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    Creatures of the Night (October's entry)

    Scents fragrance light breezes,
    Hunger burns deep within.
    Predatory eyes stalking prey,
    Impatience spawn deadly mistakes.

    Attacks with teeth and nails,
    Strength and speed victim evades.
    Hunter becomes hunted.
    Powers and fangs appear,
    Evident scent of fear.

    Fur rustles under hot breath,
    Carnal desires ignite.
    Warring parties take notice,
    Two creatures unite.

    Battle for dominance ensues.
    Nails sink into flesh,
    Fangs drag across fur,
    Crimson emerges,
    Breathing accelerates.

    Low growls accentuate,
    Bodies tense in expectation.
    Fangs deeply embed, a howl resonates,
    Complacent silence enfolds.

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    Re: Creatures of the Night (October's entry)

    that's a great poem, very dark, and deffinently suits the title, pleas post more. ^^

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    Re: Creatures of the Night (October's entry)

    Wow Fai!!! That was so amazing and beautiful!! This so suited the theme for this months contest!! Your words spoke with darkness and heat, it was thrilling to read!! These are my thoughts, and once again this was lovely to read! X3
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