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    lol ^^ nice... very interesting... A rabbit!!!!!!!! ^^ Soooooo cute!!!! I can just imagine that- a cute wite rabbit with big blue eyes and long ears, staring at you... ^^ soooo cuuute!!!!!!!!

    Anyways... it's still quite interesting to read, but I really want to read the next chapter now... u stoped in an importand part O.o

    Keep it up Renn ^^

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    Re: The song...

    Hmm... this is a very interesting story... i like the way the plotting goes...im intrigued now abt the beggining.. what really happen b4..

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    Oh thank you so much!!!yeah that was the end of chapter 1. i just now made this up but ch.1 is called the song so this is the end of it ...................lol now on to chapter 2!!

    "Jerry.Jerry. Wake up Jerry."

    Jerry opens his eyes to see that Aura is staring at him.

    "Wh-what?"asks Jerry groggy

    "You're going to be late for work!"

    "Oh sorry!! So whats for breakfast?"

    "Eggs ham,and toast."answers Aura

    "Okay,I'll get ready and we can have breakfast before I go, kay?"

    "Alright"AAura leaves the room.

    Jerry hurries and gets dress.

    When he comes out of his room he sees that Aura
    has already set the table. Jerry sits down.

    Aura comees and puts two pieces of ham,some eggs,and a piece of
    toast on his plate.She sits down and puts some eggs on her's.

    "So,...are you okay? asks Aura cautionly
    "Hmm.What do you mean?"said Jerry

    "Well you were mumbling in your sleep."said Aura.

    "Oh."said Jerry."Well i had this weird dream."

    "What kinda a dream?"

    "Well it was like a memory."

    "Memory? What happen in it?"ask Aura

    ".....It was about when I first met you and Hailey."
    replied Jerry.

    "Oh." Aura looks down."Thats when...Hailey was still......."

    Jerry nods his head."Yeah.Hard to belive its been five years since then."



    Well i'll leave you guys with that...and just to let you know Jerry was 12 when he met the girls.Also Aura was 10.you do the math....hope you like!!!^^

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    hey this is a really great story !! Keep it up (does the double posting rule really apply to stories too? cuz if it does that's just suckie)

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    wow getting very very intresting!!what will happen?ooooo i'm so curious!!continue soon!!
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    its really awesome renn, i absolutely love it. very bery good job renn^^ i cant wait for the next part

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    Ahh... that's why it was in the past passive... nice ^^ Nice work indeed...

    I can't wait for the next chapter... When will the action begin? Will there be fights? I'm in a fighting mood... I enjoy reading this... ^^ Nice worky Renn!!!!

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    yeah well the part where he wakes up in the future is the next chapter.....but here it is
    (Oh and there will be fighting soon...)

    Jerry finish the last of his breakfast.

    "Okay.Thanks for breakfast. I'll see you when i get home."said Jerry

    "Yeah.Bye" Jerry notice Aura didn't have the same ethusiasim as other days.


    Jerry walks into the Alliance Headquaters.

    "Ah,there you are Jerry."said someone behind him
    Jerry turns around"ColonalHiggs! What is it?"

    "You were just the person I was looking for."says Higgs

    "Like i said what is it?"asks Jerry

    "You never seem to relize i have power over?"says Higgs"There are some monsters
    outside the city."says Higgs

    "What?!"
    "Yeah I know. They don't usally come this close to the city."

    "Do you know the cause?"asks Jerry

    "I'm not sure,but Tifa says there might be a disturbance in the forest
    nearby."Higgs just shrugs.

    "So what do you want me to do?"

    "Well I'm going to send you and Nole to the city's front gate"Said Higgs"You
    have to watch it til your night shifts comes by."

    "Alright.Where is Nole?"asks Jerry

    "He should already be at the gates."answers Higgs

    "Okay.I'll be going now." Jerry turns and starts to leave.

    "ValDear."calles Higgs

    Jerry turns around."What?"

    "Be careful. Something fishy is going on. I can feel it."says Colonal Higgs

    Jerry stares at him. He never heard Colonal Higgs sound worry.

    "Oh and tell Nole to put up the boat tonight."

    Jerry nods his head"Alright."

    Well i say i'm doing pretty well here but i like to thank you all who are reading this ^^
    ithere will be moore!!!!^^

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