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Reply With QuoteGood job, an interesting concept, and well thought out. You also kept it to the point so I give you proper respects for that.
A Peach_follows and Shippo101 Production.
I.
Naïve eyes flaunt there their freedom
While Steel bars block mine.
Who am I to want to be them?
A shameless beast trapped in their twine.
Taken from my throne to please simple beings.
Degraded am I, a King no more.
Being fed everyday is more lowly then it seems
Like this who will want to hear my roar?
II.
Observe the beauty all around.
But, know these creatures are relentless.
Waiting just to gain some ground.
Break free from their iron fences.
Yearning eyes, thirst for bloodshed.
A danger meant to be contained.
Wild spirits must be broken.
The strength of lions, must be tamed.
Shippo is determined to become a lvl higherI'm a solider of Pen and Paper!<3 Atomik_Sprout <3
Good job, an interesting concept, and well thought out. You also kept it to the point so I give you proper respects for that.
Very nice! I'm rather impressed, I must say. You stayed on topic, delivered it nicely and it was rather well written. Mad props!
Shippo101 (Sep 02, 2009)
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