Thread: Accidentally

Originally Posted by Katayame Ren

In the wind, The leaf falls......
Under the Sun, i spot out.....
I never knew, I gone there.
Could said
accidentally......

We went there, accidentally
We meet each other, accidentaly
I love you , accidentally......

Don't cry so hard.
I won't harm.
This is what you said that day,
When we met each other.....

I think you every day.......
I want to see you every day.........
just once! Is enough.
Maybe would be accidentally...........

Just as a reference point, is this an august entry? I need to know so i can judge it accordingly.

There is remembrance in this Neo ^^ it is like remembering the day they met. A sweet poem, but it' s very simple and still confusing at times. Also "could SAY", "i fell in love with u" and "I think OF u every day" would be much better ^^ Those are just suggestions to help you with your next poem ^^ Nice work alltogether.