Uuuu cute gal in that picture, but I picture her totaly differently ^^ but that's the joy of reading!!! ^^
Oh and the card "death" is not that bad at all... it just means great changes in your life. 7 of swords and the tower are quite bad cards though, but I guess the conventional "death" is the best to use, otherways people wouldn't understnad the joke >.<
Still a great job!!! Can't wait to see how you continue this.
If I was writing this, I would get terribly stuck at this point and it would take a month for me to figure how to continue the stary
So I'm looking forward for the next part!!! Cheers!!! ^^