Bloodshot Eyes

shadowrulz · Oct 29, 2007, 05:29 PM

Bloodshot eyes everlasting
Peircing the skin red-black biting

Smell of dieing souls
Burning white-hot coals

Cracking of whip
As the broken body trips

Hard labor killing
Dispensed spirits stilling

Blazing fire consumes
Stench of all the fumes

Sweet words of a demon
All false truths may all shun

Gradually fear does rise
Amoung the bloody skies

Striking voice of devils
Corrupting many various vessels

Piercing the skin red-black biting
And Bloodshot eyes
Everlasting

iluvmyloser · Oct 29, 2007, 05:54 PM

wow good use of color for the poem LMAO LOL j/p^-^ good work.Very scary though. It brought shrills up my spine LOL keep it ↑

!AngelicDemon201092 · Oct 29, 2007, 07:29 PM

Once again, spectacular. ^-^ You really have a nack for making people scared or shiver. ^-^ Then again.. it is that time of month and everyone is taking extra caution. Jk... Great Job shadow. ^-^ Keep it up.

Oct 29, 2007, 05:29 PM	#1 (permalink)
shadowrulz Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: the sign says "in a black hole". Is that even possible?!?! Posts: 371 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 6,560	Bloodshot Eyes Bloodshot eyes everlasting Peircing the skin red-black biting Smell of dieing souls Burning white-hot coals Cracking of whip As the broken body trips Hard labor killing Dispensed spirits stilling Blazing fire consumes Stench of all the fumes Sweet words of a demon All false truths may all shun Gradually fear does rise Amoung the bloody skies Striking voice of devils Corrupting many various vessels Piercing the skin red-black biting And Bloodshot eyes Everlasting __________________ CLICK GOODBYE A.O. Last edited by shadowrulz; Oct 29, 2007 at 05:57 PM.
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!AngelicDemon201092 Banned Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: Lindsborg Posts: 155 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 6,221	Re: Bloodshot Eyes Once again, spectacular. ^-^ You really have a nack for making people scared or shiver. ^-^ Then again.. it is that time of month and everyone is taking extra caution. Jk... Great Job shadow. ^-^ Keep it up.
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