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    Poem Battle

    I want to try out the poem battle thing. I'll accept anyone who wants to take me. It doesn't have to be just one person either. I haven't been writing lately and this will give me a reason too.

    So who accepts?

    EDIT:
    It's freestyle, rhyme, whatever...
    reward- DS will write a poem about the winner & the winner can say they bet me. ^_^
    It's open to anyone who wants to enter.

    EDIT #2:
    Ends Friday that way you have a little more time

    We will be needing judges too. ^_^
    Last edited by Darkened_Star; May 23, 2007 at 09:46 AM.

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    Re: Poem Battle

    I accept, though I don't know if I'll win, wait whats our prize? *suspicous look*

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    Re: Poem Battle

    Reward??? Um... the fact that you beat me. ^_^

    I've had poems published and won $50 before for my poems. ^_^ I need to start writing again and comps. usually help me. If you or whoever else wants to challenge me wins, I'll write a poem about you, just for you. ^_^ How's that sound?

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    Re: Poem Battle

    Aye, same here, So I'll try to come up with something ok? lol and good luck DS (Dangerous Sexy) lol nickname

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    Re: Poem Battle

    Good luck to you hellknight.

    It's still open to anyone else who wants to compete. Judging is in 3 days ^_^

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    Re: Poem Battle

    Hey, this has Flawed written all over it. I'm in might not win though.. mad writers block going on. It's sounds fun though.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Poem Battle

    "No Heart"

    I almost took your hand,
    thinking I would be safe;
    thinking all would be fine.
    But instead of my hand,
    you took my heart.

    I watched you closely,
    as you pulled it from my body.
    It beat so quickly,
    as my mind slowly fell apart.

    I couldn't understand
    why you took it and not my hand.
    I wouldn't face why
    I let you have it to begin.
    I still refuse to say it
    even now that were done.
    Especially since you fed it to
    that [witch] that set us apart.
    The [witch] you call mother,
    the cold heartless thing.

    And now without it
    I have nothing to offer.
    Worthless and broken,
    with emptyness inside.
    Now in love,
    I can't give my heart.

    Here's my entry. A love poem... Something I don't like to write much, and don't write often. But that's all I could come up with, silly love poems. I extened the date for you guys.
    Last edited by Darkened_Star; May 24, 2007 at 06:23 AM.

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    Re: Poem Battle

    The Tragic Religion

    There's blood on the alter
    Countless souls sent up to the Holy Father
    Just one more sacrifice says the Pastor
    But the pews are still full

    Slaves to a scheming, benevolent messiah
    Brainwashed people killed for an ideal
    Standing before a burning cross
    The prayers of a thousand dead spirits

    Metallic blood stains the church walls
    A doomed ship sets off for the Gates
    Wretched screams are the anthem of the damned
    The were denied, the All-Father shook his head

    Cast out and unwanted, they haunt the darkness
    Manipulated by the sympathetic shoulder of Satan
    Transformed into the new army of Hell
    Soulless monsters planning revenge

    Devoid of emotion they slash and kill the angels
    The last defense of humanity, angels fall
    They never fly again
    And the world climbs deeper into the darkness

    One last call to victory emerges
    Gabriele heads the last battalion
    Stalemate rages over the killing fields
    But finally, angels stand atop the defeated

    Oblivious the sacred battle taking place,
    Life goes on for people like it always has
    But evil always finds a way into the light
    The shadows are growing faster, faster

    Still, all the evils to be seen have been banished
    Ignorance is bliss everyone says
    Forgotten is strife and sad times
    But there's blood on the alter again

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    Here's what I pulled out of my hate guys. See what I mean about the savage writers block though? Not bad considering but.. neh. Much luck to the others peoples, and nice poem Dark.. ened.. DS? What can I call you..?

    Oh.. and after the contest could I post this in the poems section?
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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