Thread: The strength of love

hey guys how are you all!!it's been a long time since i posted something and i sure missed it!but you know how school is!i'm always busy and jessie and me are really sorry that we didn't have the opportunity to continue writing the story we started!well maybe this summer we will continue it. at the mean time today i dedicated half an hour to myself and came up with a story that i will post down here. today i will post only a part since i didn't write it all (hehe I wish)!
hope you all like it!!read it plssss!!!and leave your comments!!thanks in advance xxx!!


"Hey wait for me!"
"Oh come on we're almost there"
The sun was shining high in the clear blue sky. Georgie was running ahead on the short green grass making attention not to dirty her long beautiful dress, calling Jean to speed up his pace because their time was limited.
"I'm tired.Let's rest a bit," cried Jean trying to take a breath.
"Not until we're on top"said Georgie smiling at him with her face red from the summer heat.

Jean had no energy so he collapsed on the ground pleased to feel the freshness of the grass against his hot neck. Georgie came down bragging and jumping around him trying to pull him up but with no use. She was always full of energy when in his company. Maybe beacuse she always has to obey and stay quiet at home. She hates staying inside, always the same routine. Her father is a rich and powerful man in town and always assigned the best private teachers for her tuition, but it was for no use beacuse she hated studying and books. Georgie had a free spirit. She adored being out in the sun feeling the warm breeze in her golden curly hair. Her green, deep eyes told everything one wanted to know about her. These were the first features that Jean was attracted to.

Jean on the other hand was a poor fellow, son of a fisherman. He had three younger brothers to look after since his mother died when he was still little.He liked going to school and also wished to go to collage but this was only possible if he won a scholarship because money was lacking.

They met one cloudy day. Jean's father didn't go fishing beacuse of the bad weather and so he and his older son stuck to selling fish in the local market. Geogie did not know what to do in her free time so she decided to go to this same market with a maid to do some shopping. Her father was against this but it was her free time so she could do whatever she wanted. Even the maid was against it beacuse of the huge responsability. Because of their power a lot of people in the town envied them and did everything they could to ruin Georgie's family. This can also be bacause Georgie's father was a cruel man at times and didn't pay his houshold and other persons working for him very well.

But that day everything went ok and the local market was filled with people shouting and chattering. Georgie loved this chaos and went wondering alone when she bumped with a boy and fell to the ground with a dead fish on her lap. When their eyes met he blushed and helped her to get up putting the fish in a basket. Georgie was never shy so she didn't hesitate to ask questions.
"What are you doing?"
"aa.. I'm..em.. taking these fish to the stand," murmured Jean blushing.
"So you sell fish?"
"em.. Yes with my father."
"hihi that's nice. By the way my name is Georgie," and she stretched out a hand to shake his.
"I'm Jean, nice to meet you." he said as he wiped his hand in his trousers and shook her hand
"Me too!" giggled Georgie.
Then she heard the maid calling her to go home so they had to seperate.
"Bye" she said "see you someday". She bowed politly and went.
He was dazzed by her beauty and without moving a muscle repeated her name until a flame lit up his heart.

That's all for today i'll continue it someday hope it is soon!
pls comment
hope you enjoy it
bye bye xxxx