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    this is a story abour 2 young lovers lol

    This is a story about two young lovers
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    Hero and Lizzie had nothing incoming rose Lizzie the quietness of the country
    Though hero liked the busyness of the city they never agreed
    But one day Lizzie when out and never came back.

    She met this guy in the quite field. Where she usually goes to get away for all the commotion of the palace. She goes up there to read, draw or even do a poem or two.
    But she and he had so much in coming. She asked what his name was. He replied to her my name is jiro what’s yours? Mine hmm Lizzie. LIZZIE you mean you’re the same Lizzie who married hero!! Hmmm yeah its so boring up in the place I would so much like it up here instead. Indeed my queen. STOP calling me that I never wanted to be it in the first place. Then why are you the queen then?? Well it was some time ago but my family was in a drought so they sold me off so they could get food ect but knowing me I agreed to it if it would help them. But one day hero’s dad saw me working stopped and talked to me for a while. He tried to get me out of the work place but they wouldn’t here of it.
    So he offered money 200,000,000zen axially to get me out and he know there wasn’t anyway for me to go to so he took me back to the place and that’s were I met hero.
    And I and he grew up together we when like best friends tell he asked me to marry him that’s when it all changed he became bossy and mean to everyone witch they all blame me for. But yeah that’s why I’m the queen now. So what about you? Me will I came form a poor family too my mum and dad died when I was 10 so I don’t really remember them so its ok. Hero!!!! What are you doing here!!! Trying to find you what do you think!!
    May I ask who is he. Yes his names jiro what’s it to do with you? A lot since you are my wife and you never be at home!

    Hero swings for jiro
    Jiro misses and hits hero
    “Stop!!!!” “Please”
    Hero hits the ground

    “Lizzie come run away with me lets leave this place”
    “Yeah sure come on ”

    so lizzie and jiro lived happily aver after
    Like any love story would end




    Its abit dong but like tell me what ya think anyway cos it took me and hour and a half to write it lol ^__^ ( im soooo tired lmao)

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    kudos nice storyline!!!
    maybe u try drawing manga to go with yr storyline???lol
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    haha thanks i tought that too but i cant draw the same thing 2 times and if i did the wouldnt be right haha >_<"

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    oppsy.....sry then but maybe u hire someone to draw manga out of it?lol
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    Re: this is a story abour 2 young lovers lol

    that a kool story line but i think it would be kooler wit some twists n turns like they cheat on eachother, or like something happens that threatens their relationship but it sounds kool

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    hehe yeah lol i never tought of that as long as it keeps to a pg i dont mind haha

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    Re: this is a story abour 2 young lovers lol

    I like the story and all but is that Hero from DBSK? If so he's sooo better off with U-Know! (Sorry, I'm a yaoi fan)
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    Re: this is a story abour 2 young lovers lol

    @HieisLove
    hmmmm yeah dont ask it was the frist thing came to my head >_< lol ( im lame at names)

    btw thanks every one for the comments but this was over 14 days old i think ??
    when it got a post >_< ( i thought i was lame cos i didnt get a comment lol)

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