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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Bergen County, NJ
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 Credits: 6,148 | Choice Falling into Darkness Rising into light I'll never leave This endless plight To help my neighbor To strike him down In the middle I just might drown Looking up at Heaven Glaring down at Hell Both of them enchant me. Their everlasting spell To foster peace To go to war Both of them seem So tempting to implore Praising generosity Spreading dreadful hate Will I be a godly man Or Evil Incarnate? Good chi and bad Yang and Yin No matter the choices I'll never win This is my POTM submission. Please tell me what you thought of it.
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Aug 06, 2007, 07:55 PM
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Credits: 10,645 | Re: Choice Wow... this is great!. No one has ever made the choice between good and evil seem so thoughtful and complex to me before... I usually never sway. Im usually good or bad. But When I read this, I felt torn with you. Then end enhanced it in my opinion. Like to say "damned if you do, damned if you don't". Almost as if you wanted to walk away from the decision all together.
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Aug 07, 2007, 05:12 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Bergen County, NJ
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Credits: 6,148 | Re: Choice Thanks for your comment, Peach.  Yeah, I think i will keep the last stanza. It does give the poem some finality.
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Aug 09, 2007, 12:25 PM
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Credits: 10,227 | Re: Choice wow good poem very good description of words it really shows ur emotions good work keep it up ♥~*The Princess*~♥
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