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May 08, 2009, 01:27 AM
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 | The Agony of My Heart(May Entry) I felt that my heart is about to burst like a fading star in the universe I couldn't bear the pain inside my heart,My heart is pierced with thousand spears All I think for now is my love My love,Love of my life is the happiness of my life and vanished in thin air! I look for her everywhere but I didn't found her and then her friend told me that she was taken away I followed them in the place were my Agonies will be revealed Pain inside my heart is greater than before like a surging storm in the coast of a island I'm afraid of losing her To fight for my love is what I think now My heart feels heavy like Atlas carrying the world For my love I would fight like the great Achilles of the Trojan War until no one is breathing
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May 08, 2009, 06:24 AM
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| Re: Agonies love can always be a battle and it feels like you die when you loose the one thats means the most the agony feels worse than death itself. i like this poem
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May 08, 2009, 06:33 AM
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| Re: Agonies my heart and mind are fading falling it is not as pure as it use to be now it is dim and shallow theres noting inside
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May 08, 2009, 06:42 AM
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| Re: Agonies Thanks Holder and Zike...I wrote this poem cause I felt depressed one time but now I'm fine!
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May 08, 2009, 07:18 AM
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| Re: Agonies Quote:
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May 16, 2009, 12:39 AM
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| Re: Agonies As you know i received a message it says "YOUR GF IS DEAD and now I'm using her Yahoo Messenger"
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May 20, 2009, 06:12 AM
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| Re: Agonies This is a pretty heartfelt poem. I like it ! keep at it! |
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