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    Crack of the Whip (June Entry)

    One man's monstrosity is another one's pain
    Two different colors that should be the same

    The lighter man laughing while the darker one fears
    the crack of the whip, drowning in tears

    What is it inside us that takes on this role?
    Can this kind of being truly have its own soul?

    Normality broken with a new type of skin
    Can show our true nature, the scared beast within

    While many just see a dark man being whipped
    I'm seeing the morals of our kind be stripped

    We fail to take notice, we fail to just see
    the dark man is no different from you or me

    If this is the case, then we all are the same
    But most think we aren't, so who's really to blame?
    Why hello there!

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    Re: Crack of the Whip (June Entry)

    i enjoyed it, and found the interesting symbolics suggesting slavery, or imprisonment, correct? if im wrong, correct me. keep up the work, i hope to see more from you, you have definite talent.
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    Re: Crack of the Whip (June Entry)

    Quote Originally Posted by kira666 View Post
    i enjoyed it, and found the interesting symbolics suggesting slavery, or imprisonment, correct? if im wrong, correct me. keep up the work, i hope to see more from you, you have definite talent.
    yes, i was going for slavery because i saw this as the biggest blow to human morality and our code of ethics. apparently we arent as equal as everyone wants to believe, and i set out to portray that in the form of two men of different color
    Why hello there!

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