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    Question Spirit

    story line:Five years ago a young 13 year old girl name Mitaiashi was killed by her parents possessing a demon in her body.Mitaiashi was lonely everyone hated her presence,her face and her demon spirit.Five years after her death,a popular,stuckup girl name Tinaihari was hit by a drunk driver and was about to face death.She woke up at the hospital a week later confused and had forgot every thing.When she oke up seeing her parents She was screaming as if she was going to die.She kept picturing girl hiding alone in the darkness afraid
    of her own parents.When she calm down she made her way in to the bath room
    she looked at the mirror a saw a different girl and a demon stand next to her.See realized it was the same girl see pictured earlier.She blinked and saw only the girl in front of her.She walked out in confusing.As pictures of the other girl pop up in her head.Shes sees a man yelling"Mitaiashi Were are you.!"The she saw the girl crying in pain.Tinaihari was indeed going crazy.Can she get her life back together before Mitaiashi controls her spirit?


    well thats the story line good? please tell me!
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    Re: Spirit

    Great outline....Mitaiashi is she a Comrade of Tinaihari

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    Re: Spirit

    very good write more please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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    Talking Re: Spirit

    (yea!! thank you!)

    chapter 1:Losing it and getting it back (part one)

    Tinaihari walks out of the bath room as she holds her head as if head was hurting.She walks out and sees her parents they greet her kindly as she comes closer."Hey honey do you feel better?"Said her mom feeling a little worried.
    Tinaihari looked confused "yeah im fine..."
    She took a sit down then she started to moan in pain"err gahh"
    "Sweety are you o.k??"Her mom said while puttting her hand and her back.
    "get...away....from.....me!"Her mom was in dismay "What did you say?"
    Tears role down her face face like bullets"I told you to get away please don't hurt me!"Her mom was now getting frighten.She pushed her mom out of the away and ran into a near by corner."Whats the matter with you i'm- Tinaihari interrupted "No just go away don't kill me! please don't please!"
    What her mom didn't know was what she was seeing.
    She saw her in the corner at the same spot her mom with a blade at hand
    "demon ...you were about to kill us.Now its our turn We put up you for a long
    time now.We are done pretending that we love you.Its time to meet your faith Mitatashi!" As her mom cuts her arm as She runs for the door.In real life
    Tinahari arm was also cut but she diden't run away.
    " Get away! no please stop that hurts!"To the side her mom can see a figure next to Tinahari.The figure looked just like a girl but she had cuts on her body,her eyes were blood red and she had a blood dripping from her mouth.
    With this her mom called the doctors in dismay.When her mom went to go look at Tinahari more and more cuts and bruise started to appear to pop on her body and the more she scream.
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    (gosh my hand is cramping!!!)

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