Thread: Wings

It sounds like a good opening so I can't waite to see where you go from here. Keep up the good ideas and you'll have no problem with finishing it.

Thanks fireandice!!!well i'l write more tomorrow cause i'm almost done with rewriting ch.1
if there are more responds by this afternoon i'll write it today...

Hmm... it sounds ok... same ol' scenario but I'm sure you can make it rock! If you can write such a prophercy (mine usually sucks), then I bet it'll be good! I'm looking forward to reading it!

sounds like an awesome addititon to a tales series
cant wait for chapter 1
its awesome renn

@Lasura:thanks!!you were the one that inspired me to write so i did thanks!!!!
@Shouichishindo:Thanks but really i've had this story in my head for a while...i got a Tales of Symphonia story right now...i might put that on too.....

nice introduction! to me it sounds like its going to be a great story i cant wait to read more!! =)

Heres the rest.


????:Wow! Master is that true? Will we be free from the evil Communion?
Master: Yes young Trinity. That is what I belive.
Trinity: Do you know who the heros are?
Master: Warriors, Trinity.
Trinity: Well do you know?
Master: This is not the time Trinity. We have more important things to
talk about.
Trinity: What is it?
Master: You know you have sword trained with me since you were little right?
Trinity: Right.
Master: Well i think its time you learn on your own. You have to prepare
for your journey in a few years time...
Trinity: What are you talking about?? What journey?
Sunddenly Trinity's Master starts to walk away.
Trinity: Wait!!!! Master please explain...

Trinity wakes with a start. She looks around. She is in her room.

Trinity: It..was a dream.

Trinity walks over to the window. She opens it.

Trinity: That dream..could it be the start of my journey...

This is the end of ch. 1 Wait til the next ch. next part won't be diolouge...i was being lazy... so 'll write some more in a few days...