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    Wings

    ummm...this is a story i've been working on... hope you like


    There is a prophecy that can save the planet Gardina and this
    is how it goes:

    Evil shall take over the peaceful planet
    Gardina and forever rule.Until eight
    brave warriors with great courage
    and determination stand from the
    people.The tie that binds them all
    together will decide if there are free
    from evil.

    Still working on it but there is more i ahve to get finish with it..but there will be more so please wait....

    'This world is trash. Cursed by the Fon Master...'

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    Re: Wings

    It sounds like a good opening so I can't waite to see where you go from here. Keep up the good ideas and you'll have no problem with finishing it.

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    Re: Wings

    Thanks fireandice!!!well i'l write more tomorrow cause i'm almost done with rewriting ch.1
    if there are more responds by this afternoon i'll write it today...

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    Re: Wings

    Hmm... it sounds ok... same ol' scenario but I'm sure you can make it rock! If you can write such a prophercy (mine usually sucks), then I bet it'll be good! I'm looking forward to reading it!

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Wings

    sounds like an awesome addititon to a tales series
    cant wait for chapter 1
    its awesome renn

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    Re: Wings

    @Lasura:thanks!!you were the one that inspired me to write so i did thanks!!!!
    @Shouichishindo:Thanks but really i've had this story in my head for a while...i got a Tales of Symphonia story right now...i might put that on too.....

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    Re: Wings

    nice introduction! to me it sounds like its going to be a great story i cant wait to read more!! =)

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    Re: Wings

    Heres the rest.


    ????:Wow! Master is that true? Will we be free from the evil Communion?
    Master: Yes young Trinity. That is what I belive.
    Trinity: Do you know who the heros are?
    Master: Warriors, Trinity.
    Trinity: Well do you know?
    Master: This is not the time Trinity. We have more important things to
    talk about.
    Trinity: What is it?
    Master: You know you have sword trained with me since you were little right?
    Trinity: Right.
    Master: Well i think its time you learn on your own. You have to prepare
    for your journey in a few years time...
    Trinity: What are you talking about?? What journey?
    Sunddenly Trinity's Master starts to walk away.
    Trinity: Wait!!!! Master please explain...

    Trinity wakes with a start. She looks around. She is in her room.

    Trinity: It..was a dream.

    Trinity walks over to the window. She opens it.

    Trinity: That dream..could it be the start of my journey...

    This is the end of ch. 1 Wait til the next ch. next part won't be diolouge...i was being lazy... so 'll write some more in a few days...
    Last edited by Renn; Sep 25, 2007 at 07:46 PM.

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