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![]() | Change- Decembers entry. Myself, an acrostic. Changing more with every day Having to cope with the stress and the pain Absently picking away at already Negative sensibility. Tell me how one deals when all Allotted mind space is gone to Love, lost and found to me. Belonging has always been too important Rationality escapes when it comes And calls loud and clear. Never was I sure till I found you. Denying your effects only makes me Negotiate even murkier waters in my boat Everything is so much more clear while love Reels me in closer and near. Charging passions ignighting a Hidden heat from below Aiding in a loss of inhabition Negating rational sensabilities Tantalizing little tickles Against the neck and ears just a Little further now, that's it, there. Bring it all, and give it to me Ravaging mind body and soul Alienate my mind, just this one single time. Needy body calling to you Down here where passions effects Never were more clear then now Everything coming together now, just for Release. Challenges of everyday life Have a notorious habit of encroaching Against fragile sensibilities Now more than ever leaving Trails of static dust settling Along lines of broken thought Leaving me clueless once again But not before making sure I Really know how minuscule I Am in the scheme of here and Now. Even though I feel cosmic light Denying me warmth and clarity Never again will hope hold me down Even if I slip and fall I'll keep getting up again Reeling wildly far and away, losing me again.
__________________ She's always trying not to cry. But I can see the demons in her eyes. She's always trying not to yell. But you see to her, she's trapped in hell. Last edited by bratling; Dec 21, 2008 at 10:02 AM. Reason: I did better. |
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![]() | Re: Change- Decembers entry. Thanks. THat's one of my favorites as well. I appreciate the positive feed back. Woohoo.
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