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Old Dec 15, 2008, 11:11 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Change- Decembers entry.

Myself, an acrostic.


Changing more with every day
Having to cope with the stress and the pain
Absently picking away at already
Negative sensibility.
Tell me how one deals when all
Allotted mind space is gone to
Love, lost and found to me.

Belonging has always been too important
Rationality escapes when it comes
And calls loud and clear.
Never was I sure till I found you.
Denying your effects only makes me
Negotiate even murkier waters in my boat
Everything is so much more clear while love
Reels me in closer and near.

Charging passions ignighting a
Hidden heat from below
Aiding in a loss of inhabition
Negating rational sensabilities
Tantalizing little tickles
Against the neck and ears just a
Little further now, that's it, there.

Bring it all, and give it to me
Ravaging mind body and soul
Alienate my mind, just this one single time.
Needy body calling to you
Down here where passions effects
Never were more clear then now
Everything coming together now, just for
Release.

Challenges of everyday life
Have a notorious habit of encroaching
Against fragile sensibilities
Now more than ever leaving
Trails of static dust settling
Along lines of broken thought
Leaving me clueless once again

But not before making sure I
Really know how minuscule I
Am in the scheme of here and
Now. Even though I feel cosmic light
Denying me warmth and clarity
Never again will hope hold me down
Even if I slip and fall I'll keep getting up again
Reeling wildly far and away, losing me again.
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She's always trying not to cry.
But I can see the demons in her eyes.
She's always trying not to yell.
But you see to her, she's trapped in hell.

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Re: Change- Decembers entry.

The last verse is awesome. A 10 for your, dude. Thanks for write it.
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Re: Change- Decembers entry.

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The last verse is awesome. A 10 for your, dude. Thanks for write it.
Thanks. THat's one of my favorites as well. I appreciate the positive feed back. Woohoo.
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