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![]() Otaku | A birthday toast. "It's my birthday this month. Or Haven't you heard. Do you even care? I used to wonder and think 'What's the point?' This silly tradition and cake? Who cares what number you have been alive? How long and far between Why is it that we thrive on such small things as years, days, hours and presents? I'm nineteen now and moving on a year too late, I think. The day has come and without song Confusion ushers in. The end for some, yet life goes on To memories cherished within."
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![]() Credits: 33,154 | Re: A birthday toast. Happy birthday? o.o But in all seriousness i can relate to this. As the years go by, my birthday just becomes another day of the year for me. I think this poem is a good one, niot because of the subject matter, but for straying from the beaten path. Remembrance is normally a positive thing, where as you have taken it and squeezed all the happiness from it. Not an easy task, and i respect that. Nice job!
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![]() Otaku | Re: A birthday toast. It actually is my brithday this week (friday actually) and it seems like everyone is moving on and leaving me behind. All of my friends are going on to new wonderful things. Even the girl of my dreams has stopped talking to me so... I managed to kill memories but that's only because as I grow older the less happy things I have to remember. Props on catching the last dose of sarcasm. P.S. I hate walking the beaten path. Unfortunately it's a lonely one. There's actually a lot behind the thought opf this piece even if I didn't manage to convey it very well.
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![]() Devoted Otaku Join Date: Feb 2008 Location: death and life again
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![]() Credits: 16,384 | Re: A birthday toast. happy birthday; the poem has is fun and intresting... sry to hear about your path that you take alone but be stong and do not kill yourself... (jokeing... but really don't kill yourself...)
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![]() Otaku | Re: A birthday toast. ahaha I'm not so weak as to kill myself. I'm much stronger then that. I'm just going through my last spell of teen angst.
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