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    Agony - may entry

    If you cannot love me today,
    than you shall not love me tomorrow
    and in your mind I shall stay
    causing you only grief and sorrow.

    You have givin me no other option
    but to cause you great dismay
    because you refused my love
    so, this is what I say.

    Unto you great anguish
    and pain a'plenty,
    for my heart is broken
    because of your refusal to love me.

    Agony is what you will suffer
    and for year and years to come
    you shall have no other lover
    nor a daughter or a son.


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    Re: Agony - may entry

    wow thats pretty good for a few seconds worth of writting
    and how you you show love can cause agaony or and it be
    very heavenly it just depends on who you love or who loves you
    very nice poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Agony - may entry

    A great poem starfire1036.
    You capture the feeling very well in this poem and it only took you a few seconds to write.
    Great job on it.

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    Re: Agony - may entry

    Quote Originally Posted by SelfTorment View Post
    A great poem starfire1036.
    You capture the feeling very well in this poem and it only took you a few seconds to write.
    Great job on it.
    Indeed. Once something is entered into my brain, the words flow out like a dam that has imploded.i choose to rhyme the way i so because it is a better form of poetry. u look n ur like hey... this is a poem

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