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    The Agony of My Heart(May Entry)

    I felt that my heart is about to burst like a fading star in the universe
    I couldn't bear the pain inside my heart,My heart is pierced with thousand spears
    All I think for now is my love

    My love,Love of my life is the happiness of my life and vanished in thin air!
    I look for her everywhere but I didn't found her
    and then her friend told me that she was taken away
    I followed them in the place were my Agonies will be revealed

    Pain inside my heart is greater than before like a surging storm in the coast of a island
    I'm afraid of losing her
    To fight for my love is what I think now
    My heart feels heavy like Atlas carrying the world
    For my love I would fight like the great Achilles of the Trojan War until no one is breathing
    Last edited by receiverofhell; May 08, 2009 at 01:04 AM.
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Agonies

    love can always be a battle and it feels like you die
    when you loose the one thats means the most the agony
    feels worse than death itself. i like this poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Agonies

    my heart and mind are fading falling it is not as pure as it use to be now it is dim and shallow theres noting inside
    Im the light that destorys the darkness

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    Re: Agonies

    Thanks Holder and Zike...I wrote this poem cause I felt depressed one time but now I'm fine!
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Agonies

    Quote Originally Posted by receiverofhell View Post
    Thanks Holder and Zike...I wrote this poem cause I felt depressed one time but now I'm fine!
    Np it was nothing good to know you are ok. send me a message
    Im the light that destorys the darkness

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    Re: Agonies

    As you know i received a message it says
    "YOUR GF IS DEAD and now I'm using her Yahoo Messenger"
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: Agonies

    cool so how is your life going so far good or bad? ------------
    Im the light that destorys the darkness

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    Re: Agonies

    This is a pretty heartfelt poem. I like it ! keep at it!

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