It's an alright story.. I guess, you should change the words around a little bit and make sure the story goes together. The moon can't be out and there be a storm that knocked the lights out. if there was a storm earlier then you need to say
"I got out of bed to turn the lights on but the storm we had earlier in the night must have knocked them out"
or something like that.... hmm.. i also noticed that you have either run-on sentences or sentence fragments, which isn't a good thing... I could probably revise this story but that's kind of rude.. so i'll just leave you with these details that will help get you on your way..


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