Uuuuu ^^ this part is so cool!!! I love your cute descriptions here and I love how you describe the feelings of the main character... really cool!!!
And I also like Marilyn Manson and that song rocks so bad!!!! ((S)aint is cooler though, in the devil area) And I also am using an online tarrot site!!! (The tarot there sucks though >.<)
Nice work with this one! ^^ And can I give you another advice? Try posting your story in one thread. Like this its easier for the reader to follow the story. And also mods are sometimes angry when pople make their stories over many threads.