Oh man.....I have to say that the words in this poem are amazing
especially the last line....I found it very amusing
Great job!!!!!!!!!
GET LOOSE
Marijuana smoke...
...From that sticky, seedless, "Purp".
French inhale. Don't choke.
Swallow, for a smoky burp.
How about some juice to slurp?
THE JUICE
Tall can. Forty Ounce.
Mad Dog wine, or Irish Rose?
Two for one sale! Better pounce!
Alcholic? Know one knows...
Is that where your money goes?
THE NOOSE
Methamphetamine.
Powdered cocaine, or the rock.
Things your eyes have seen.
But you have no teeth to talk
GoOd THiNG ReHaB's dOwN THe bLOcK!
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***Yeah... this was hard for me. And the outcome of my Tanka is... Interesting to the least.
Last edited by Peach_follows; Nov 28, 2007 at 06:43 PM.
... Not Ever Again...
Oh man.....I have to say that the words in this poem are amazing
especially the last line....I found it very amusing
Great job!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
Lol, I loved it Peach !
Haha, drugs. I mean, what else is there to write about?
Just glad it wasn't about love. I believe ALL the entries have been about love - until now! =)
OOh, that might work towards you!
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