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    Weird Marriage (Part three)

    Ok then if you haven't read 1 or 2 I don't really care so YEAH!!!! Hmmmm....I want to marry an angel now...GO GO GO ANGELS!!!!

    The sunsets as the full moon is about to appear. Maya watches the sunset feeling down as every. She place her hands on her stomach and whispers in her head,

    "Why? Do I have to have one? I did nothing with anyone. I wonder if he will except another person in the family? What should I do? It's been only two days late."

    Maya walks out of her room hearing noises in the living room. As there was Abel ,staring at the moon, and the men , trying to get drunk loudly. Abel looks at the moon furiously speaking to himself,

    "A full moon.......These four days of the full moon are going to go worst as always...... A few more seconds he will come and I'm gone. Stupid Leba!"

    Maya steps in the living room as one of the men ,papa A, shout,

    "MAYA!!!!! How has my daughter been!

    Papa B:
    "Yeah!"

    Papa C:
    "Yeah! How have you been MAYA!"

    Abel:
    "Oh hey honey! You seem to look a bit down?"

    Maya walks slowly to them and stops. She reply to all with a smile,

    "Everyone I have an announcement!"

    Papa A:
    "She's smiling!!! First time in history seeing that!!!"

    Abel:
    "Honey why do you look a bit freaky heheheeee....."

    Maya:
    "Cause! I am three days pregnant!"

    Everyone:
    "WHAT?!!!!!"

    Papa A:
    "Who's the father!!!? It better be Abel!"

    Papa B:
    "YEAH!"

    Papa C:
    "Yeah!!!!!!!"

    Abel:
    "It's not my baby. But who's is it?"

    Maya:
    "I don't really know. But it's like I'm the virgin Mary or something."

    Abel's eyes grew big as his hand shake. Abel got up, walked passed her and said,

    "I'm going to be gone for four days or three ok!"

    Maya:
    "Are you upset at me?"

    Abel:
    "No way! Of course I'm not. I have this other reason."

    Maya:
    "Whats that?"

    Abel:
    "Reason. Thats all honey so don't worry!"

    He carefully kissed her head ad walked away as Maya watched him go. But all a sudden he fell once he touch the doorknob. Maya ran to him yelling,

    "Abel! Whats wrong?!"

    She kept yelling and once she felt his pulse it stop.

    Maya:
    "Abel! Abel! Don't die!"

    Papa A:
    "Maya please step away from him."

    Maya:
    "Why!? Don't you care that he's died cold!?"

    Papa B:
    "Please Maya do what the handsome devil says."

    Papa A:
    "Why thank you! But stop changing the subject!!!"

    Maya didn't get up at all and hold Abel in her arms. But suddenly he glowed with white as Maya's eyes went big. As the light stop she ended up in someones else arms.

    ????:
    "Hey Darling!"

    Maya:
    "Who are you?"

    ????:
    "Me? Well I'm Leba! Abel in backwards!!! And I can see your my wife! This calls for a date then!"

    Maya jumped out of his arms and yelled,

    "Who the hell is Leba!? I cried I.....Mean thought Abel was died but he disappear and this Leba guy appears!!!

    Papa C:
    "Don't worry handsome dudes I'll take this one! This is actually Abel but his opposite side. Every full moon an angel turns to their opposite side so yeah! We didn't want you to worry at all! But you cried so it was kinda funny!"

    The men started laughing as Maya's went angry. Leba went to Maya and just hugged her.

    Leba:
    "So this is how cute my wife is. Ain't I the lucky one!!!!!!! Who knew I'll get married with a cute one!"

    He rubbed his face against hers.

    Leba:
    "I can't wait when we go out! Tomorrow should be Saturday so your free!"

    Maya:
    "(Sigh) Why am I always getting the worses days every!"

    Well thats it! So YEAH! Finally!!!! I can't wait when I finish this weird marriage thing! Hope you all like it so YEAH!
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    Re: Weird Marriage (Part three)

    I really do like it!!!! ^^ I adore it!!! Love it!!! Getting better with each chapter it seems... nicey, nicey... weird too... but I guess that's why the title is "Weird marriage" ^^

    I'm waiting forward for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Weird Marriage (Part three)

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    I really do like it!!!! ^^ I adore it!!! Love it!!! Getting better with each chapter it seems... nicey, nicey... weird too... but I guess that's why the title is "Weird marriage" ^^

    I'm waiting forward for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
    Awww.... thank you Lasura Really!!!!! I really thank you for thats comment indeed!!!
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    Re: Weird Marriage (Part three)

    You are so good at this kinda things!!!I Loved It!!!!Its so good!!!!

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    Re: Weird Marriage (Part three)

    Quote Originally Posted by Little negi sensei View Post
    You are so good at this kinda things!!!I Loved It!!!!Its so good!!!!
    Yeah! Someone else likes it! (Claps with joy) Thank you for the comment really! Thank you!
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    Re: Weird Marriage (Part three)

    Really good story! i liked your others too.^^ i'm really hooked into them so i hope u keep making more!^^

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    Re: Weird Marriage (Part three)

    Quote Originally Posted by AngelFlow View Post
    Really good story! i liked your others too.^^ i'm really hooked into them so i hope u keep making more!^^
    Yeah!!!!! I feel so loved for my stories! Thank you for the comment! I really thank you!!!!
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