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    Poem Battle: Vote

    We need your vote... Which poem do you like more. Please Vote... ^_^

    FlawEdmiNd's poem

    "The Tragic Religion"

    There's blood on the alter
    Countless souls sent up to the Holy Father
    Just one more sacrifice says the Pastor
    But the pews are still full

    Slaves to a scheming, benevolent messiah
    Brainwashed people killed for an ideal
    Standing before a burning cross
    The prayers of a thousand dead spirits

    Metallic blood stains the church walls
    A doomed ship sets off for the Gates
    Wretched screams are the anthem of the damned
    The were denied, the All-Father shook his head

    Cast out and unwanted, they haunt the darkness
    Manipulated by the sympathetic shoulder of Satan
    Transformed into the new army of Hell
    Soulless monsters planning revenge

    Devoid of emotion they slash and kill the angels
    The last defense of humanity, angels fall
    They never fly again
    And the world climbs deeper into the darkness

    One last call to victory emerges
    Gabriele heads the last battalion
    Stalemate rages over the killing fields
    But finally, angels stand atop the defeated

    Oblivious the sacred battle taking place,
    Life goes on for people like it always has
    But evil always finds a way into the light
    The shadows are growing faster, faster

    Still, all the evils to be seen have been banished
    Ignorance is bliss everyone says
    Forgotten is strife and sad times
    But there's blood on the alter again




    Darkened_Star's Poem

    "No Heart"

    I almost took your hand,
    thinking I would be safe;
    thinking all would be fine.
    But instead of my hand,
    you took my heart.

    I watched you closely,
    as you pulled it from my body.
    It beat so quickly,
    as my mind slowly fell apart.

    I couldn't understand
    why you took it and not my hand.
    I wouldn't face why
    I let you have it to begin.
    I still refuse to say it
    even now that were done.
    Especially since you fed it to
    that [witch] that set us apart.
    The [witch] you call mother,
    the cold heartless thing.

    And now without it
    I have nothing to offer.
    Worthless and broken,
    with emptyness inside.
    Now in love,
    I can't give my heart.

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: Poem Battle: Vote

    I like "No Heart". Its dark but touching. I really like the style both of them were done in.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Poem Battle: Vote

    Do you and I vote too DS? If we do there really isn't a choice for us. If you vote, I'll vote too. So it's up to you.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Poem Battle: Vote

    I'm good not voting. It would be sort of weird. ^_^ I thought hellknight was going to enter, but I guess not. Maybe next time. Good luck FlawEdmiNd. And Please vote everyone else. ^_^

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    Re: Poem Battle: Vote

    Aw.. Good game DS, next time I'll be the winner though hehe.
    the love you withhold is the pain you carry.

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    Re: Poem Battle: Vote

    ^_^ Thanks flawed... But no one really voted. Makes me sad a little. ^_^

    I look forward to battle'n you again. ^_^

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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