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    A birthday toast.

    "It's my birthday this month.
    Or Haven't you heard.
    Do you even care?

    I used to wonder and think
    'What's the point?'
    This silly tradition
    and cake?

    Who cares what number
    you have been alive?
    How long and far between

    Why is it that we thrive
    on such small things
    as years, days, hours
    and presents?

    I'm nineteen now
    and moving on
    a year too late, I think.

    The day has come
    and without song
    Confusion ushers in.

    The end for some,
    yet life goes on
    To memories cherished within."

    ... and join my rebellion against time.

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    Re: A birthday toast.

    Happy birthday? o.o

    But in all seriousness i can relate to this. As the years go by, my birthday just becomes another day of the year for me. I think this poem is a good one, niot because of the subject matter, but for straying from the beaten path. Remembrance is normally a positive thing, where as you have taken it and squeezed all the happiness from it. Not an easy task, and i respect that. Nice job!
    Why hello there!

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    Re: A birthday toast.

    It actually is my brithday this week (friday actually) and it seems like everyone is moving on and leaving me behind. All of my friends are going on to new wonderful things. Even the girl of my dreams has stopped talking to me so... I managed to kill memories but that's only because as I grow older the less happy things I have to remember. Props on catching the last dose of sarcasm.

    P.S. I hate walking the beaten path. Unfortunately it's a lonely one. There's actually a lot behind the thought opf this piece even if I didn't manage to convey it very well.

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    Re: A birthday toast.

    happy birthday; the poem has is fun and intresting... sry to hear about your path that you take alone but be stong and do not kill yourself... (jokeing... but really don't kill yourself...)
    death and life are one and the same

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    Re: A birthday toast.

    ahaha I'm not so weak as to kill myself. I'm much stronger then that. I'm just going through my last spell of teen angst.

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    Re: A birthday toast.

    I know that you love your poem and you dedicate your poem for your self so happy birthda

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