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    Change- Decembers entry.

    Myself, an acrostic.


    Changing more with every day
    Having to cope with the stress and the pain
    Absently picking away at already
    Negative sensibility.
    Tell me how one deals when all
    Allotted mind space is gone to
    Love, lost and found to me.

    Belonging has always been too important
    Rationality escapes when it comes
    And calls loud and clear.
    Never was I sure till I found you.
    Denying your effects only makes me
    Negotiate even murkier waters in my boat
    Everything is so much more clear while love
    Reels me in closer and near.

    Charging passions ignighting a
    Hidden heat from below
    Aiding in a loss of inhabition
    Negating rational sensabilities
    Tantalizing little tickles
    Against the neck and ears just a
    Little further now, that's it, there.

    Bring it all, and give it to me
    Ravaging mind body and soul
    Alienate my mind, just this one single time.
    Needy body calling to you
    Down here where passions effects
    Never were more clear then now
    Everything coming together now, just for
    Release.

    Challenges of everyday life
    Have a notorious habit of encroaching
    Against fragile sensibilities
    Now more than ever leaving
    Trails of static dust settling
    Along lines of broken thought
    Leaving me clueless once again

    But not before making sure I
    Really know how minuscule I
    Am in the scheme of here and
    Now. Even though I feel cosmic light
    Denying me warmth and clarity
    Never again will hope hold me down
    Even if I slip and fall I'll keep getting up again
    Reeling wildly far and away, losing me again.
    Last edited by bratling; Dec 21, 2008 at 10:02 AM. Reason: I did better.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Re: Change- Decembers entry.

    The last verse is awesome. A 10 for your, dude. Thanks for write it.

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    Re: Change- Decembers entry.

    Quote Originally Posted by Heavenhanced View Post
    The last verse is awesome. A 10 for your, dude. Thanks for write it.
    Thanks. THat's one of my favorites as well. I appreciate the positive feed back. Woohoo.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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