Confined Kings, Contained Beasts

Shippo101 · Sep 02, 2009, 07:12 AM

A Peach_follows and Shippo101 Production.

I.
Naïve eyes flaunt there their freedom
While Steel bars block mine.
Who am I to want to be them?
A shameless beast trapped in their twine.

Taken from my throne to please simple beings.
Degraded am I, a King no more.
Being fed everyday is more lowly then it seems
Like this who will want to hear my roar?

II.
Observe the beauty all around.
But, know these creatures are relentless.
Waiting just to gain some ground.
Break free from their iron fences.

Yearning eyes, thirst for bloodshed.
A danger meant to be contained.
Wild spirits must be broken.
The strength of lions, must be tamed.

beast · Sep 02, 2009, 08:17 AM

Good job, an interesting concept, and well thought out. You also kept it to the point so I give you proper respects for that.

*atomik_sprout* · Sep 02, 2009, 03:56 PM

Very nice! I'm rather impressed, I must say. You stayed on topic, delivered it nicely and it was rather well written. Mad props!

Sep 02, 2009, 07:12 AM	#1 (permalink)
Shippo101 Otaku Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In my own imagination Posts: 268 Thanks: 32 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts	Confined Kings, Contained Beasts A Peach_follows and Shippo101 Production. I. Naïve eyes flaunt there their freedom While Steel bars block mine. Who am I to want to be them? A shameless beast trapped in their twine. Taken from my throne to please simple beings. Degraded am I, a King no more. Being fed everyday is more lowly then it seems Like this who will want to hear my roar? II. Observe the beauty all around. But, know these creatures are relentless. Waiting just to gain some ground. Break free from their iron fences. Yearning eyes, thirst for bloodshed. A danger meant to be contained. Wild spirits must be broken. The strength of lions, must be tamed. __________________ Big Thanks To Sazzy-chan! (best Siggy ever!)
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Sep 02, 2009, 08:17 AM	#2 (permalink)
beast Devoted Otaku Join Date: Sep 2008 Location: Cuba Posts: 870 Thanks: 273 Thanked 78 Times in 74 Posts	Re: Confined Kings, Contained Beasts Good job, an interesting concept, and well thought out. You also kept it to the point so I give you proper respects for that.
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atomik_sprout I love you J-Frog! Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: Minneapolis, MN Posts: 2,365 Thanks: 126 Thanked 135 Times in 116 Posts	Re: Confined Kings, Contained Beasts Very nice! I'm rather impressed, I must say. You stayed on topic, delivered it nicely and it was rather well written. Mad props! __________________
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