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wow baby, that's really deep, when did you think of this?
Awaiting true love is hard and tough
being alone is proof enough
on a long road Awaiting her man
she diligently poses like no man can
after she waited years for him
she awaited for him again
knowing true love would pass her by
her man came to late for she had withered and died
i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility
wow baby, that's really deep, when did you think of this?
This is certainly posted in November and for the November entry you had to reference the given song in your poem, get inspiration from the given song. Therefore this poem can not be accepted this time. Do be careful when entring the POTM- the poem must follow the theme!
The poem itself is rather nice though, romantic, but it seemed very depressive to meI hope i dont wither and die waiting for my man XD
Wow baby... did i just saw the other side of you Lasura?
I certainly agree, it's short and the rhyme is nice.. but to me... the rhythm is not quite that good... i don't really know how to read it... >.<
This is the line which i have trouble with :
I just got stuck after "no man can" >.<she diligently poses like no man can
after she waited years for him
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