a short story or even a novel

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    nice plot...its been a while since i get off here... whew

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    Re: The song...

    intresting as always!continue pls!want to know what will happen!
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    Oh thanks everyone!!!!!this means so much to me!!!! okay well heres more but i don't know how much i'll get cause i'm at school ^^

    Aura bent down and picked up the basket that was full of herbs and berries.

    "Come on." said Hailey. Her and Aura walks away.

    From there, Jerry followed them.


    Jerry was a few feet behind the girls.

    "So,whats your village like?"asked Jerry.

    "Umm..."said Hailey."Well,right now it covered in snow,but in the spring,
    its cover in flowers.Hey don't get me wrong,in the snow its pretty too...."Hailey continues.

    Jerry then looks around.He thought he heard something....maybe a rustle. Its
    coming from the bushes.Jerry stops.

    Hailey and Aura also stop and look at Jerry.

    "Whats wrong,Jerry?"asked Hailey.

    "I think I heard something...."answers Jerry. He pulls out his pocket knife.

    Slowly comes out.....a rabbit. Everyone stares at it.

    "Its..its a rabbit."said Aura. She heads toward it.

    "Aura,stop! You might scare it." said Hailey. Aura stops.

    "What if I...."

    "No,Aura!!!!"

    "But it has happen before."and before Hailey can do anything,Aura gets
    down real low and starts to sing.

    Jerry never heard anything so......



    sorry had to stop but thats all i got maybe 2morrow i'll write more....hope you like!!!!^^
    Last edited by Renn; Oct 11, 2007 at 12:07 PM. Reason: writing erros

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